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Originally posted by: Taani_Nawreen

U r d best dii n ur ff is awesome. Hav no negative feelings fr kriya in ur ff but cant wait to see Taarey togethr.
Cant cmmnt more thru cell. Love u a lot fr ur updates :*

Originally posted by: shivi77

Awesome job indu . I suggest u shld go for writng as ur profession bc u r just too good at it. It was fresh , interesting and jst too good . The promo made it difficult for me to wait for the next update. And if I have to wait for it til 11th feb then dear its worth it 😛

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Dii.. m so so sorry for the late comment.. but awesome update.. I loved it.. I loved taani.. I simply loved her.. jodhpur express.. hehe!! N rey.. liked him too.. I actually liked taani, gaurav, purvi n rohan's part.. loved their friendship.. everything was so so well written.. how do u manage to write so well dii?? No commemts about the precap.. coz u noe.. I umm.. dont like kriya.. but I know ki yeh aapka ff hai so pakka kriya ko zyada time jhelna nahi padega. N end me rey ko taanise hi pyaar.. sachcha pyaar hoga.. love u for this update dii.. do update soon n pm me too!!

Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

Wow. The ff is so dhansu. Really. In the first chapter itself, so many twists. So many love stories. Rey loves Kriya. Gaurav loves Taani. Taani loves Rey. Rey will love Taani. So exciting. The precap, I totally hated. Which is good ok? As you know, its Kriya not Taani. Thats the only reason. But I have full trust in you. Waiting excitedly. One more twisty ff.
P.S. Love the banner. Its amazing.

Chapter-2

Haveli

"radhe Krishna panditji …aayiyae andhar aayiyae" chaachi welcomed panditji

"ji " the pandit replied and walked in

"radhe Krishna pandit ji , virajiye"daadi said politely pointing to the peet for pandit to sit

Soon chaachu and taani's mom entered the scene … " aap mujhe apni badi beti ki kundli dekhne k liyae bulya tha na" the pandit looked at chaachi and smiled

" haan ji .. taani naam hai uski… ab vo kya hai na pandit ji, betiyan badi ho jate hi wo kya kehte haa temson[tension] suru ho jaati hai uski shaadi ko leke… aur hamara toh do do bitiya hai toh temson kuch zyada ..she felt an angry glare from her husband and silenced herself and covered her face in the veil ..

"haa hum samjh sakte hain" the pandit smiled and started his work

After a few minutes he lifted his head up and looked at the people gathered around .. everyone of them were anxious.. "kya baat hai pandit jii , sab teek hai na" daadi broke the silence

" haa haa boliye panditji , kundli mein koi gadbad..chaachi started her lecture but again had to stop midway coz of her husbands angry glare

"ji voh bitiya ki kundli k anusar uski shaadi agle 5 hafte k andhar honi chaahye.. before the pandit could complete chaachi interrupted again "yeh aap kya bol rahe ho panditji ,kai umr ki vaja se aapki drishti kam toh nahi hui naa, aap teek se dekhye na ek aur baar"

"nahi humne teek se dekhar hi bata rahi hu" pandit frowned

" paanch hafte [she exclaimded loudly] hai raam 5 hafte mein taani ki shaadi[she smiled but turned her face to sad mode quickly so that no one notices]5 hafte mein hamri bitiya raani ye ghar chodke apni yeh chaachi ko chodke sasural jayega …hai raam mein kaise apni bitiya … "SUBHADRA" chaachu roared in anger " pandit ji aisi kya baat hai kundli mein aap hume puri baat bata dejiye" chaachu asked politely to the pandit

" dekhye mujhe jo kehna tha .. meine keh diya… …kundli k anusar ye ladki k shaadi 5 haftae k andhar honi chahye… warna pati ka mauth sunishchit hai .. baaki aap logon ki marzi , mujhe ab jaana hoga aur bhi kuch ghar mein jaana hai aaj, toh mein nikalti hu"

" ji dhanyawad " everyone stood up and folded their hands

"ji radhe Krishna" and the pandit walked away.. as soon as the pandit left chaachi walked to taani's mom and held her shoulders and faked tension and concern

Chaachi: Jeeji aaapne suna na.. iska matlab hume taani ki shaadi jald se jald kar deni chahye.. warna uska pati…"

Chaachu: " kuch der k liye chup rahogi tum subhadra.."

Chaachi : "ji… par mein kya keh rahi thi ki aapko voh Mumbai valom se ek bar baat …[chaachu gave her an angry glare and she turned mum].. taanis mom stood without uttering a single word .. she didn't have the right to decide anything… she was helpless

Daadi : " subhadra teek keh rahi hai Rana[chaachu].. tume pratap[taanis father] k dosth se baath karna hoga "

Chaachi: " ha ji jab jetji aur dost ne pehle se hi bachon ki shaadi tai kar raka hai toh hum kisi aur dulha k bare mein soch bhi nahi sakte [she looked at taani 's mom and held her chin and caressed her face] hai na jeeji??? Aur hum ladki wale hai toh main kya keh rahi thi ki aapko ek baar Mumbai jaake hi baat karna chahye… ab bitiya ki baat hai toh hum koi kami toh nahi chod sakte.. ab uska baauji nahi raha toh.. "SUBHADRA…" chaachu roared , he noticed taani's ma hurt , her eyes welled up , he went near her " bhabhi aap pareshan mat ho mein hu na , mein sab dekh lunga" he assured her ,chaachi gave a foul expression seeing her husbands concern…….

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Mumbai

"honey !! u r so impatient !!" kria said and turned to the other side covering herself in the blanket

"that's because you are so irresistible, HOT lady!!" he whispered huskily into her ears licking them.. she moaned and caressed his rough stubble …. She leaned herselves to him brushing her bare body on his and devoured him in a wild kiss.. he joined her sucking the nectar from her luscious lips… pressing her body more onto his , caressing her slender arms , burshing her long bare leg with his rough ones

" you make me crazy on bed Rishab" she sighed and pulled out herselves from the kiss gasping for breath

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Rey ran into the rehearsal hall which was empty " re yahan nahi hai toh kaham hogi .. phone bhi switched off aa raha hai…" he brushed his mushy hair … " shaayad gussa hoke ghra chali gayi hogi , mein bhi na , subah hi uska mood kharab kar diya" he hit his temple and ran back to his car and drove off "kria , I am coming baby [he smiled to himself excited to meet his lady love] ek aur baar try kar leta hun" he made a call again

TRING .. TRING rishab leaned over kria to grab her phone which was disturbing them … 'Rey ' the name flashed on the screen .. " your lame calf is calling .. poor thing , utaavo uttavo " he gave an evil laugh … she gave a smirk and took the call " hi kriya where are u babes .. I was searching for u in the rehearsal hall" rey's anxious voice came from the other end " ohhh stop it rey you were late and now don't forget that" she made a foul face and replied least interested ..

" so my lady is angry… and that's why you are at home" kria got up from the bed startled , her bare shoulders now started showing drizzles of sweat out of fear… " how do you know that I am at home" she asked worried grabbing the blanket and getting out of the bed " ohh shit!! Kya muzeebat hai yaar" a nagged rishab also got out of the bed and grabbed his clothes that were scattered on the floor.

"rey !!! tell me kahan ho tum " kria asked frantically looking around

"open your door madam" rey replied

Kria cut the call in haste "rishab hide somewhere!!! He is here"

"what the hell yaar" rishab was highly irritated "honey don't forget he is our money tree" she gave an evil chuckle and he too joined… she grabbed her clothes and got changed , she arranged her hair and went to the main door while rishab hid himself..

Kria opened the door and found rey standing with a red bouquet … she gave a not interested expression and went in…

Rey: "baby please .. please maff karo …. Dekho I am sorry [he kept his fingers on his ears and made a cute face]"

Kria gave least notice and walked towards the shelf … he went behind her pleading… she gave a smile but again turned and walked this time hiding her evil smile with her palm… he grabbed her hand from behind in a swift move and she came crashing on his chest….he lowered his face onto hers….soon his lips met her luscious pink ones….. "love you babes … tum aise angry mat ho yaar , I cant bear it" he said looking into her eyes .. his brown balls reflecting sincere love …

College

" galati tumne ki aur hum sab ko saza mil raha hai…" taani turned her head irritated

" ohh hello miss jodhpur… it was you who threw the pen on my nose [he touched his nose]pata hai abhi bhi hurt ho raha hai" gaurav turned to the other side … purvi and rohan looked at each other not knowing what to do.. taani marched and came to gaurav " but it was you who teased me" purvi and rohan looked at taani glaring at gaurav " oye who asked you to look at me huhh?" purvi bit her nails seeing the fight increasing in heat rohan looked in fear at gaurav "oh hello mr smart I didnt look at you ha" she advanced forwards pointing her index finger at him… purvi and rohan looked at each other, purvi still bitting her nails … they looked at taani then to gaurav and viceversa " ohh so you didn't look at me .. sunooo sab[he turned to purvi and rohan] then how did you see me mocking at you huhhh??? Batoaooo?" he gave a naughty smirk .. " vo… vo.. vo [she looked around feeling trapped]mein rohan ko dekh raha tha.. n you were sitting by his side toh off course I will see you" taani managed to give an answer

" actually tumhari problem kya hai yaar .. pehle kehti ho ki nahi dekha , phir kehti ho ki I saw you , samajh mein nahi aa raha ye dekh aur see ka ek hi matlab hai na" he laughed naughtily

" you " she advanced forwards but tripped and was about to fall when he grabbed her by her waist …. He could not help himself from being lost in her eyes … purvi and rohan stood open mouthed … taani removed her hair strands which was on her face now and tried to stand up but gaurav was still holding her like that .. she looked doubtfully at his face .. he continued looking at her lost in her .. she gave an irritating look " oye[she swayed her palm in front of his eyes to pull him out of the trance… he immediately got out of his trance and made her stan] eh tum mujhe aise kyu dekh raha tha huhhh??? Kuch kharabi hai ?? purvi is there something on my face she asked innocently to purvi .. purvi and rohan who stood open mouthed in trance closed their mouths " haa.. matlab na… matlab[purvi scratched her head and looked at gaurav , he gave a naughty smirk, purvi's mouth again opened , taani was looking at her best friend's weird behavior and was getting irritated] " kya yaar yeh tum logon ko kya hua aaj, tum aise gadhe ki tarah kyu khade ho rohan huhhh??[she went to rohan] Aur tum tum aisii weird kyu behave kar rahi ho?[she turned to purvi and in that pace she turned to gaurav ] aur tum[he lifted his brows up with a naughty smile …she stopped] khair chodo tum toh hamesha aise rahte ho, Mr problem maker" she turned her face … he didn't know why but he smiled seeing her cute expressions "guys… isse pehle ki meri mood aur kharab ho, I am leaving.. see you all tomorrow … and you… [she turned to gaurav]ajj mera mood nahi hai toh hum kal se practice karenge, now I hope you are okay with that"

" ji maharani ji" he bowed his head with a cute face and purvi couldn't help but chuckle seeing gaurav's expression .. taani released a sigh " whatever!!!" and marched away….

Haveli

Taani walked in still in the same irritated mode… she entered the huge hall of the haveli … she felt glances from all sides she turned to her left … daadi who sat on a mat was looking at her but when she looked daadi looked down….she turned to her left chaachu was busy with some papers but his eyes were on her but he shifted his gaze back to the papers as soon as she glanced….. trisha was looking at her through the corner of her eye but as soon as she looked trisha shifted her focus back to the laptop….her ma had tears in her eyes ,she turned to walk to the kitchen " rukho ma…. Yeh kya ho raha hai…. Matlab..[she circled her glance round the hall at everyone]aap sab aise kyu behave kar rahe ho???" she asked with a doubtful face… trisha slowly slid from her chair and tried to move out of the scene " ruko trisha ..[taani moved to trisha and made trisha face her ]baata mujhe kya baat hai , sab aise kyu dekh rahe ho mujhe …[trisha kept mum]batao trisha …"taani increased her volume

"Kyunki humne tumhari shaadi tai kar li… paanch hafte mein tumhari shaadi hai … bidaai k liyae taayar ho ja dulhan" chaachi yelled

" KYAA???" taani stood shocked

Note: I cant update both FFs together , now itself my mom complaints that i spend most time in front of the pc and dont help her ,it takes 3 hrs for me to complete one chapter as i am a bit slow and also coz i go on typing and erasing typing and erasing😆 and also i have another bad habbit once i stick to my pc i start watching old epi videos😆 n mom gets irritated😆...so i have decided that i will update each FF on alternate days , yesterday you got chaahat and today this so tomorrow chaahat and so on , i hope you all will cooperate😉

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awesome blossom...just loved it...omg kriya is such a b***h...bt thnk god she is a negative character...interesting story...can't wait to read more...update soon!!!!!😛

its ok dear

i was worried after reading the 1st chapter and character scatch.. that rey is in love with kriya and kriya loves rey..
but get relief after reading this.
kriya is negative char...
hope rey will find this soon..
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.