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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

*clapping hands gleefully*


That was so good to read!
I loved the way you took the story and moulded into something so calm and sweet like this. I want read more, coz now am Greedy! And you are responsible for it what-so-ever!!

And coming to you posting something like your work for the first time here... Is it the first time you wrote anything?

There. She revealed it and has felt some burden off of her shoulders. But there is still the engagement!! 😲

And what the?! Najma's appearance? 🤣 Yay!! Now I seriously want to see the priceless looks on the two's faces!!! What a sight it will be! Promise me that you'll make the next part/chapter more interesting with a pinch of humour in it?

Annie



Thankk youuu soo much. :D Your comments are really encouraging.
I may have written some stuff here and there, but nothing like a proper story or anything. Guess Qubool Hai inspired me. 😃
Yes,there is still the engagement😉 And yep,the next chapter will be more humorous. They'll have to deal with alot of questions,and some akwardness. 😆

-Rax.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: havokhotline

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN HIDING FOR SO LONG?

:O
Continue this, woman. Or I will make you pay.
*tries to sound evil*
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This was just EPIC! Please continue, please please! *puppy eyes*



Haha,I will.😊
Thank you sooo much. This is really nice of you. :D

-Rax.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a great start. Would love to see a continuation 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: rm23



Ehhh,really sorry...but what does res mean?


Hahahaha... "res" means reserved. We members have that small habit of reserving our comments to edit them later with our original comment on the particular topic, be it a discussion or any OS/SS/FF! :D Hope this helps!😳

Annie
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: rm23



Thankk youuu soo much. :D Your comments are really encouraging.
I may have written some stuff here and there, but nothing like a proper story or anything. Guess Qubool Hai inspired me. 😃
Yes,there is still the engagement😉 And yep,the next chapter will be more humorous. They'll have to deal with alot of questions,and some akwardness. 😆

-Rax.


Aww... Gee, thanks! :D And it's my pleasure to comment! :D😆
Achcha? Well, it is a good attempt, I must say. Don't worry. You'll do great as you write more.
Yesh!! Hee hee... *giggling* Now I want to read more!!! Please update ASAP!!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Please please please continue... This was an excellent start... Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
omg really nice plzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
its really good...do continue,waiting for an update!!

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