Darna Mana Hai.. pt. 27 pg. 41 Confession

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Part 1

All of the students of Maurya were in the lobby.

Jumbo- Students, the buses have arrived. Aap sab bahar ja ke apna luggage bus mein rakh sakte hain, aur phir eik eik kar ke buses ko board karna shuru kar sakte hain.

After Jumbo announced that the buses had arrived, everyone picked up their bags and went outside. The students of Maurya were going to Shimla. Jumbo felt that since all of the students had once gone to Goa for a summer camp, they should go to a colder area like Shimla as a break. Everyone was really excited. Once the luggage was loaded onto the buses, all of the students boarded on. Yuvi-Sid, Ranveer-Varun, Tia-Meher, Latty-Pri, and Ashi-Vrinda were sitting together.

Sid- Guys, kyun na hum iss trip ko rocking banaayein?

Ashi- Sid, hum Shimla jaa rahe hain. Iss se zyaada rocking kya ho sakta hai dodo???

Sid- I mean ki bus ride ko rocking banaate hain.

Tia- Idea toh achha hai, lekin kaise?

Sid- Tum log kyun nahi kuch sing karte.

Meher- Kaun?

Sid- REMIX! Aur kaun?

Ashi,Yuvi,Tia,Ranveer- HUM???

Sid- Remix mein aur kaun hai?

Yuvi- Dude, get a life. Hum koi bus wus pe perform nahi karne waale.

Sid- Come on guys.

Ranveer- Banaa, hum kaise gaa sakte hain?

Sid- Jaise tum log hamesha karte ho.

Tia- No stage Sid.

Ashi- Stage??? Hello cuckoo!!! NO MUSIC!!!! Duh-uh!!!

Sid- Chill. Yuvi apna guitar saath laaya hai. Right dude?

Yuvi- Haan, layaa toh hoon.

Sid- Then? Come on guys. (yelling out to everyone else on the bus) Guys inhe convince karne mein help karo.

All- Please, please. Come on guys. REMIX, REMIX, REMIX, REMIX!!!!

Yuvi- Okay okay okay. (to Ashi, Ranveer, and Tia) Come on guys.

All- YAY!!!!!!!! Whoo hoo!!!!

All 10 put hands in and REMIX ROX!!! Then the song Mast Mast starts. The 4 were singing with passion and energy. Little did they know that this trip to Shimla would be one trip they would never forget. Especially for Ashi. Because this trip would bring such horrors to her life that she would never ever forget.

COMMENTS!!!!! I thought of this concept so I started my 3rd fic. This is not your normal romance. This is a suspense thriller type romance. Enjoy!!!

pg 1 - prt 1
pg. 3 - prt 2
pg. 5 - prt 3
pg. 7 - prt 4
pg. 8 - prt 5
pg. 10 - prt 6
pg. 11 - prt 7
pg. 13 - prt 8
pg. 14 - prt 9
pg. 16 - prt 10
pg. 17 - prt 11
pg. 19 - prt 12
pg. 20 - prt 13
pg. 21 - prt 14
pg. 24 - prt 15
pg. 25 - prt 16
pg. 26 - prt 17
pg. 27 - prt 18
pg. 28 - prt 19
pg. 29 - prt 20
pg. 30 - prt 21
pg. 31 - prt 22
pg. 32 - prt 23
pg. 33 - prt 24
pg. 36 - prt 25
pg. 38 - prt 26
pg. 41 - prt 27

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sayanti_ashiuv thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part,plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yipeeeeeeeeeeeeee,i am d first one 2 reply 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part komal 👏 please continue soon after reading your precap i am dieing to read the next part please please suspense handle nahi horaha hai please continue soon what will happen to my ashi 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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SWEET!! gotta love thrillers!...
when u said thriller..the first thing that popped into my head was Micheal Jackson's song "Thriller" 😆

neway great concept...hope u continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: gsoni

SWEET!! gotta love thrillers!...
when u said thriller..the first thing that popped into my head was Micheal Jackson's song "Thriller" 😆

neway great concept...hope u continue soon!!!

😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesom cont soon sweety di 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww Komal[my kimi dear]awesome,gr8 start re [i mean the part was gr8]ok now cont asap...waiting eagerly for the next part to come up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start Komal 👏

waiting to knw wht happens to Ashi 😕

continue soon,,

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thrill + romance=gr888 fic 👏
well for 1st part every one has given you 10/10.........
really a new concept really gr8 👏

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