TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140

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Bhumika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

so cute and sweet😃

Akhir Rey pad hi gaya Taani ke pyar me😳

Yug is so cute⭐️

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jini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

AWesome update yar
pls do pm me also ...

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Sonya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Hey dips awesome update as ever... i really love this side of sharon... precap seems absolutely intersting.

Try to continue soon.

Love

Sonu

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi guys...m back...bahot miss kiya sabko...aap sab ne kiya ya nahi???ab do din college me chutti hai aur work bhi hai...but i will try to give updates...aur iske baad next whole week our college is celebrating days ...so much fun next week ...aur aaj to hamari clg me dj tha...kyuki aaj GS election tha aur uske baad dance...bahot maza aaya...aur phir garba...i m crazy for garba...bahot maza kiya aaj...and now time for update.

next morning

Taani wake up at 6 am...get fresh and wake sharon up...

Ta:sharon...sharon utho...college nahi jana hai kya???

Sh:taani...plz 5 min...

Ta:i know tumhari 5 min kabhi khatam nahi hogi...wake up...

Sh:ok ok taani...

Sharon wake up...and get ready...meanwhile taani pray to god and make breakfast...

Then she wake yug up and get him ready...

Here with rey:

Today rey wake up early...and first he remember taani's cute face...and he strach his hands and mermered..."naughty bird"...

Then he think:"me subah subah usse yaad kar raha hu???oh rey...kya soch raha hai...college ja varna aaj phir se dant padegi "

Then he get ready and go to college...

Shani yug and dadu take breakfast and then sharon and taani is going to college...

Yug :bye mumma... Bye mom...

Shani:bye yug...

Both kiss him and left for college...

in the college

All are in rehersal hall...doing masti and pranks on eachother...

Rey is also there and his eyes are looking for someone...he is looking for taani...

All are talking about their dance now...

Vi:yar hamari dance team abhi complete nahi hai...vishakha chali gayi apne bhai k paas to ab kya??uski jagah koi aur ladki leni hogi...tabhi hamari team complete hogi...aur rey ko bhi partner mil jayegi...

(yes guys vishakha is also there...she was rey's dance partner before...but then she left college...uske baare me aur baate baad me pata chalegi)

Nil:ya dude u r right...rey...are ye rey ese kyu betha hai??

Rey is sitting near the mirror waitting for taani eagerly...bcoz he want to spend time wid her...love pe trust na hone par bhi usse taani se pyar ho gaya...par rey mane tab na...vo to yahi sanjta hai ki vo dono sirf friends hai...

Ni:rey...

Rey:ha...ha nil kya hua??

Vi:ese kyu betha hai??

Rey:kuch nahi bas ese hi...

Bh:lagta hai ki tu kisika besabri se wait kar raha hai...

Rey:ha wo nau...

All:nau...naughty bird right???

Rey:nai...nau...nau...

All:rey vo aati hi hogi...tumhari friend...

Rey:ya...my friend...

Vi:friend ya kuch aur...

Rey:kuch aur...kuch aur kya??

Nil:are kuch nahi...ye to ese hi bol raha hai...

Rey:oh...ok...

Just then sharon and taani enter ...

Shani:hi guys...

All:hi girls...

Sh:to kya discussion chal raha hai??

Ni:kuch nahi ...new dancer ke liye discussion kar rahe the...

Taani come in the rehersal hall first time...she look at the hall and her smile faded away seeing rehersal hall...

Rey notice this...

Ta:(thinking)kabhi me bhi jodhpur me apni college me dance karti thi...aur ab...jiske liye me dance karti thi infact jiskii vajah se mene dance karna start kiya tha vo hi nahi hai ab meri life me...mera last dance...i never forgot...par vihan ne jo kiya...
(taani ne ye baat sharon se chupayi thi ki vo dancer hai...)

Just then sharon call her...

Sh:taani...

Taani come to her sense

Ta:ha shar...

Sh:ye hai hamara rehersal hall...

Ta:ya...its nice...she smile fakely...

Rey:are naughty bird ...aaj badi jaldi aa gai...kal to late aayi thi...

Taani usse answer nahi deti aur vaha se chali jati hai...

Rey:(worried)aaj kuch upset lag rahi hai taani...aur mujhse baat bhi nahi ki...(jab rey worried ya tensed hota hai to vo taani ko taani bulata hai...vese hi taani bhi worried ya tensed ya sad hoti hai to pops ki jagah papa bolti hai...aur mr.akdu ki jagah rey)

All go in classes...in whole lecture taani was upset...thinking about dance...

Rey is admiring her in whole lecture...

Both were silent today...

After the lecture...all gether in rehersal hall ...

All were sitting and chit chating when...

Someone:hi guys...

All:vishakhaaa...!!!

Vi:hows u guys???

All hug her one by one...

All:we r fine...

Sh:are vishakha...meet our new friend...taani...

Taani and vishakha look at each other...

Both:tum???

Vi:oh...to tum ab yaha aa gayi...

Ta:tumhe koi problem hai kya???

All are shocked that how both know eachother???

Vi:mere bhai ko chod kar yaha aa gayi ab???

Ta:mene vihan ko choda ya usne mujhe dhoka diya???

Vi:bhai ne tumhe dhoka diya??tum unhe chod kar aa gayi...

Sh:vishakha just stop plz ...

Taani's eyes filled with tears...

Ta:no sharon...aaj mat roko plz...

Sh:but taani...it give only pain to u...

Ta:lekin ye baat clear hona jaruri hai sharon...

Vi:me kuch nahi sun na chahti...

Ta:kyu???vihan ne tumhe juth kaha hai...

Vi:i dont want to listen anything...you bitch...

Taani is now so angry...she slap vishakha tightly...and said:just shut up u bitch...now i dont want to gi e u any explaination...mene socha tha ki tum shayad meri baat samjogi... But now...i dont want to told u anything...

And she leave from there with teary eyes...

Ne:vishakha...hiw do u know her???

Vi:nothing guys...

She also leave from there...

Rey:guys hame taani ko dekhna chahiye...vo ro rahi thi...

Sh:rey...plz...abhi usse akela chod do...jub vo thik ho jayegi to apneaap aa jayegi...

Rey is very tensed about her but sharon ke kehne par vo usse akela rehne deta hai...

After the college wass over all go home...

Last rey was finding taani but cant found her...he sat on steps of corridor and just then he heard some music from rehersal hall...

He go and stand near the door of the RH and his eyes widend...

Taani was dancing ...she is doing kathak...but her expression are not visible to him...he go little closer and saw her angry and her eyes are teary...she is dancing forcefully...but she is dancing very well...her dancing level match up with them...

But rey feel his heart is paining as he see taani crying...

Music change and she is doing now hip hop...then again mysic change and she is doing free style. . .lastly again she do kathak and end her dance...and after the dance end she sat down on her knees...and cry badly...

Rey's eyes become teary seeing her crying...

He slowly go in and stood near her...

Rey:taani...

Taani slowly stand up and see rey there...

Ta:rey ...aap yaha kya kar rahe hai???

Rey:taani...u danced very well...

Ta:vo...dance...

Rey:look taani...me nahi janta tumhari problem kya hai...but dont cry plz...jese mene tumhe kaha tha ki aansu tumhari aankho me achhe nahi lagte ...rone se koi problem ka solution nahi milega...

He wipe her tears and taani look in his eyes first time very deeply...and she can see care for herself...

She lost in his eyes...again tears fall down from her eyes...

He again wipe her tears and put his hands on her shoulder...

As he put his hand...she hug him tight and cry...rey firstly shocked at her action but then he also hug her back...both hug eachother...he kissed her on her forehead and cup her face and said:taani...be strong...dont cry...me nahi janta ki tumhari kya problem hai but agar tum chaho to mujhe bata sakti ho...ok??

Taani just nodded...

Rey:now go home...

Ree again kiss her on her forehead and left from there leaving taani thinking about him...

Taani think about rey's word and rey...first time she is thinking about rey...

So guys...thats it for today...hows it?plz like and comment...

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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meinal

@cutemini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Great part

Thnx for pm

And again plz plz plzzz update wimd as well

Thnx

Xxx

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FieryLioness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

woo hoo first time i read it before ur pm

haww who the hell Vishakaha girl is 😡

aww poor Taani is so hurt😭

Dipu Sharon knows abt Vihan?

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TOOBA

@arina23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

wwwaaao dipu jaan u always rocckzz ..!

wht a mind blowing update 👏..

rey is ssooo caring n thier forehead kiss haayee

update sssoonnn..!

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
woo hoo first time i read it before ur pm
haww who the hell Vishakaha girl is 😡
aww poor Taani is so hurt😭
Dipu Sharon knows abt Vihan?

vishakha is vihan's sis...and yes sharon know but not whole truth...only she know is that vihan was her bf...and thanks meetu...for liking it...

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: arina23
wwwaaao dipu jaan u always rocckzz ..!
wht a mind blowing update 👏..
rey is ssooo caring n thier forehead kiss haayee
update sssoonnn..!

thanks jaanii...i will update soon dear...

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

vishakha is vihan's sis...and yes sharon know but not whole truth...only she know is that vihan was her bf...and thanks meetu...for liking it...

oh ok i thought Sharon knows everything...

chal next update soon plz

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