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medharees

@medharees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

My beautiful lin get well soon and I must thank you for being so thoughtful and getting up from bed just for all of us your dear comrades...I'm sorry for not being in the forum often but work is taking a toil on me but believe me arhasia is n each and every parcel of me...big kisses my amazing friend and best wishes for a quick recovery.

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

loved it
i mean each of them were match made in heave
loved it
good tht shyam is is not here

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Rabba ve dear aquiline...

A big salute to you for your commitment to keep up your words to your dear readers and gifting us such a commendable chapter even though you were not feeling well... May God provide you the physical and mental strength needed for the speedy recovery...

Coming to the chapter...

The only line which came to my mind after reading the chapter was...

"The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step."... Lao Tzu

I believe that first step was taken tonight by all the four men when they asked their respective partners for a dance, indirectly asking them to grace their presence in their lives...safely holding the hands of their respective ladies in their secured hands while waltzing around and indirectly promising their loyal companionship throughout the journey of life...

And the song was simply PERFECT... Such meaningful words, apt for the situation and echoing the mind voice of the characters... Loved it.

"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage." ... Lao Tzu

Be it the long nurtured secret admiration for a righteous and courageous widow lady by Master Happy or the recently kindled tender feelings for an innocent heartbroken lady by Master Aman... the calm and composed lover in Lord Akash or the passionate and possessive lover in Lord Arnav,... Without bothering to stop about what the world will think or even to be true what their respective partners will think about them, all four men shed their hesitance and inhibitions, came out of their respective shells and bravely opened up their heart ( Happy ji and Aman) and soul (Lord Akash and Lord Arnav) to their respective partners...

In short, "Love conquered and ruled" the hearts of these beautiful souls making the ambience more serene and divine by the "unadulterated fondness" for their respective partners emanating from their loving heart...

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

AND I BREATH YOU INTO MY HEART...CAUSE I LOVE YOU WHETHER ITS WRONG OR RIGHT... Aqua the song has really no intention to leave me in peace... Master Happy is on the way to make mistress Madhumathi happy...a love in the air???? 'Holding a rainbow in my arms' Lord Manohar we all know you r a witty person but this one is ur best...oh and i loved that wink frm Shashi... Miss Khushi the dance definitly not for the challenge...it is his unique way to show the world whr u belongs to...he won't admitt it openly,too stubborn to admit it...and don't worry about Anjali... Lordy is right about her after all she is his sister and knwn her very well... May be nani too...he is chosen for u to keep his heart securly nt just for a dance u will find out this eventually... Lady La i hope Aman is capable of fixing those broken heart of yours... They are meant to be together we simply can't help it... "If I am nt made for you then why does my heart tell me that I am"off course,fools u two are made for each other...but two of u are too stubborn to acknowledge the truth... Oh Lin, reall she placed her head on his chest,really!!!!i can't breath!!!!

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Rabba ve dear, can I reserve a place here? 😉

Edited:

Dear Aquiline, Im glad you are feeling better now. Take care of your health.

As for the update...

He felt as though someone had pricked him in the inside but there was no pain. And if it did pain, he could take the pain again and he wanted to.

She smiled...for me...And this thought brought a grin to his face, a pleased triumphant grin, and with that grin plastered on his face and his hands in his pocket, he turned about and marched away proudly.

Oh... Lord Arnav is Head over heels in love with khushi... 😉 That's so sweet of him to get pleased looking at her genuine smile... Though his pride was hurt, he didn't feel the pain and was even willing to go through the pain again, if given a chance to make her smile again...that's "POETIC". Loved it...

Lady Anjali continued, "My brother is cold and empty inside. He could never have completed you, nor him you'''you deserve a better man than him."

Very true... In a way, both Lady La and Lord Arnav have cold, wounded hearts which cannot heal each other but require healing "Green hearts" to shower love, fill the void in their longing hearts and rejuvenate them.

Lady Anjali sighed and turned to look absent-mindedly at the moon, and it was only when dark clouds shifted beside the moon that she noticed the night sky. Her eyebrows lowered in thought, "A clear day it had been and suddenly it looks like there is a storm coming'''...how quickly things change in this land."

Oh... as expected. But its fine... Its the rule of nature... "Every tide has its ebb"...

As you mentioned in one of the earlier chapters about the yin- yang concept...

"Yin and yang thus are always opposite and equal qualities. Further, whenever one quality reaches its peak, it will naturally begin to transform into the opposite quality"

A clear day going to turn out into a dark stormy night... A pleasant, lovely ball going to end up in... no, I don't want to complete it. Anyway, by the end of this ball night, I guess, the storm will hit the castle and darkness will engulf the life of the hearts associated with the dwellers of the castle... But as they say, "Every night has its dawn", im planning to stay as a complete optimist and im all ready to witness the unpleasant events of the late night with a strong heart... So, Bring it on dear...

Edited by hoopoe - 13 years ago

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Ammm

@Ammm

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

woo hoo!!!!!!!!

i'm 2nd

yeiii

wonderful update dear... :)

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Rabba vey love...i was pondering Lady Anjali's thought ...bt only my mind too clouded nthng else happed...a beautiful update Aquda... Lady La...wha can i say...is she going to confront Khushi?? So the winner is Miss Khushi and all he need was to just see her smile...for him...or cz of him...i hope with the end of this night the necklace will reach its owner... And whr is our Gen...didn't he gt enough fresh air??? Oh and any chance for a transformation from Lordy?

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sansu

@sansu

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#239

hi!!!

first of all, its great to know that you are well!!!...hope u get even better by every passing hour!!!

second of all, u'll update tommorow!!!!...im jumping in joy!!!

now to the update...

how very observing is khushi when it comes to arnav..."This was very unlike him for he was notably a man of great focus"...

he can really not concentrate when matters pertain to you dear!!!...realise it soon!!!

"And then again, she wasn't sure she remembered any of those reasons anymore."

this was an amazing line here...both of them are so used to state that they hate each other n at a certain point when she is confused about her feelings, she doesnt seem to remember her reasons of hate anymore!!!

did arnav hear about khushi's necklace??...when is he gonna make her wear it???..."jadhu hai nasha hai!!!!"... where did the circle of lights go!!!

my mind is taking me to the diwali's almost kiss!!!!...is that gonna happen here??...are you planning that!!!!😭

lol...he is "to the point" at all times!!!

juat imagining anjali's reaction when you pose such a crazy question suddenly!!!😆

"Di, who do you think among us was the better dancer tonight?"

they were having a family joke...khushi s in the family now!!yay!!😉

"She smiled''..for me'''And this thought brought a grin to his face, a pleased triumphant grin, and with that grin plastered on his face and his hands in his pocket, he turned about and marched away proudly."

how am i ever gonna describe what i fely when i read these lines !!!...u are making it too difficult for me!!!...

there was warmth in my heart thinking that he was so lost at the thought that she smiled at him..for him!!!

there was this treacherous part of my mind or heart that just went off to lala land imagining arnav's grin n proud march!!!😆

ah!!!

lady la's departure is near..

aman will help her bring the cake right or not??

"A clear day it had been and suddenly it looks like there is a storm coming'''...how quickly things change in this land."

U ARE SCARING MY WITS OUT!!!!...

waiting for more...😃😃😃

i missed a point here!!!

"And if it did pain, he could take the pain again and he wanted to."

isnt he a sweet heart??...the symptoms of lovers disease, incidence n prevalence rates are too high...n we are seeing the beginings here!!!😉😆