ff - deewane

hey guys,
thinking to write my first ff on rishbala.

warning -
1. my grammer isnt very good. so if there is some mistakes, do feel free to correct me.
2. this is a complete fiction, and the story will be quite different from the show.

so here the ff starts...



It was early morning... the entire village seemed was asleep...
when she got up, making sure not to wake up anyone, placing her feets slowly on the floor making sure her anklets doesnt make much noise.

she walked out of her house... to the garden outside
atlast she took a deep sigh of relief - thank god kisine ni dekha...
she smelled the fresh air... wowww its jst so amazing...
wish she could be here all the time..

she frowns - huhh.. but papa never lets me come step out of the house.
and if i manage to come out toh.. *her face fills with irritation as he remember the person* toh that stupid chamcha spoils everything...


madhu smiles - but aaj toh wo bhi so raha hai abhi tk.. hehe
now i can do wht ever i want.

she starts twirlling around the trees, jumping on the grass laughing out loudly.

when someone calls her out - maddhhhuuu

she stop then and their...
placing her hand on her head - sshhiittt...

madhu turns around..her eyes almost closed..lips tugged under her own lips..
she whisperes under her breath - not again..chamcha is here..


right in front of her was standing the so called CHAMCHA.
clad in a dhoti and vest...
his body shining under the early morning sun ray..

he came walking towards her.. -
Aap..aap yaha kya kar rahi hain.. what are you doing her choti malkin...

madhu lowered her eyes... wo mein..mein..

when he stops her - get inside the house.. you father doesnt like you being out..

madhu frowns yet again...
guy - jaiye...

madhu taking big step walks inside the house.. inside her room..

huhh huhhh huhhh
kitna ganda hai wo.. what a big chamcha papa ka... uske mummy papa ko uska naam chamcha rakhna chahiye tha na ki rishabh.. huhhh




guy do let me know how you found it