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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Saans mein teri saans mili toh

Mujhe saans aayii ...



Katttooo

what an angle☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

daro mat... iss duniya se tumhe chupa ke rakkhunga... hamesha ke liye ❤️




haan bas khud mat chupna😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
my all time favorite...


haan pappi kahin aur jagah ho sakti thi... magar no complaints. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

my all time favorite...



haan pappi kahin aur jagah ho sakti thi... magar no complaints. 😳


Ishhh 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago




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Part 6


"Nahi", I tried to hold her but she moved away from me this time.


"Kitni aasaani se aapne keh diya mein mar jaaunga, hamesha ki tarah apne hi baare mein socha hein na, ek baar bhi mere baare mein nahin socha ke mein kaise jeeungi aap ke bina tab bhi aur aaj bhi, Nahi na"?

"Geet" I tried to say something but was cut off in mid,


"Nahi ab aap kuch nahi bolenge aaj mein bolungi aur aap sunege samjhe aap".

I realized this was her much needed outburst and let her voice out all her hidden pains and sufferings.

"Har baar dusron ne hi meri zindagi ke faisle kiye, bas bol diya gaya, faisla suna diya gaya,

bas koi sawaal nahi aur jawaab maangne ka to hume haque hi nahi hein na".


"Ladkiyaan ghar ki izzat hoti hein, par ladki ki koi izzat nahi jab chaha apna liya, jab chaha chod diya kyun humaara apni zindagi par koi haque nahin, bas dusron ke faisle maante raho..."

She was so right it had always been that way she was always forced to obey her not so worthy family members who were so full of themselves to even acknowledge her identity, she was always lost in the crowd named family.



But she wasn't done yet, grabbing my collar she continued her eyes drowned in only pain and misery.


"Aap ne bhi to yahin kiya, maan liya ke aap mere liye theek nahi, aap mujhe khush nahi rakh paayenge, mere sapne ko pura nahi kar paayenge, kyon kisne aap ko haque diya hamaarein baarein mein akele faisle lene ka"?

"Soch liya aapne ke mein uske saath khush rahungi, ke yahi hum dono ke liye theek hein, uss din jab mein chahti thi ke aap mujhe rok le to kyon mooh fer diya aapne boliye jawaab dijiye na"?

"Acchi tarah se jaante the aap ke mein aap ke liye kya mahsoos karti hoon aur aap bhi wohi mahsoos karte the,

phir kyon apne unn ehsaason ko aap ne daba diya,

kaise maan liya ke mein aap ko, jisse mein dil aur aatma se judi hui hoon usse bhul paaungi,

mein aapke man ki baat samajhti thi, phir aap kyon jaankar bhi anjaan bane rahein mere ehsaason se ".


"Boliye kyun mujhe chod diya aur ab kyon rok rahein hein.Sab kuch badal gaya hein ab, Geet ka yahan rehna Maan ke liye theek nahi hein, sab khatam ho gaya hein, sab khatam ho gaya hein Maaannn..."

She just sank down on the floor sobbing holding my legs.

Her outburst had shattered me, she all the while knew about my fears, my pain, my quest to deny our feelings,


Our Love...She always knew.


I thought only I could read her eyes but today the fact she too could not only read my eyes but had the power to penetrate deep in my soul had left me astounded.


Yes only she had the power to rule Maan Singh Khurana's heart and soul, no matter the distance, no matter the restrictions and no matter the silence... nothing could change this FACT that she was there right there Always...

And I had failed yes The Maan Singh Khurana had failed in protecting her, I was responsible for for all her sorrows. Had I claimed her that day she wouldn't have faced so much, she wouldn't be used as a pawn. She was broken, shattered, troubled. Tears rolled down my eyes to see her love for me even after all she endured just because of me, she was still worried of my safety.



She confessed her love and her claim on me with such ease.I just hugged her tight never to let her go.She too reciprocated the hug crying in my arms.

"Geet kuch khatam nahi hua, hum ek nayi shuruaat karenge yahaan se. Meri galti ki jo chahein sazaa de do, par mein tumse vada karta hoon jo beet gaya usse hum badal nahi sakte par hamara kal hum zaroor sawarenge".

I knew I had rubbed into her hidden wounds but for healing them sometimes you need to clean deep making them bleed and I had just done that but now those wounds will soon heal and I will make sure they do.

Right now My Geet needed me, the rest can wait though not for long cos its payback time soon for Handa's and Khanna's... Just Beware!!!!




Precap - Twist😕



Part 7






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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤔

CONfused...

Geet itni acchi kyu hai 😳

Poor soul...u made me cry😭

Waiting for maan ka revenge🥳

She has gone thru so much...she desreves her rainbow...even if its khotta maan😡

TWIST😡


Edited by aashluvsmaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan finally raste pe agaya
confontration was needed
twist...tu bhi de ne lagi...Doc kafi nahi thi kya ...
jaldi dena...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
going to read the whole thing... 😳

EDIT:
amazing plot heytal 👏 beginning it was a bit confusing but once i got it, it was truly amazing!! the depth of pain both characters had to go through due a silly miscommunication was heart wrenching... geet was totally right in questioning him... mistake has been done and i hope both sail on the same boat to relieve each other and salvage each other's pains!! 😭

waise voh kya tha end mein... twist 😡
Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb finaIIy she spoke and poured her heart

and itni jaldi twist

kya hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heytal, story has me spellboundOne after the other, awesome updates👏
What an emotional battle she faces, how does she trust him now? Why would he let her go in the first place?
I do feel bad for him. Seems like his heart was in the right place. Not sure why he let her go..
Do continue soon
Thanks for updating!!!
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago

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