'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Amazing update Andy👏.thanks so much navi😃 Uday poured his heart out to Manyata , but she didn't believe a word he said. I think it's because of the lie he told her earlier about Sasha ... that's why she thinks this story is also a lie. yes manyata refuses to belive uday as she was cheated once by him. he told her his past as he wanted her atleast to know the truth behind his behavior.uday need to go a long way before manyata finally accepts him I wonder what plan she concocted to get out of her current situation🤔. even i dont know😆, shall we go and ask her? I agree with Chitra here ... manyata will play on Uday's emotions - he will let her go free - then she'll back-stab him by getting him arrested😔😭. yes she will play with his emotions. but its uday she is gana fight. bad choice i must say

Very well written Andy 👍🏼,thanks navi😳
continue soon ,next friday, if there are no more tests😆
thanx 4 the PM😊.welcome navi😃
thanks navi for this lovely comment😳
SORRY about making another post ... there's a problem with the post I "RES"erved - I'm not being allowed to EDIT it 😒😡!!! i have no problem in that. iam only happy about it😆

andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
next friday huma😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Hello Andy😛
hi zina😃
there is a good news! guess what?? 😃 this time i am commenting on time yeey!! party🥳lol!!😆 i am such a mini head😆!! okay now i will not eat you intelligent head😃!na both of us belong to rha same catogery😃

the update was awesome, fantastic, amazing, wonderful, lovely, out-stanting👏great work girl, i just love this SSmore over i love uday☺️thanks zina even i love uday agr manyata ko nahi chaheye yar,to mje day do uday ko, mje wo kisi b haal main manzoor hai😳😆!!so do you want me to kill manyata in the next part and give that role to you? don't you think i am saying all stupid stuff no i dont think so😆all right, the update was soo good baby😃, just like you! OMG!! am i good????why doesn't this manyata 😡understands a small thing, she is a much big mini head than i am😆yes once she thinks of something then nothing can stop her bechara uday sari story btane kay bad b nai samajti😭!! what can we except from this mini head😡 lagta hai isko marnay ka bohat shook hai🤢 uday is so caring for her, he cannot see her in pain😭 and she just keeps on irritating him and me😡!! DUMBOO!!
manyata refuses to see the goodness remaining in uday
this SS is really very good, i have chipko fied to it with fevicol🤣
stupid joke!😆!i loved it😆
wonderful update andy, thanks a lot for Pm, and please please is manyata k dimagh main thori si akal dall do chahe to muj say thori si udhar lay lo😆! update soon Please😳!!next friday for sure
Love ya!😳love you tooEmbarrassed
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Huggiesto you too😃
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😃MUaah!
thanks zainab for this comment i simply loved it😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

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Ooosome update 👏, loved it 😳, and thanks for the PM andy😊thanks so much chitra😃

Part 1: Difficult Manyata confused Uday: Again very well put andy, I could very well sense the inner turmoil of a lion who feel in love with his own prey and the lamb who is the prey of this lion, but still somewhere deep down her heart beats for this monster😳.yes well said 😃 When Manyata is starving , uady gets worried, when Manyata hurts herself, Uday looses his control 😳😳, it is so obvious this MR shark can never ever kill the lady for whom his heart has first time started beating 😉uday is trying his best not to kill manyata and manyata is trying her best to get herself killed by irritating uday to her death

Part 2: Princess Manyata-the true royal: yes here she was like a true royal who was not ready to give up . She tries almost everything in her control to save herself. She tries calling jaggat for help, she tries to kill herself to save herself the tourture of being killed by Mr shark, plus she oesnt want to give Mr shark teh satisfaction that he killed her 😆😳. And then when everything done, she uses her royal brain to hatch a plan and get out of the clutches of this monster.
manyata may be foolish enough to fall for uday. but in her blood is royal and she therefore will react against all evils arond her. uday is evil for her so she will make sure he is brought before law😃
I have a feeling she will try to gain Uday's confidence by going to teh extend of accepting him in her life again, so that Uday will herself let her go. And I guess there is where she back-stabs Uday and tells Jaggat to arrest her in her house.yes she will act like falling in love with uday to gain his confidence Just my guesses 😊, they are very good indeedbut again what evidence does she have, against Uday? I mean Uday is just too smart for her. she does have some evidence which lands uday in jail😕

Nice update continue soon 😊thanks chitra. i always love to read youe analysisEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 21: WHAT A PRICE TO PAY FOR FREEDOM

Manyata made her mind. She would go forward with her plan. If it was a success, then it would be her ticket to freedom or it may end in her death. Anyway she was willing to take the big risk.

First she needed to gain the confidence of uday. She was sure he had a soft corner for her in his mind or she would have been dead by now. She needed to exploit that weakness to her benefit. But she feared that once since she had given her mind completely to him, would she repeat it again? She could never help herself from falling to his charms. His eyes alone stirred a deep ocean of feelings inside her. If she never knew that he was Mr. Shark maybe she would have loved him

When she heard about his past yesterday, she knew it was true, every line, every word showed his sorrow and his anguish. But it was not right for him to take law into his hands, then why there were courts and police departments in the country. Whatever his reasons maybe it did not make him innocent in the eyes of law. All citizens were equal in the eyes of law. And that law called upon for his punishment

Manyata went and washed her face, the wound on her head was still paining. She needed strength, both mental and physical to carry out her plans. She settled down on the table and ate the food kept over there. She ate it fully as she was really hungry.

All she had to do was to wait for uday to return. She switched on the TV and browsed through the channels, the news channels did celebrate her kidnapping. They were showing a raid in a godown. Then she spotted jaggat and behind him was uday. Jaggat told the reporters that the search for manyata has been intensified and she would be found pretty soon. "Ask the man next to you, he will tell you where manyata is "thought manyata.The look on uday's face was terrible. He looked like a man in terrible pain. What an actor he is, thought manyata.

There were no other interesting programs to watch and soon manyata drifted off to sleep.

It seemed many hours since she had slept. The house was as usual silent. Uday did not return home till now.

Where did he go? Then she heard the door of her room opening. Manyata soon became alert

Uday entered the room carrying her supper

M: uday i…….

Uday did not listen to manyata. He was still irritated by her earlier behavior. He placed the supper on the table, took the empty plates and left the room without glancing back at manyata. Manyata felt bad because of his behavior. But she would try again till she succeeded

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It was a tiring day for uday, he did not want manyata to shower all her accusations on him. He had enough of it, so he decided that it would be best if he ignored her. Uday felt if he again continued to entertain her tantrums she would again try to hurt herself like what she did today.

Uday really loved her, he finally admitted it to himself. All these days he never wanted to agree about it.

"Love made one weak" was what he thought of love. But now he felt "love made one complete. It made the mind pure. It was an unselfish feeling. Once you are in love then the whole world appears colorful. You would be able to listen to birds chirping, the sound of wind caressing the leaves, the beautiful butterflies and all the nature's wonders.

Love was the language of the soul and he had found it. it was the most melodious music, the sweetest honey, the whitest cotton, the strongest steel, the coolest breeze, the softest pillow, the loveliest flower, the star lit night sky, the cloudless blue sky, the pure ocean. It was tender like a mother's love. It was something so indefinable but something that one experienced fully. Falling in love was one of the greatest gift of god to mankind

It was not a physical feeling. It was something much more than that. It was as if the whole world worked to make 2 souls fall in love

He was a killer, a predator. And see the play of the fates. They made him fall for his prey. The lady whom he wanted to enjoy once was now the person he wanted to make his better half, his wife

Yes, he wanted to marry manyata. She was the first women whom he felt like this. She was innocent like a lamp when she was happy and ferocious like a lion when provocated. It was not her physical beauty that drew him to her but it was her mind, cute and childish. He could feel him to be a human in her presence

Udayveer was sure manyata never ever felt about him the way he felt. If only it was so, he wished

But her status, she was a princess and he was a common man, will the society accept it? Will she accept it?

Many unanswered questions continued to haunt uday. He thought a lot about it and soon fell into the hands of dreamless sleep

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Uday woke up late the next day. He phoned jaggat that he won't be accompanying him today as he was not well. Actually his mind was disturbed beyond repair. He prepared manyata's breakfast and went down to see her.

Manyata was also waiting to see uday. She needed a chance to talk to him today itself. As she heard the door opening she composed herself. Uday entered the room and placed her breakfast on the table, without once glancing at her

M: uday

Uday ignored her

Manyata went forward and caught his hands and told him.

M: uday, please, I want to talk to you something

M: please uday

U: I don't have time to listen to your accusations. Make it fast manyata

M: uday iam sorry

WHAT!!! Thought uday. God!! Now seriously he was dreaming. He was sure of it.

Manyata and sorry was like pickle and halwa ( a sweet).

Manyata continued

M: uday I know my behavior towards you for the past few days was really bad I really feel sorry about it. I never understood the reason why you became like this. But now I know, circumstances made you that way. Anyone In your situation would have done the same thing. I don't know how long my life will last so I want to ask your forgiveness before all this ends. I am sorry uday

It is your work and you got paid for it, so you have to do it uday. Kill me and finish your work. I know your mind is disturbed about that fact. But I will never ever be angry with you uday. You were the first person whom I gave my heart to and let you be the last person in my heart till my last breath. I only ask for one final wish, I wish to breathe some fresh air, see the blue sky, and hear the birds chirp before I get killed. I will only be happy that you are ending my life.

The words 'kill' die' 'heart' all brought uday back to his yesterday's thoughts. His princess loved him the way he loved her. She finally accepted the truth about him. he felt so happy, he went and removed the iron chain from manyata's leg and in one go took her in his hands. There was a genuine smile on her face

U: princess I love you. I love you more than my life.

Manyata encircled her hand around his neck and looked into his chocolate color eyes and said

M: I love you too uday. You are my life.

He carried her up and took her outside and placed her down. She was so overjoyed like a small girl who had just discovered the joy of life. She ran out and drenched herself in sunlight. Uday watched her with a smile on his lips. A beautiful family scene played before his eyes. Manyata and uday and their kids, laughing and playing, enjoying life to the fullest.

Manyata soon returned inside she insisted on preparing lunch. Uday helped her in the kitchen and they together prepared biriyani and chilli chicken. Soon they sat down to have their lunch. Both send a lot of time talking their heart out, the more manyata knew about uday and his past the less weak her resolve of fighting uday became. Time flew like anything. In no time it was late evening

M: so, that what you loved to do. Uday I want to see your family. Is there any photo of them

U: yes, there is one in my room. I will take you there

Uday led manyata to his room. It was a huge room. There was a king size bed at the centre. There was a posh sofa set on one side and on the other was a huge wardrobe. In the centre oh the right wall was a big photo. It was uday and his baba, ma and chotti, all smiling happily. There was a twinkle in uday's eyes In the photo. The real uday's eyes moistened and his sound broke

U: that is my family.no. that was my family, now i am an orphan. There is no one to love me or care for me. Tears of sorrow formed in uday's eyes. Manyata's heart broke. Her eyes became teary.she cupped uday's face and kissed his forehead and said

M: no, uday. You are not alone. I am there with you. Uday please don't cry na

Uday hugged her tightly and manyata too hugged him back. Uday cried his heart out to manyata, and manyata allowed him to cry, to give him relief from the long suppressed feelings he hid in his heart. They stood there like that for god knows how long

Manyta soon became aware of their position. Their bodies were already doing their mischief even without their knowledge. Passion started steering their emotions. Manyata freed herself from uday and started to move to the door

He pulled her close to him, their chest colliding. He saw his passion reflected in her eyes too. He needed the feeling of being cared and manyata was the only person capable of making him feel secure. It was never a physical need but an emotional one. His hands were soon caressing her waist. She blushed

Manyata's brain cried to her to stop it at that moment, but her heart craved to be loved, it was an intense battle between her heart and her brain. Ultimately her heart won, her unknown love for uday won. He pulled her for a kiss. He kissed her softly on her forehead, her eyes her cheeks, her chin and finally her lips. She wanted that kiss. She looked at his face anticipating the kiss. Uday obliged her and soon the kiss turned intense, it was searing heat emitting from their bodies. Both of them wanted to be loved and to be cared

That night they became one. It was the most beautiful night in their life. Even the nature wanted their union. It was love that they shared that night

Their clothes lay scattered on the floor. Both of them held each other tightly. Even in their sleep the sign of satisfaction could be seen on their face. The sign of their pure love visible on their faces

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Manyata woke up early in the morning. She found herself in the hands of uday.the sheet covered then. She remembered last night and blushed. It was simply heavenly,

Uday sensed manyata woke up

Uday kissed manyata on her forehead. She closed her eyes in response to the kiss

He got up and put his pygamas

"Thank you manyata for the wonderful night. I finally found my soul mate, my better half. You know my past, present and future well. There is nothing hidden from you in my life so"

He knelled down, took a ring from his pocket, it was heart shaped blue diamond surrounded by small diamonds encrusted in gold and asked her

"will you MARRY me manyata, will you become mrs udayveer singh?"

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So guys how was the chapter?

Was it good?

What reply will manyata give uday? Any guesses

Don't forget to hit the like button and comment

I will be waiting for your feedback

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Posted: 12 years ago
it's fabulous
interesting
waiting for the answer
n pls update soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
the update was amazng
hope that Manyata says yes to Udayveer'
And forget her mission regarding Mr. Shark
But in the earlier chapter u mentioned that Manyata reveals the truth about Mr.Shark to the world
But let me hope that Manyata forgets about the past and focus on the future
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOA IT WAS AWESOME POOR MANYATA
SHE WILL NOT BE ABLE TO STICK TO HER PLANS I GUESS
PLEASE PM ME THE NEXT TIME YOU UPDATE
IT WAS REALLY GOOD
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was fabulous dear...
i am Manyata wud surely be in a confussion. her heart will say yes, and her head will say no. first she wud ask uday, that he is paid to kill her, then why to marry?? or otherwise, she will ask uday for sum time. i think that, in present (all this is past, in present, wen mr.shark is arrested.) she is pregnant.
lol... i donno just a wildest guess
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thsnks...fabulous...superb

thanks so much😃

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