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arsha_simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

hyy guyss thought to write an ff
concept:

agar kria hoti present situations mein toh kaisa hota??

kyaaa rey ko kabhi kria ke truth ke baare mein pata chalta???
kya kriyaansh ki relationship ko kabhi kria ki mom accept karti??ya phir rey taani ke saath move on hota?
kya sab ko kria ke truth ke baare mein pata chalta ya phir sirf ek hi insaan ko kria ka truth pata chalta??

kya kabhi kria aur rey ek ho paayenge???

so this is the concept and here is the promooo::

bato kria tum ne aisa kyun kiya??? batao tell me the truth damnit

scene shifts:(crying) i really love u rey but mein ne mom ko promise kiya tha i m srry rally srrry
scene shifts:

mom aap aap ye sab bol rahe ho par kyun?? is everything all rite?? aap ko sach mein koi problem nahi hai???

index:

part 1-pg 2

part 2-pg 3

part 3-pg 4

part 4-pg 5

part 5-pg 7

note: pg 10

promo- pg 11

part 6-pg 13

part 7-pg 16

part 8-pg 19

part 9-pg 19

part 10 (a)-pg 23

part 10 (b)-pg 24

part 11-pg 25

part 12-pg 28

promo-pg 32

part 13-pg 35

part 14-pg 38

note-pg 41

part 15-pg 43

part 16- pg 46

part 17- pg 50

part 18- pg 55

part 19- pg 59

part 20- pg 60

Edited by arsha_simran - 12 years ago

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dancersqueen

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ayushi/Rivana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice concept.. Plz do continue n do pm me!!?

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Nivriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow! Somebody finally writes on this concept. I am looking forward to it! :)

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

whhhoooaaa

wow intresting

do cont soon

n pm me plz

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

ya sure i'll pm u guys and ty and will try to update the frst part soon...

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

do cont soon dear

amazing concept...👏👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

Superb concept..!!!
Do continue soon nd do pm me...

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awesomeee...continue soon...
n do pm me...

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

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srry guys for making u wait so here is the first partL:

PART-1

note:kria's mom has no probs wid kria's dancing from footloose competition...it's only wid rey
the story is same until indiafest (kria couldn't attend it as she cried too much and got fever)
nxt day every1 in reharsal hall:
neha: kria neha missing u sooo much i wish tum bhi aa sakti thi
vish: yaa manh she is rite v missed u soo much

wel how r u feeling now ? fine??
kria: s vishaka ty

rey in his mind: accha kyun feel nahi karegi aftrall usse jo chiya tha vo mil gaya na

just den th peon cums and says dat rdx sir is calling dem

every1 walks out kriyam atlast and rey bfor dem

swayam pulls kria in and she shouts (softly) rey hears it and trurns back and saw kriyam inside. he goes and hides bhind the door 2 listen 2 der talks

swayam: kria tum theek toh ho na?? and tumne aisa kyun kiya??
kria: haan mein theek hun swayam and meine kya kiya? turning 2 the other side

sw: tum acche se jaanti ho mein kis chhez ke baare mein pooch raha hun??

wat did u do wid rey???

kria: meinne kuch nahi kiya i just told him the truth

sw: i know tum aisa nahi kar sakti tum rey ko fool bana sakti ho par mujhe nahi...

i know everything abt u and rey and tumne rey ke saath pre-valentine's day par kya kiya i know dat also rey ne mujhe fest pe sab kuch bata diya tha... i know tumare ye sab bolne ka kuch na kuch reason jarur hai

so teell me the truth u know dat u can't lie 2 me

kria:tears in her eyes 😭) tum sach keh rahe ho swayam mein ne ye sab jaanbuchkar kiya kyun ki mom ko rey aur mere baare mein pata chal gaya tha and she gave me 2 options dat i could only perform wid u guys only if i promise to leave rey nahi toh no footloose aur meinne apne dil ki jagah apni dosti ko choose kiya aur mein kar bhi kya sakti thi?? agar mein rey koo chosse karti toh mein apni dosti kho deti and dosti is more important 2 me kyunki because of u guys mein aaj yahan pe hun...

9and she broke down on the floor) i know swayam mein bahut buri hun mujhe rey ke saath aisa nahi karna chaiye the i know i shouldn't have hurt him lekin mere paas aur koi raasta hi nahi tha i m srry swayam and i m srry rey😭😭😭

swayam crying😭; tum itni acchi kyun ho kria tum ne ek baar bhi apne baare mein nahi socha??

humare liye tumne apne dil ko chod diya kria tum bahut bahut superb ho mein abhi jaake ye sab rey ko batata hun

kria: nahi swayam tum ye sab rey ko nahi bataoge pllzzz promise me mein nahi chahti ki rey ko ye sab pata chale plz swayam plzzz promise me

swayam: but he should no the truth

kria: know but agar unhe ye sab pata chal gaya toh wo kabhi apne life mein move on nahi karenge and i'll not b able 2 break mom'm promise so plzzz promise me

swayam: of kria i promise!!!

rey: (in his mind) kria tum bahut acchi hai i m srry mein tumhe samaj nahi paya i m srry ki meinne tumhe galat samjha i m srry kria i m really srry and mein aaj jaan gaya hun ki u luv the most and i luv u too

Edited by arsha_simran - 12 years ago