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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional update! Geet chose Maan! Superbly written! Maan named the house as he knew abt her dreams! Geet overwhelmed! Update soon! Happy V Day!



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Maan will fulfill all her dreams😳

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Unreserved my first spot ...finally 😳

Tane maaarna bandh kar de abhi 😒

THAP THAP THAP
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Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Unreserved my first spot ...finally 😳


Tane maaarna bandh kar de abhi 😒

THAP THAP THAP



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Mazaa aya mazaa aya 🥳


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Fiannly ILU ho gaya
Valentines Day tha na😳

Loved it hetz...both are in pain but now they are together rather than away n will fight for each other

I kind of expected that jungle ke beech me ghar ka koi to significance hoga

Telepathy😉

loved how maan is making her dreams come true😳

Woh Maan hein na
Geet ka Maan😎
alag che😆

waiting for the shaadi n ahem ahem aheam.//...wo mereko chahiye samjhi😡 no lanterns puhhleeejjeee🥺

Lets see

Wonder why Geet ki family is not looking for her😡😡😡
Handa's POV will come out soon




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Posted: 12 years ago




A big Thank you
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It truly means a lot to me
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Part 10




Gazing at my mehendi adorned hands in bright moonlight I sat on the swing, resting my head on his chest while he held me by my waist in the small verandah over looking the river flowing alongside with soothing music made by the waterfall. We sat there drinking the virgin beauty of nature with a sense of calm and contentment enveloping us.

Babaji had suddenly replaced all my miseries with loads of happiness, yesterday night I was deserted, lost, dejected, and walking away from life towards a colourless and dark future and today here I am in my dream house, in the arms of my Love, waiting for a new day, new beginning for a colourful life ahead full of love and happiness.

Surprises doesn't seem to end today , the reality of our wedding and our dream house is yet to sink in and Maan had another surprise planned for me. I was shocked as well as surprised when the driver arrived with 'shagun ki mehendi' sent by Dadima. Of course Maan had already informed her about our wedding.

Maan had himself applied mehendi on my hands and legs.He was fulfilling all my dreams.I had never thought I could ever experience these moments in my life.

My so called marriage was just a formality, no ceremonies, no customs, no rituals just plain wedding in the confines of Handa Haveli. I don't even remember it nor want to ever. Now when I look back at it, it seems as if even Babaji hadn't blessed that marriage so it broke for good and now finally I am with my TRUE SOULMATE. Maybe the pain that we had experienced was the indication of the forthcoming happiness in our lives.

This time our bond is even more stronger to withstand all odds and hurdles in future...

"Maan kal Dadima kab tak aayengi"? I asked him for the nth time to which he just smiled keeping his eyes closed. I was growing impatient and he was enjoying my plight. Earlier in late evening I had spoken to Dadima who had conveniently put all my fears to rest of Khurana family accepting Me, a Handa family daughter in their family.

She had wholeheartedly welcomed me and blessed me too and also disclosed Maan's well guarded surprise that she will attend our wedding to bless us the next day. I smiled remembering Maan's frowning face just like a child whose prank had misfired. But the feeling that I would now have a family of my own who have accepted me with open arms was truly overwelhming.

We will start afresh letting go our painful past and moving on towards a blissful future...

"Maan, kya sab aayenge hamaari shaadi mein"? I tried my luck yet again but this time he stiffened and the smirk was gone at the mention of 'sab' and I knew I had unknowingly hit onto his raw nerve but now was the time to tie up all loose ends before moving ahead.

I spoke with determination, "Maan mein chahti hoon ke hamaari shaadi mein sab aaye, kya aap meri yeh khwaish bhi poori karenge"? "Please Maan I want our whole family to be a part and bless us on our wedding". He got up abruptly but before he could disagree I continued.


"Maan jab hum ek nayi shuruaat kar rahe hein to aap bhi puraani baaton ko bhoola dijiye na". He clenched his fists tight. I could see him controlling his temper, I knew he didn't want to say something that would hurt me, but today I had to push him for that one initiative for OUR BETTER TOMORROW...

"Maan", I tried to speak only to be cut off this time by his commanding voice.


"Bas Geet ek aur shabd nahi, it is impossible! Yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta, samjhi tum". He concluded leaving no room, but I can't give up, not today.


"Kyun nahin ho sakta. Boliye Maan jis baat ko hue saalon beet gaye usse kyun aap, khud ko aur apne parivaar ko takleef de rahe hein. Jab aap ne aage badh ne ka faisla kar hi liya hein to kyun nahi peechli baatein ko bhool jaate aap".

"Tum kuch nahi jaanti ke kya baat hui thi tab".

"Mein sab jaanti hoon". He looked at me shocked with lots of questions in his eyes.

And I continued," Jab aap Annie ki birthday bhool gaye the tab usne rote hue sab bataya tha mujhe yahi issi Dehradun ki trip mein, ke kyun aap rishton se, shaadi se bhaagtein hein".

"Sab kuch jaan ne ke baad bhi tum chahti hon ke"...

"Haan". I added not letting him finish his sentence. "Kyun ki hum insaan hein Maan galtiyaan ho jaati hein humse aur hum apni galtiyon se hi seekhte hein. Aapke Papa se bhi galti hui woh bhi anjaane mein, ya phir yeh kahiye ke unki sirf yeh galti thi ke unhone kissi ki baat pe vishwas kiya".

"Aur uss vishwas ne hamaara ghar tod diya, meri Maa ko tod diya, uske vishwas ko tod diya aur phir usse majboor kiya samjhauta karne ko aur tum chahti hon ke mein unhe maaf kar doon".He turned his back to me.


"Maan aap sab galat samaj rahe hein". I tried to hold him but he turned abruptly and held me by my arms intimidating me.

"Mein galat samaj raha hoon, meine apni Maa ko rote hue dekha tha Geet, tab zyaada kuch samaj nahi aata tha lekin phir bhi itna jaanta tha ke mere Dad ne unhe takleef pohuchayi thi. Hum sab ghar chod ke jaanewale the phir Dadaji ne uss waqt sab kuch handle kar diya aur Maa ne Dad ko maaf kar diya".


He walked away , he was pained I had rubbed into his old wounds I wanted to hold him, hug him but my thoughts broke when he spoke again.


"Mein kabhi nahi bhool sakta aur naa hi unn logo ko maaf karunga! Dad ne sab barbaad kar diya aur Maa kamzor pad gayi aur phir unhe maaf bhi kar diya". He walked up to me holding me yet again harshly his fingers digging in my skin but more than that pain, his broken voice was hurting me.

"Kaise woh unhe maaf kar sakti hein, kaise woh unhe apnaa sakti hein Geet bolo jawaab do"?

"Jaise aap ne mujhe apnaya aur meine aap ko maaf kiya"!

"Geet"... He at once left me and tried to walk away turning his back to me. He was hurt. I had hurt him.

I turned him to me holding him firmly again saying, "Maan aapke sawaal mein hi aap ka jawaab hein, mein jaanti hoon ke aap ko meri baat se bahot takleef pohuchi hein, par yehi sach hein".


" Aap ne to mujhe jaante hue choda tha kyun ke aap kamzor nahi padna chahte the, to kaayde se mujhe aap ko maaf nahi karna chahiye tha hein na".


" Par meine kiya, kyun ki mein aap se pyar karti hoon aur aap ke bina nahi reh sakti hoon". His face was blank but I knew he was listening to me so I continued.

"Hamaara rishta to kuch mulaakaaton ka tha, ek anjaani aur benaam dor se juda tha phir bhi hum ek dusre se ke bina nahi reh paaye na, to phir unka rishta to shaadi ka tha, itne saalon ka tha to aunty itni aasaani se kaise tod deti".

"Jab uncle ne anjaane mein bhi unhe dhoka nahi diya to kaise unhe sazaa deti , kyun sazaa deti boliye Maan"? He was quite looking down to the ground. But I can't give up now.

"Mujhe bhi phasaya gaya tha iss shaadi mein to kyun apna rahe hein aap mujhe, mein ek divorcee hoon"... This time his words stopped me, I had angered him.

"Geet tum mein unn mein farak hein".

"Koi farak nahi hein Maan, aap ke Papa ko bhi phasaya gay tha aur mujhe bhi. Unhone to anjaane mein bhi aap ki Maa ko dhoka nahi diya aur mujhe Babaji ne aur aap ke pyaar ne bacchaye rakha".


"Maan hum tab tak kissi aur ke dard aur takleef ka ehsaas nahi laga sakte jab tak ke hum khud usse mahsoos na kare.Waqt aur haalaat chahe alag ho par baat to wohi hein".


"Mein aap se poochti hoon agar mere aur mere pati ke beech...to kya aap mujhe." He hauled me to him harshly his expressions were scaring me.

"Geet tum mere baarein mein aisa kaise soch sakti hon, meri soch itni ouchi (low) nahin hein".

"MEIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON"!!!!!! He declared.

"AUR AUNTY UNCLE SE"!!!!!! Gathering all my strength. I finished.

Maan just looked at me with a piercing gaze I knew I had hit on the right nerve. He let go of me and walked away.

Maybe this reality check was too much for him. And it will take sometime for him to come up to terms with this fact.

He needed time!!!!!






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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Note
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Okay here is glimpse to Maan's past his parents had a troubled marriage and that being a main reason why Maan didn't believe in marriage.

I have tried my best to so that Maaneet convo and Geet's reasoning makes sense. I hope I could bring out the similarity in their situations to an extent.

And have not let U'll down.


Do let me know what U all feel


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
Dey both confessed...
Waiting for past to reveal...

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