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Guys I am writing a OS on Virika and for the first time I am writing an OS. I hope you guys like it. This OS is based on Virika's reunion. I'll be starting it from the end of Friday's episode. I haven't seen the precap of Friday's episode so I don't know was there any reunion or not but still this idea stuck my mind. I hope it make sense
Realization

Viren: Jeevika and he gets up and take off the dupatta from Jeevika's shoulder. Jeevika was dumbstruck with this. Viren tried to put off the fire by putting water on it. When the fire was off he turned around to see Jeevika who was still in the state of shock. He went to her.

Viren: Jeevika... Before he could say anything else she hugged him. Viren hugged her back to calm her down. It felt like they are hugging each other after ages. Jeevika felt save in his arms. They were in the same position for couple of minutes. After sometime they came back to sences and broke the hug. There was an awkward silence in the room. Finally Viren decided to broke the silence.

Viren: Jeevika. She looked at him. He moved close to her and cupped her face. She started looking down. He made her look into his eyes. Tears roll down from Jeevika's eyes. Viren wiped the tears and kissed her forehead.

Viren: Jeevika mein woh.. before he could say anything else Jeevika put her finger on his lips.

Jeevika: Nahi Virenji Kuch kehnye ki zaroorat nahi hai. Yo kuch hua ab wo badla to nahi ya sakta lekin bhulaya to ya sakta hai. Virenji mein yeh sab kuch aur bardas nahi kar sakti. Appka yeh vehwar bardas nahi kar sakti. Virenji app he kehtye teh na ke app mujse baat kiye baghir nahi reh saktye toh ab kiya hua? App nein mujse pichalye do haftoon se baat nahi ki. Kiya ab app mujse pyar nahi kartye. Kiya ab mein apki purani Jeevika nahi rahi. Virenji pehley hum ek dusarye se dor hokye bhi ek doosarey ke pass hotye te aur ab itna pass hoke bhi bohat dor hai. Kiun Virenji aisa kiun hai. Hum doono mein itni dooriyan kahan se agai, kiun agayi? Hum ek dusaryee se itna dor kiun ho gaye? Virenji mein yeh sab aur bardass nahi kar sakti. Nahi kar sakti bardass apse door rehna. Mujse app yeh vehwar bardass nahi hota. Abb itni taqat nahi hai muj mein.and she sat on the floor and started crying uncontrollably.

Viren could not see her like this. He sat on the floor and hugged her tightly and tried to calm her down. He made her stand up.

Viren: Jeevika please chup ho jao. Tumhye patta hai ke mein tuhye aisye nahi dek sakta. Tumnye yeh kaisye soch liya ke mein ab tumse pyar nahi karta. Mein ajj bhi tumse utna hi pyar karta hu jitna pehlye karta tha. Tumharey liye har din mera pyar barta hai, khabhi kam nahi hua aur na ho sakta hai. Jeevika yeh do haftye merye do saheeyon ke barabar the. Tum nahi janti ke tumse baat keye bhagir mein kaise reh rahan tha. Jeevika tum ajj bhi merye liye meri wohi Jeevika ho jisye mein pyar karta ta aur karta rahoon ga. Aur humarye mein itni dooriyan iss liye ayi kiun hum dono ne ek dusarye se baat bahi ki. Ek dusarye ki baat nahi suni, ek dusarye ko samajanye ki koish nahi ki. Aur jab hum ek dusaryee se baat karna chatye the, ek dusaherye ki baat sun chatye the, ek dusharye ko samajna chatye the, tab tak hum dono mein mein bohat si duriyan paida ho chuki thi, bohat si ghalat famiyan paida ho chiki thi. Tum mujse bohat dor ho chuki thi. Tum Chandigar chor ke yahan Rishikesh mein aa gayi thi. Aur phir humari ego ne humye ek dusharye se dor kar diya. Humnye phel nahi karni cahi. Mein catha tha ke tum mujse pehlye baat karo aur tum chati thi ke mein tumse pehlye baat karo. Jiski wajha se hum dono ek dusharye se baat nahi kar paye. Aur tumnye thek kahan hum yeh sab badal toh nahi saktye per inn sab batoon ko bhul ke ek nahi surwat toh kar saktye hai na. Hum ajj ek dafa phir ek dusarye se wohi sarye wadeye karye ga wohi sari kasmye kaye gay jo humnye apni saadi walye din ki thi. Aur ab hum yeh wadye aur kasmey martye dum tak nibhaye gay.

Viren wiped Jeevika's tears and kissed her forehead, her eyes, her nose, her cheeks, her jawline and then at last he starting approching her lips. After some seconds Viren's lips sealed Jeevika's lips and they had a passionate kiss. Both of them passionately kissed each other. Both felt as they had kissed each other after ages. After minutes they broke the kissed. Viren lifted her and took her to the bed and they spent the night making love and then slept in each others arms.


Okay guys that it. I hope this OS makes any sense. It was a short one. I hope you all liked it and I am sorry if it was boring. This idea came in my mind and I just thought of writing an OS. Please like and comment. And all kind of comments are welcomed, good and bad.

ROSES OR TOMATOES?
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jenna_p thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Good one...👏
Loved it...Liked the way they spoke their heart out and sorted out ...😊
Hope Virika reunite soon in the show also and I would not want someone else interfering again..
This OS was perfect a reunion😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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no potatoes only roses roses n roses

it was freaking awesome

their convo was damn swrsome n emotional

the consolance reunion was perfect

hsjuu u rockkk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
really liked it..
do write more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so emotional & so romantic...nice os haju...keep writing
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Roses Roses Roses...
Such a lovely OS...
Just so emotional...
i hope it happens in the daily soap also...
Just mind blowing...
Loved It...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow👏your os's are amazing⭐️
Sooo emotional😭
continue soon😛
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss😆

unres

only roses hajru...infact a garland of roses🤗
that was so emotional😭
u started frm where it had ended!
wish cvs also showed something like this👏
i have no words to describe how much im impressed!!
hats off!

Edited by sanjana_cool - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update👏...loved the OS
love hw u described their feelings
n their hug n kisses😳
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UnRes

Haju only Roses ,hugs n kisses for u.

Awesome update,
brilliant,very emotional.
Virika convo was totally heart touching.

Awww the kiss 😳

Hope sumthing similar happens in serial also.
Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago

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