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..Anita.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Arnav is thinking about securing his relationship with Khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Removed.

No. I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly stop cribbing about the length ! I wanted more to this update ! Like seriously... What a cruel place to stop !

Utke paanch minute nahi huye and I'm reading FS 😃

I love Shyam-Anjali here... Considering how much we hated seeing them in the show, kudos to you for making us love them... Their characters are so well etched. And I am not repulsed by the romance :D

"I haven't rocked you in the place that matters the most!"
And you say we're spoiling you ??

Is it only arnav that hates shyam or is it the whole family ?
Loved what Anjali said about love !
It took them long to reach their destination, huh? I really wanna know the flashback story !
If Shyam thought even the mention of him would create problems between Arshi why did he meet her in the first place? He wants them together right? He didn't think Khushi would hide it from Arnav, did he??

Arya is baby ASR out and out...

It was so cute how in one place she offered Payal an exchange of her doll for Khushi and the next moment rejected everything out when she knew she wouldn't get it!

I stand with Payal in her determination to get back to their house. How much ever hospitable the Raizadas were it is so natural for her to feel terrified by Aya's and Khushi's proximity to each other...And her own possessiveness... She's just looking out for her baby sister

Loved Akash.. Loved how he handled Payal the Raizada way...And whatever he said to Payal were so true...and yes Khushi is to be equally blamed ! She thinks there's no future for her and Arnav and its all about sex for them ...
And at the end he returned to his original self after indirectly proposing to Payal 😃

Everything that a baby girl should never experience... For her to think nobody loves her and everybody leaves her is so bad for her...Kids should get all the love in the world and never feel rejected cos what gets etched in their hearts now would stay forever ! She's rejecting Khushi now !

And Arnav is in office when two most important people of his lives are hurting! So the matter must be really important... And for Anjali to rely on Shyam to help Arnav out of every mess is so nice :-)

Khushi's points were so true in wanting to talk to Arya about her mother...
But how like Arnav STUPID Raizada to leave out the core of the matter and get angry for something less important...Did he even stop to ask her for an explanation? I think no !
When he lets himself think he'd think about what Khushi was saying rather than who she got the information from...
He himself wanted to talk... About what ??

And he went on to hurt her the best way he thinks possible! I'm not going to talk about that here too😆

I know you're not updating this weekend but next update kab aayega ??


Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~Edit~

Saiyyu, I loved this MahaUpdate, but I want the next update fast. Very fast. Very very Fast. Bas!

I shall tell you my favorite bits in each part.

What Anjali says about love is so true - ArShi are very unique. Unka prem vichitra kintu satya :D

"I have not rocked you where it matters the most" 🤣

Arya trying to trade her doll for Khushi made me cry. For a child to sacrifice what is most precious to them, dear god, I just wanted to hug her and make all her pain go away. Sacchi!

This update brought out the Raizada in Aakash, intense, insightful, sexy. No wonder he rendered Payal speechless. He read Payal so well.. everyone loves Khushi and is afraid to lose her, thats how lovely Khushi is. But I understand Payal's concern, I guess it has more to do with wanting to keep her sister away from heartbreak than any insecurity on her part.

Bubbly cried herself to sleep. No! No! I cannot take her tears. You have GOTTO update fast. I want Arya happy and smiling and jumping and dancing. Isn't it bad enough to be a motherless little girl who cannot eat cakes? No, Arya is not motherless. She has Khushi. MAKE HER STOP CRYING !!

What did Arnav want to ask Khushi? He was angry alright, but why did he walk away? Whythe hell is he going to Sheetal? Ufff ! No!

Arya is crying. Khushi is crying. This is not done. Next update. FAST! Bas!

PS - I enjoyed reading this update Saiyyu, it belonged to Arya more than anyone else, and it was brilliant. It broke my heart, but brilliant nonetheless.
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shyam and Anjali. i love the way they see things. Anjali's way of realizing the love between Khushi and Arnav...and the way she realized what Payal must have been feeling...was so perfect. These two are so much in harmony with each other. And I wonder when they'll bring their relationship out in the open. But of course, Arnav's anger is enough to stop anyone and anything.

Awww...Arya actually went to give Payal her fav. doll to keep Khushi with her instead. That was so cute...and personified the innocence Arya is..and the love she feels for and feels from Khushi. She does need a motherly presence in her life..and it will be difficult for a child who has never got it before to leave it when she does get it. Poor child. I want to gather her in my arms right now. But her anger is so like a Raizada's.😆

Akash...was bang on. Payal cares for Khushi too..and its that concern that's making her act this way.

As for the last part...DAMN.
It started out so well...the solace they felt in each other's arms...and the sensuality that slowly made its way to the fore...all broken because of one name.
It was a necessary topic to be discussed. Maybe Arnav wasn't ready for it yet. But Khushi's reasoning does make sense. But that Shyam angle probably worsened it. Dammit.

And Arnav...YOU DO NOT RUN INTO ANOTHER WOMAN'S ARMS LIKE THAT!
I mean...seriously? What the??!!!
I hope he doesn't go through it and returns back home...otherwise...I may just hate this man. :/
I don't know if I'm supposed to hate the guy already...or if you wanted me to...but I will if he is going to lie in another woman's arms this night.

Great chapter Saiyu!
AND THANK YOU FOR THE 'MAHA' UPDATE!🤗

Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres... I loved the maha update!! But the only ones I actually feel for in all this are khushi and arya. WHAT did arnav do????? why??? just shyams name and he leaves khushi just like that?! im sooo angry with him!! I wonder how he or others would react if khushi went and spent the night with another man just like that! Anjali and Shyam well what can I say?? He pursued her and whilst she is a strong character I'm still not sure if his feelings for her are genuine or not. I guess I have to wait for the whole lavanya fiasco to unfold, that will clear up my confusion on shyams real intentions. As for Payal... I know I've said this before but will say it again... I LOVE this strong version of her. Very grounded and she is absolutely right in taking herself and Khushi away from their house. I can see her point totally! My heart goes out to little arya... she is suffering so much in all this mess! trying to give away her most precious possession to keep Khushi with her was just so heart breaking! Not denying all the emotions and care that arnav shows in his actions, and not denying the fact that khushi also cares, The raizadas seem to be using poor baby arya as an excuse to keep using Khushi for their selfish purposes... they are forgetting that she is a girl with emotions too. It's so complicated!! Sorry I'm reacting like this but I really want Khushi to leave their house with her dignity in tact! Arnav is terribly hurting the 2 most important girls in his life... He is such an idiot!! I really can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the pm x
Edited by Venicestar88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my god...
so many things happened...
so many events...
so many questions...
so many confusions...
so many arguments...

u better update soon...
or else i am gonna eat ur head this time...!!😉
Edited by heavenspirit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was actually a "Maha Update"
No issues with the length though

so many things happening like you mentioned but not what we expected!😆

I was expecting to see the various reactions on the rishta talk

I am just hoping he doesn't do what khushi is thinking...

Edited by arnavbarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.
Edited.

The Maha-update was Maha- Awesome!
It was a whole-some update throwing light on All the principal characters.

Anjali-Shyam.
Shyam is so infinitely sweet! His habit of pestering Anjali for marriage is so refreshingly approving. A Welcome Change!
His dialogue about his Saale- Sahib shooting him down was a line, which really cracked me up!!.. Anjali is associated with a NGO- thats great.

Payal- Arya.
Payal isn't that friendly with kids,right? And she keeps out of the way of the stubborn Raizada Kid.
Oh My God! You really know how the brains of kids work,don't you? The way Arya offered her favourite Barbie in return of her Khushi-Didi was an eg. of that! It also showed that she is the chip off the old block. The girl has effectively taken after her father.. Deals, huh!
Payal was pragmatic and her stance is quite justified, I guess.

Akash-Payal.
Perfect timing! Akash coming to the damage control.. The spilling of the beans of Arya's
truth was much needed.
.. And again an eg. of Perfect timing by Akash. He confessed his feelings..
"There is not a dearth of .." - what a dialogue!
The characterizations of both Akash and Payal are strong and sensible.. The best part is not only they make themselves useful in the right way but also they make their presence felt.

Arya-Khushi.
Arya is quite vulnerable. She already made elaborate plans about Khushi. There is a hint of a mother-daughter bond in them.. And Khushi is no less. She loves the child whole-heartedly..

Arnav-Khushi.
In the first part, Arnav was really being good- he controlled himself and thought of lending his ears to Khushi, when she wanted to say something.. But in the later part- well I don't wanna say anything about this Hot Jerk,who comes up with Weird ideas of Punishing Khushi.
.. Khushi is thoroughly engulfed in the passion! Hope she remains sane!
At the later part, I seriously felt sad for Khushi.

Thanks for the long update.
The update was really great.
You left us at a cliff-hanger.. Hope everything turns out well!

P.s.- Thanks for the Pm.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for mentioning long 😛

All I can see is Khushi constantly facing heart breaks though she is not at all at fault sigh.

I have a doubt why is Anjali planning everyone else's life ? cannot she not learn from her mistakes to figure her own life first & then preach others ?

Apart from this Love the FF 😛

Edited by Arhi-Did-IT - 12 years ago

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