RiShBaLa Os SeRiEs - 2. NEW: BADMASH

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EarlyYoungTimes

@EarlyYoungTimes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

mr.gupta ko kuch help chahiye thi meri, toh main unhe help kar rahi thi.", jeevika said with lot of difficulty due to Rishabh's breath on her cheeks and his lips in her neck.

very well written and passionate part 2 but do you write on Viren-Jeevika? or else what is this(above)..

i am confused...plz do reply

and thnx for the pm

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

@vishruta: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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vishruta

@vishruta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

mr.gupta ko kuch help chahiye thi meri, toh
main unhe help kar rahi thi.", jeevikasaid with lot of difficulty due to Rishabh's
breath on her cheeks and his lips in her neck.

very well written and passionate part 2 but do you write on Viren-Jeevika? or else what is this(above)..
i am confused...plz do reply
and thnx for the pm

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Actually I had written this for viren-jeevika but I also felt it was suited for rishbala
the reason I changed the characters
sorry for the mistakes done

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Oh woww... The second OS was superb. I wish we'd get to see something like that in the show also.

Well written.

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Clara20

@Clara20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome update dear...pm me wen u update next

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

👏aww this is just too adorable! How cute is this relationship! Wonderfully written! 👏

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Read the first OS and I love it. Don't know if you drew inspiration from Vabhiz but, I love that girl. Can't imagine how much hate she has to take. Very well written👏