ArHi FF:5:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Lin
I am sooo sorry fr not commenting fr so long :(((( war to say just gt caught in sum family affairs...but I haven't missed reading them though ;))) luvd d updats dear...they were all awesome not only arnav khushi but payal akash, lav-aman...all the characters were shown so brilliantly :D I am in love with this ff of urs...n I stalk it everyday just to see if u have updated even wen u send me poms fr updates ;)
Anyway brilliant story keep it up...will wait fr sum more arnav-khushi scenes :D
Luv,
Shaz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba Vey...!
Beautiful update! U know...through this update u have raised our hopes high...! temme temme is it time in Arashia to witness all these scenes in our Arashia way offcourse? Is it? Is it? R we gonna see Khushi have her necklace being returned? tellz...tellz...? m too excited!


or maybe anything close to just this? -



and the way u talked about her smile Undoing his anger...the way u beautifully described it...through the following lines...

Lord Arnav shot a glare at Kushi but his frown froze on seeing the smile on her face. He felt as though someone had pricked him in the inside but there was no pain. And if it did pain, he could take the pain again and he wanted to.

She smiled...for me...

i guess i have got the exact picture tht may appear a little worth of those lines...here we go-



about Lady La...it really hurts now...to see her farewell nearing...over the time...we have really gone closer to her as well...i especially loved her bonding with Khushi...it was a really charming to see them sharing moments.
I wish she does not depart at all...and remain happy as well. she's been a rea;;y warm lady. m gonna miss her. 😭


And lastly...u do know..how to scare us all...han...! Just a simple line...and we r all alert now for the upcoming storm...


it gives a terryfying effect...but still bring it on!!! 😉 WE R ALL SET TO WITNESS IT! 😊

P.S. where's Gen. Shyam? his absence is even more frightening? i wonder what is he upto? or is he out for his transformation? *scary*

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Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope u r getting well dear.
The update was fabulous.What is this if not love which makes u smile in seeing the smile on the other's face.
Dreading the approaching storm:(

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Posted: 12 years ago
Date: 16th Feb 2013

Dearest Linny,

H0w are y0u? I h0pe y0u are healthy dear. Heard y0u are ill. W0uld surely pray f0r y0ur speedy rec0very. L00king f0rward f0r y0ur hearty talks s00n. Take care.

Y0urs faithfully,
Priyanka

P.S Y0u want t0 kill me d0nt y0u? First y0u make them dance. N0w y0u make her smile f0r him. F0rget that. Y0u make HIM grin. GRIN.
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOHOOO

JUST SEE WHO GOT THE 1ST PLACE


🥳


Awesome Update simply loved it...Loved the conversation Akash and Payal had... where the former was true in expressing his true desire for Payal and letting her know what place he wants her to be in his life while the later wanted the same but is hesitant coz the reality of life is infront of her eyes and her realistic nature is forbidding her to see the dreams which for now she believes are not meant for her eyes...parts I loved in the update

While Payal busied in marveling the garden, Lord Akash admired the woman beside him, how her eyes sparkled through the mask, as she took in all that was around her.

"Yes," he replied in a low voice, "Beautiful, indeed."

Payal smiled at this response and looked up at him gratefully only to have her smile slip when she realized what he had meant. Blushing, she looked away instantly and tried to withdraw her hand from his hold.

How cute she meant the surroundings and he meant her


She opened her eyes and stared at the night sky, that was devoid of stars, "It looks like a storm is coming, we must go in." And yet, somewhere she longed to remain here, alone with him.


She opened her eyes and stared at the night sky, that was devoid of stars, "It looks like a storm is coming, we must go in." And yet, somewhere she longed to remain here, alone with him.

she is having a fight between her heart and mind

He neared closer to her, lifted her hand, kissed its back, earning a light gasp from her, and then whispered in her ear, "Will you, Miss Payal Gupta do me the honour of being my-"

He clearly showed that he wanted her to be his rightful wife and he didnt hesitate for a second 👏

Payal frowned at him, "Discard who you really are and distress your parents over me?"

yes she wont appreciate it and neither would any girl

A teardrop broke its fortitude and slid down her mask and down her pale cheek, "To have fallen in love with a man I can never dream of belonging to is not only a folly on my part but a possible scar on my father's name."

Its her Father's name which worry her more aww how sweet of a daughter she is...

"You shall have me, my love, for you can belong to my heart alone," he told her, taking her hands in his.


"My birth cannot hamper with my love for you," he promised her, and leaned towards her face.


She looked away, "And I cannot let my love hurt my parents or yours in any way." She looked at him, her tear-filled gaze firm, and he knew she meant it when she said, "Unless our parents whole-heartedly bless our desire to unite, I shall not answer to the proposal you made to me tonight."

Lord Akash's gaze was equally determined when he replied, "Then we shall wait no further and end this torment of your heart and mine this very night itself."

so thats what the storm meant means a part of storm with a very small intensity thats when Akash will confess his feelings to Maami ji and she will do the things she is famous of... lolz

P.S. I just noted that I loved each part and it was so hard for me to be very selective...

overall it was a superb update once again


Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome updatee...
akash is really a daring and dasing lord in this am liked him..
and payal as usual a promising daughter to her parents ...
update soon , thnx 4 pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
cant believe im on the first page.
every update cannot have arshi a chronicle has to pay equal attention to other characters too
but we're the ones who are hooked to our arshi
when will they vent their feelings
even in their frustration
brilliant as usual
when u write, i visualise - lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
A QUIL...THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL

LORD AKAASH N MISS PAYAL FEELING THE TORMENT

FEELING THE CHAINS THAT BOUND THEIR HEARTS

THE LOVE FOR THE PARENTS

THE GUILT TO GO AGAINST THEM

IT WAS SO WELL WRITTEN

THE TORMENT SHALL END TONIGHT

HOPE IN POSITIVE- ITY

LOVE THRILLS BUT ITS SPEED OFTEN KILLS

THANKS FOR THE PM

GET THE STRENGTH BACK LADY



KKKA






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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiufl update..yet agn!

so..finally Lord Akash proposed Paayal...Wow! does tht mean we hv this scene upcoming anytime soon?


ahh...would love to see the 1st Lordy and Khushi working together to bring the other duo together...OHHH WOW!! this is gonna b so so exciting! I M SO THRILLED!!!


Payal and Lord Akash will offcourse look great together...and wow...Akash is so ready to face his Parents instantly...despite knowing the fact tht his mother doesn't approove her as such. It's really gonna b amazing to see them come together.



wow...gladly waiting to see what happens next in their matters too!

what i really wonder about is...does payal talking of the storm symbolize something? I wonder if tht's so?

Gotta keep all eyes and ears open...right Lin? 😉

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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