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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Wow amazing update nyc all part are febulash
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
wow super iwas missing kriyansh pair 🥱because of tani 😡thanks for super ff post it soon ur ff is super😛😃😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Awwwhh ...very cute one !!

Avi dekha ur FF ... Truely amazing and sweet ...

Do continue sooonie ...

Wanna read more of it ...

Kriya's b'day bash is gonna be exciting !!!

Jaldi jaldi update ...

And do PM me !!! =D


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice ff, please pm me when you continue

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyya..Guyzz I knw m updating dis ff after long time..bt was vry busy as I started 2 other works..so kk ab aur nai tadpaungi..here I go..



PART-5:

recap:

every1 planning 4 kriya's b'day n kriya is worried whether dey all know tht 2morrow is
her b'day.

In d evening,every1 in der homes planning n working on d work given 2 dem.here rey is waiting 4 12'o clock
2 arrive so tht he could give her surprise...

Now its 11:30...rey is getting more exited n starts frm his house.

he soon reaches kriya's house n climbs through d pipe.he sees kriya sleeping peacefully.
he enters n comes n sits beside her n starts admiring her...donno hw much tym he was admiring n admiring her...

later kriya nutches n suddenly opens her eyes n sees rey

kr:rey tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

rey is still admiring her suddenly comes 2 senses on her calling.
re:voh bas esse he aaya tha..

kr:rey tum pagal ho gaye ho kya...wht... r u gone crazy?

rey again realises tht he hv 2 take her out 4 d surprise so he tells her..

re:kriya tum mere saath abhi chalo...

kr:nahi rey aap pagal ho gaye ho kya abhi eesi waqt n looks at d clock n sees its 11:30...nahi..

re: abhi chalo plzz varna mein tumse baat nahi karunga..

kr:accha tekh hai chalo...par rey hum jayege kaha se..agar hum darvaje se gaye toh koi dekh lega
ab hum kaisse jayege rey..

re:ya na...idea...hum kedki se jayege

kr:wht.. mein kedki se...rey mein aapke jaisse kedki se nahi chad sakti...nahi...
mein nahi kar ni wale haa ok...

re:kriya mein hoon na plzz chalo naa..(pouted)

kr:par kaisse..she asked innocently

rey slowly takes kriya down by d pipe n by going down suddenly kriya slips n he hold her
tight n helps her frm falling down.

kr:oh god!!! hum neche aagaye hai

re:kriya yeh toh bahut simple hai na...

kr:simple.. aapko simple lag tha hai kya..mein neche girne wala thi agar
aap mujhe nahi pakdh the toh

re:kriya ab chalo

kr:par rey aap kaha le jaa rahe ho plzz batao

re:kriya nw come wid me..

kr:but rey

Suddenly rey takes a red ribbon n blindfold her so tht she could not know whr dey r gng.

kr: rey aap mujhe yeh kyun baandh rahe ho

re: kria tum bhi itne sawaal pochte rehti ho?? ms.baatcutter plzz questions puchna baandh karo.

In car,rey is super excited whr kriya is very confused ke aakir
rey usse kaha le jana chahta hai..

Finaaly d spot has come whr rey had 2 give his surprise 2 her,he gets down d car n make kriya come
out of d car.


kr:rey hum kaha pe hai..bholo na rey plzz..

rey looks at d watch only 1 minute is left 4 12o'clock so he takes her fast near d spot whr he hv 2
give his surprise..

he slowly untie d ribbon n kriya is still closing her eyes

whn she opens her eyes,she sees...

tht...

tht...tht...(accha ab bahut wait karvayi na soo...)
she in d beach...

kr:wow rey beach...

re:HAPPY B'DAY KRIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!

kr:rey...aap ko yaad tha meri b'day..

re:hey mein apne baatcutter ka b'day kaissa bhool saktha houn,essa kabhi huwa kya?

kr:rey THANK U SO MUCH!!!!!!! n hugs him tightly n kisses on his cheek,rey is surprised by her move
.
re: abhi chalo aur bahut saare surprises hai tumhare liye

kr:ohh wow thts relly awesome...

rey takes her 2 a place wer its full dark n suddenly d lights r put on..

its a vry beautiful place...
{ pic }

PART-5:

recap:
every1 planning 4 kriya's b'day n kriya is worried whether dey all know tht 2morrow is
her b'day.

In d evening,every1 in der homes planning n working on d work given 2 dem.here rey is waiting 4 12'o clock
2 arrive so tht he could give her surprise...

Now its 11:30...rey is getting more exited n starts frm his house.

he soon reaches kriya's house n climbs through d pipe.he sees kriya sleeping peacefully.

he enters n comes n sits beside her n starts admiring her...donno hw much tym he was admiring n admiring her...

later kriya nutches n suddenly opens her eyes n sees rey

kr:rey tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

rey is still admiring her suddenly comes 2 senses on her calling.

re:voh bas esse he aaya tha..

kr:rey tum pagal ho gaye ho kya...wht... r u gone crazy?

rey again realises tht he hv 2 take her out 4 d surprise so he tells her..

re:kriya tum mere saath abhi chalo.

kr:nahi rey aap pagal ho gaye ho kya abhi eesi waqt n looks at d clock n sees its 11:30...nahi..

re: abhi chalo plzz varna mein tumse baat nahi karunga..

kr:accha tekh hai chalo...par rey hum jayege kaha se..agar hum darvaje se gaye toh koi dekh lega
ab hum kaisse jayege rey.

re:ya na...idea...hum kedki se jayege

kr:wht.. mein kedki se...rey mein aapke jaisse kedki se nahi chad sakti...nahi...
mein nahi kar ni wale haa ok...

re:kriya mein hoon na plzz chalo

kr:par kaisse..

rey slowly takes kriya down by d pipe n by going down suddenly kriya slips n he hold her
tight n helps her frm falling down.

kr:oh god!!! hum neche aagaye hai

re:kriya yeh toh bahut simple hai na...

kr:simple.. aapko simple lag tha hai kya..mein neche girne wala thi agar
aap mujhe nahi pakdh the toh

re:kriya ab chalo

kr:par rey aap kaha le jaa rahe ho plzz batao

re:kriya ab chalo..bas chalo mere saath.

kr:par rey..

Suddenly rey takes a red ribbon n blindfold her so tht she could not know whr dey r gng.

kr: rey aap mujhe yeh kyun baandh rahe ho

re: kria tum bhi itne sawaal pochte rehti ho?? ms.baatcutter plzz questions puchna baandh karo.

In car,rey is super excited whr kriya is very confused ke aakir
rey usse kaha le jana chahta hai..

Finaaly d spot has come whr rey had 2 give his surprise 2 her,he gets down d car n make kriya come
out of d car.


kr:rey hum kaha pe hai..bholo na rey plzz..

rey looks at d watch only 1 minute is left 4 12o'clock so he takes her fast near d spot whr he hv 2
give his surprise.

he slowly untie d ribbon n kriya is still closing her eyes

whn she opens her eyes,she sees...

tht...
tht...tht...(accha ab bahut wait karvayi na soo...)

she in d beach...

kr:wow rey beach...

re:HAPPY B'DAY KRIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!

kr:rey...aap ko yaad tha meri b'day..

re:hey mein apne baatcutter ka b'day kaissa bhool saktha houn,essa kabhi huwa kya?

kr:rey THANK U SO MUCH!!!!!!! n hugs him tightly n kisses on his cheek,rey is surprised by her move.

re: abhi chalo aur bahut saare surprises hai tumhare liye

kr:ohh wow thts relly awesome...

rey takes her 2 a place wer its full dark n suddenly d lights r put on..

its a vry beautiful place...
(Guys plz imagine tat d beach was little dark as its night..n decorated..)

Der were 2 chairs n a table on whch der was a birthday cake...written "HAPPY B'DAY BAATCUTTER

kr: wow rey dis is my best birthday celebration ever...thnq u so much 4 dis.

re:aww...kriya come lets cut d cake...

kriya cuts d cake n feeds it to rey n thn rey 2 kriya...

dey sit 4 sometym n chitchat n suddenly rey took out her b'day present

re; kriya dis is 4 u..

kr: wow...!!! thnq u rey..

kriya opens her b'day present in whch der was a platinum chain wid a
heart shaped pendent written KR on it. On opening d pendent,der was a picture of kriya n rey on
either sides n mere bina song is been played as BG music..

kr:wow...!!!!! rey its juszz awesome...really i loved it..n dis song wow..its my favourite 1

re: its my pleasure darling...

kriya slowly took rey hand n enclosed btw hers n she became little centy n touched

kr: rey thnq u so much 4 dis n I LOVE U rey...

re: kriya I LOVE U TOO...

tears come out of her eyes...actually dey were khushi ke aasu..

re:hey kriya...dont cry baby.. not atleast now on ur b'day comm on

And kriya n rey go 4 a walk on d beach...rey hugs kriya frm sidewards n kriya
hugging him by waist.

suddenly kriya stops n comes in front of him cuppes his face n slowly pecks on his cheeks thn his forehead..

n thn rey leaned forward n took her lips in his n first d kiss was soft n
thn it turned 2 a passionate one..dey broke d kiss due 2 lack of oxygen

kr:rey chalo bahut dher hogaye hai...ghar chalte hai na

re: yaa okk chalo...

dey both drove to raiprakash mansion...

kr: rey hum andar kaisse jayege??

re: jaisse aaye hai waisse jayege haa..

kr: hey mein nahi chadne wali...seriously rey uthar na toh easy tha par mein nahi chadoongi

re: ab hum kaisse andar jayege

by thn sharon messages rey tht..

sh: rey kya tumne sweeto ko surprise dediya??

rey replys bck

re: yaa par hum ghar ke bahar hai...aur hume andar aana hai

sh: rey dont worry mein darvaja kol thi houn kk

re:ya sharon but slowly aunty uncle uth jayege

sh: yaa kk


And sharon comes down opens d door

kr:sharon...tum

sh: HAPPY B'DAY KRIYA... (in low voice)

kr:thnq u par sharon...

sh: kriya mujhe sab kuch pata chalo andar aajao

kr: par kaisse..??

sh: rey... (smirked at him)

kr:rey tum ab jake sojao kal college
mein milte hai bye..

re: par kr..i..

sh: kriya sone jaa rahi bye gd nite...

kr: yaa bye...n sharon leaves n rey standing der wid his hands folded

kr: rey ab jao na kal subah milege gd nite...

re: kriya par mera gd nite kiss

kr: rey...

re: kriya mein gd nite diye bina nahi jaooga

kr: rey yeh kya bachpana hai koi dekh lenge

re:koi nahi hai yaha..sirf mein aur tum

n pulls her closer n says

re: ab jaldi dho mujhe mera gd nite kiss

kriya had no chane n pecks on his cheeks..

kr: ab chalo byee...

re: nahi yaha bhi..(showing his other cheeck)

kr: rey tum bhi na.. n pecks on other cheeck

kr: rey ab jao..byee..

re: byee kriya n he leaves...

kriya goes to her room..n drifted to sleep thinking abt her first bday wid her rey..



Phew..finally..
I hope u guys liked it..do hit d like tab n comment..plz
Nxt update ll be on pg 30 n want min 45+ likes..zyada hogaya na..bt it reli encourages..to write even more..


Precap
Kriya's birthday..wid gang n full on masti...nd..
Kriyaansh romance chup chup ke..


Luv ya..
Deepsha


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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
amazing update...
the surprise is superb...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
Kriyaansh celebrating Kria's b'day
Loved it
precap is exciting
update soon
thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Nice update. . . .
Wow our rey is super romantic. . . .the way he treatd kriya was awsome. . . .
Lovd the KR moments. . .
Nxt part super jaldi krna. . .
And do pm me wen u update. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
amazing..
read it all today in a go..
loved it..
kriyaansh rock..
update soon..

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