TAAREY OS- aakhir pyaar ho hi gaya!

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hi guys! here is your cutie but this time with a one shot. this os is dedicated to nikhita(nuckts) jisne mujhe ye likhne ke liye kaha! this is for u nikhi!😊here u all go-

TAAREY OS: AAKHIR PYAAR HO HI GAYA!

Dance ban was over. There was no confession between taarey but they became normal and behaved like friends. Rey was still thinking that it is not love.

shivam was there in the college and was close to taani but as her best friend. And rey was also okay with him but sometimes he gets jealous.

It was a pleasant day. Taani and rey got ready and came to the college. From one side taani was coming and from other side rey was coming.

Both didn't saw each other and BOOM! They crashed into each other. Rey kept his hands around her waist in order to prevent her from falling and taani's hands went up to his shoulders.

She has closed her eyes in the fear of falling and our rey is watching her lovingly thinking how innocent she is. Slowly taani opened her eyes and found herself in rey's arms who was gazing at her intensely.

She got lost in his deep brown eyes. Shivam was searching for her. Where was she? Suddenly he spotted her in the corridor lost in rey's arms.

He smiled but soon he remembered that he has to talk to taani and rey something important. It's good that both of them are here. Shivam reached to them.

Shivam- taani sun!(no response) rey?(no response)taani!(again no response)

He waved his hand between them but koi fayada nahi! He finally shook them and they come to their senses.

Shivam- kahaan kho gaye the tum log?

Taani- wo, wo(shivam cut her)

Shivam- accha wo sab chodo mujhe tum dono se kuch important baat karni thi!

Taarey- haan bol na!

Shivam- chalo canteen me jaake baat karte hain na!

Taarey- ok chalo!

They reached at the canteen and sat there.

Shivam- to baat ye hai ki ek ladki hai(taani cut him)

Taani- oh my god! You are in a relationship! And on top of that you didn't bothered to tell me about it! This is not fair romeo!

Shivam- are taani(rey cut him)

Rey very happy- congratulations yaar! But ye sab kabse chal raha hai? N uska naam kya hai?

Shivam- uff guys listen to me first! Ek ladki hai jisse mai pehli nazar me pyaar kar baitha! Her name is nikhita!(nikhi ke man me laddoo phoota!)

she is so beautiful! So cute! Innocence ki to murti hai wo! And this time I am really in love! uski adaaon pe mai mar gaya! Actually we know each other from about a month but I don't know anything about her feelings for me! Guys please help me out!

Taarey- yaa but hum?

Shivam- only you guys can help me! Please, please!

Taani- ok! But tu to sachi ka romeo nikla haan!

Rey- ok so let's plan something!

Taani- haan but romeo tu jaa hum dono plan decide kar lenge aur agar tera kuch kaam hoga to tujhe hum bata denge!

Shivam- haan I agree with her! Tu jaa!

Shivam- ok! But kuch sochna zaroor! Ok bye then!

Shivam went from there. Taarey were thinking what to do.

Rey- kyun na hum unhe ek kamre me band kar dein and they will confess! Haan yahi sahi hai!

Taani irritated- dimaag ki dahi hai!

Rey- what!

Taani- nikhita jooton se maaregi shivam ko!

Rey- but kyun?

Taani- girls ko ye sab pasand nahi! Humko to khuli hawa, sunset, nature ye sab pasand hai! To kuch aisa hi sochna!

Rey- ok then how about a date?

Taani- date? Nikhita maanegi?

Rey- arey I mean thode samay ke liye bahar ghoomna!

Taani- nice idea! Par kahaan ghoomenge dono?

Rey- how about a dinner?

Taani- rey abhi to kaha na ki khuli hawa, nature aur thodi privacy! Aur waise bhi isse to saaf-saaf zahir hai hota hai that it's a date!

Rey irritated- to kya beach par ghoomenge dono? Kya baat karti ho yaar!

Taani- rey you are a genius! Kya idea hai!

Rey- but maine kya kiya? Wait a minute, beach!!! Isse behtar jagah aur kya hogi! Yes jagah final! Hum unki date uh I mean walk beach par fix karte hain!

Taani- haan uske liye bhi preparations karni hogi! I mean wo wahaan kyun jaayenge? Koi purpose to dena padega na nikhita ko!

Rey- haan to usme kya hai! Wo log wahaan ice cream khaane jaayenge!

Taani- nahi rey! Wo wahaan panipuri(golgappa, in our language gupchup) khane jaayenge! Girls love panipuri! And waise bhi itni thand me kaun ice cream khata hai?

Rey- arey thand me ice cream khaane ka to mazaa hi kuch aur hai! And wo panipuri kitni unhygienic hoti hai!

Taani- nahi rey wo panipuri khane jaayenge!

Rey- maine kaha na ice cream!

Taani- panipuri!

Rey- ice cream!

Taani- panipuri!

Taarey were fighting like kids suddenly our very own nikhita enters. She saw taarey and went to them.

Nikhita- hi guys! Tum dono kis baat pe lad rahe ho?

Taarey look at each other. Then a idea comes into taani's mind.

Nikhita- wo hi nikhita! Wo kya hai na aaj mai aur rey beach par jaa rahe hain so main keh rahi hoon ki hum wahaan panipuri khayenge and rey keh rahe hain ki ice cream khayege! Ab tum hi batao!(she signs rey that it is her plan to convince nikhita)

Nikhita- arey guys itni si baat! Ek kaam karo aap dono cheezein kha lo to problem solved!(apni nikhi samajhdar ho gayi!)

Taarey- correct!

Taani- waise nikhita tm bhi saath chalo na!

Nikhita- arey guys me kya karoongi wahaan aakar?(chal jhoothi!)

Taani- arey chalo na romeo uh I mean shivam bhi aa raha hai!

Nikhita- shivam! Okay mai aaungi!(dil mera shivam(lavin) se milne ko bekarar hai, kaho na pyaar hai!)ok bye meri class hai!

Taarey- bye!

Taarey were going to hi5i each other but stopped in the middle. There was an awkward moment between the two.

Rey- chale? Humaari bhi class hai!

Taani- yaa bhai wait kar rahe honge!

They moved to the classroom n all seats were full only two seat in the front to the right was vacant. Taarey seat together. Shivam was right behind them.

Shivam whispered- hey guys kuch socha?

Taani- haan tum dono beach par jaaoge ghoomne! Aur wahaan tu apni dil ki baat keh dena!

Shivam- ok par kya nikhita maanegi?

Rey- humne already use mana liya hai!

Shivam- WHAT!!!(little louder)

Everyone in the class look at him.

Teacher- kya hua shivam?

Shivam- sir, wo, wo mujhe samajhme nahi aaya! Please aap mujhe fir se samjha denge?

Teacher- ok!

Shivam whispers- thank you very much guys!

The bell rangs and the college ends. All went to their home and decided to meet up at 4:30 in the evening to go on beach(only taarey and shikhita).

It was 4:15 and rey first went to taayam's home to pick up taani. rey knocked the door(bell kharab tha) and swayam opened the door.

Swayam shocked- rey tu yahaan? Koi baat nahi andar aa!

Rey- umm swayam mai yahaan taani ke liye aaya hoon! Use bula na late ho raha hai hume!

Swayam- kya tum log kahin jaa rahe ho?

Taani from behind- haan wo hum beach par jaa rahe hain ghoomne!

Swayam turned and both the males saw the beauty looking like an angel. Rey was like staring at some goddess of beauty! Taani saw him, he was also looking handsome. Actually for her he is always world's most beautiful man!

Rey-


Taani's dress-

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Swayam suspiciously- sirf tum dono?

Rey- nahi wo shivam aur nikhita bhi aa rahe hain!

Swayam- oh ok! Par jaldi aana!

Taani- yaa! bye bhai

Rey- bye dude!

They went to rey's car and rey like a gentleman opened the door for her. Taani smiled and went in. rey sat and they drove off.

They went to pick shivam. He came and he was looking very handsome.(nikhi behosh mat hona kyunki abhi tera aur shivam ka proposal baaki hai!)

Shivam-


Taani- wooo! Romeo aaj nikhita ko behosh karne ka irada hai kya?

Shivam- taani partner ye to bas aise hi!

They went to nikhita's home. Nikhita came and sat and firstly noticed shivam n he too noticed her.

Nikhita's dress-


Shivam- nikhita you are looking gorgeous!

Nikhita- thanks n you too are looking very handsome!

Taarey- arey bhai koi hum par bhgi dhyaan de!

Shikhita- you bot are also looking awesome!

They reached at the beach.

Taani- chalo guys paani puri khaate hain!

Nikhita- uh taani tum rey ke saath jaao mai n shivam ek walk par jaate hain!

Taani- arey kyun? Chalo na guys!

Rey caught the hold of her hand pulled her with him.

Rey- yaa guys we are going u guys enjoy!

Taarey went to a little distance.

Taani- rey aap mujhe aise kyun kheench laaye?

Rey- taani kya bacchon jaisi baatein kar rahi ho! Nikhita shivam ke saath walk par jaana cjahti thi aur tum ho ki kabab me haddi ban rahi ho!

Taani- sorry! Wo mai bhool gayi thi! Ok chaliye panipuri khaate hain!

Rey- ok but mai nahi khaaunga!

They went to panipuri stall.

Taani- bhaiya mujhe dena par thoda zyada teekha !

She put one panipuri in her mouth.

Taani- umm kitna tasty hai! rey aap bhi khaayiye na!(takes it to rey's mouth)

Rey- nahi taani! nahi!(he jerked her hand so harshly that it hurted her)

Taani started crying.

Rey- I, I am sorry taani! mai tmko hurt nahi karna chahta tha! I am ver sorry!

Taani goes and sits on the bench nearby! Rey thinks how to manaofy her. Suddenly an idea struck him. Her goes to panipuri stall and brings two panipuris in a plate. He goes and sits near her. Rey puts one in his mouth and found it really very tasty.

Rey- umm kitna tasty hai!(a little louder so that taani hears it)ab ye wala last hai ise kaun khayega? Ab koi nahi kha raha hai to mai hi kha leta hoon!(he was about to eat but taani quickly snatched it and ate it ) to mujhe maafi mil gayi?

Taani- haan par aapko mere saath panipuri khaani hogi!

Rey- of course!

(nikhi don't worry shivam tujhe propose karne jaa raha hai! be prepared!)

Here with shikhita-

They were walking on the sand, the waves were touching their bare feets, the ind was playing with her hairs making him fall in love with her more n more. Sun was going to set in just 15 mins. Shivam held nikhita's hand. Suddenly shivam stopped her in their way.

Shivam- nikhita! I wanna tell you something! May I?

Nikhita- yes! Go on!

Shivam bend down on one knee looking at her lovingly. Here our nikhita's heartbeat was increasing with each n every second.

Shivam- nikhita tum mere liye iss duniya ki sabse khoobsoorat ladki ho! Jabse tumhe dekha hai sirf tumhare baare me hi sochta hoon! Meri subah tumhare naam se shuru hoti hai aur raat tumhare sapno mai khoye!

Mujhe nahi pata tum mere bare mai kya sochti ho! Shayad mai tumhare liye ek friend se badhkar kuch nahi par tum mere liye sab kuch ho!

Aaj tak kabhi himmat hi nahi hui ki tumhe bata sakun ki mere dil me ya hai kyunki dar lagta tha ki kahin humaari dosti bhi khatam na ho jaaye par aaj me kehta hoon ki I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU NIKHITA!

Nikhita was dumbstruck. After getting no reaction from nikhita shivam got up.

Shivam- tum mujhe thappad marna chahti ho to theek hai maaro!(he closes his eyes)

He was expecting a tight slap from her but instead of that he felt feathered soft lips on his cheeks. Shivam was shocked.

He couldn't believe that he got what he loved the most and now he was feeling like he has won the whole world. Nikhita broke the hug.

Nikhita- I love you too shivam! Mai to bas tumhe like karti thi but wo kya hai na bata nahi payi! But now i admit that I love you!

Shikhita interwined their hands and continue their walk but this time with a different feeling. Here our taarey were also walking but far from shikhita.

Suddenly taani's phone beeped. It was a message from shivam it was written- we are in a relationship now! Thank you both! Taarey saw it together and in happiness hugged each other. But soon they came to their senses.

There was an awkward moment between the two. To avoid that taani went and sat on the sand. Rey comes and sat beside her. Wind is playing with her hair, in background the sound of waves are making all this more beautiful.

Rey- taani you are looking beautiful today!

Taani- thanks!

Rey in his mind- kya mujhe sachem pyaar ho gaya hai? shayad haan! Mujhe taani se pyaar ho gaya hai! akhirkar kyun na ho? She is beautiful, cute, sweet and has a golden heart!

Jabhi use dekhta hoon to usme kho jaane ka man karta hai! itni innocence to maine aaj tak nahi dekhi! Agar ise pyaar kehte hai then I am in love! I am in love with taani shekhawat! Aur mai aaj hi taani ko bata ke rahunga!

They both were looking at the waves. Rey slowly kept his hand on taani's hand. Taani looks at him. Rey looks at her back.

Rey- taani mai kuch kehna chahta hoon!

Taani- haan kahiye!(pushing the a lock behind her ear)

Rey- taani mujhe pata nahi ye kaise ho gaya but I LOVE YOU!

Taani- WHAT!!! Oh rey aap Mazak kar rahe hain na!

Rey- nahi taani! ye tumhe maak lagta hai? mera yakeen karo I love you(holding her hands)

Taani- mai kaise aapka yakeen karu? Pehle jab mene aapse kaha tha ki aapke liye mere dil mai feelings hai tab aapne mujhe harshly reject kar diya to suddenly aapko mujhse pyaar kaise ho gaya?(having tears in her eyes)

Rey- taani ye sab kuch suddenly nahi hua hai ye sab to tabse hai jabse tum shivam ke saath relationship me thi! I am sorry taani ki us din maine tumhe itni harshly reject kiya but uss waqt mai kisi relationship me jaane ke liye ready nahi tha!

I am feeling like killing myself! Maine tumhe kitna hurt kiya hai! I am sorry taani! I am really very sorry! Lekin agar ab tumne mana kar diya to mai toot jaaunga!(crying)

please taani mai ye sab firse nahi seh sakta! Please taani mai jaanta hoon ki you love me so jhooth bolne ki koshish mat karna!

Taani- haan I love you! I love you very much!

They both hugged each other tightly. They broke the hug. Taani kept her head on his shoulders and rey kept his arms around her claiming that she is his forever!


They were looking at sunset. There shikhita were also enjoying the sunset. Both the couples were enjoying the first day of their relationship.

ok guys here this ends! how was it? please do comment because they are very precious for me😊 and nikhi tujhe to sabse bada comment karna hoga! hit the like button too!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww.. so cute and romantic OS... Loved it!!

Nuckts.. u r really lucky dear!! Loved it so much... Shikitha ka confession...aww...😳 Taarey ka as usual...😳 Cutiee... a BIG hug from me..🤗 Such a cute work...😳 Awesome! Fab! Fantastic... ... ... 😳 Keep writing dear!
Congo Nikita *Nuckts* 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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college day ki strting mein taarey ka is tarah milna😳 awsm idea ☺️shiwam loves nikitha Taani irritated- dimaag ki dahi hai!🤣 nice dialoge 🤣 tr confession was mindblowinggg😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Curvmars

Aww.. so cute and romantic OS... Loved it!!

Nuckts.. u r really lucky dear!! Loved it so much... Shikitha ka confession...aww...😳 Taarey ka as usual...😳 Cutiee... a BIG hug from me..🤗 Such a cute work...😳 Awesome! Fab! Fantastic... ... ... 😳 Keep writing dear!
Congo Nikita *Nuckts* 😃

thanks dear! n ya nikhi is very lucky!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lavi_taarey

college day ki strting mein taarey ka is tarah milna😳 awsm idea ☺️shiwam loves nikitha Taani irritated- dimaag ki dahi hai!🤣 nice dialoge 🤣 tr confession was mindblowinggg😃

thanks dear n wo dialog meri ek friend ne mujhe kaha tha jab maine use ek lame sa idea diya tha!😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks dear!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

thanks dear n wo dialog meri ek friend ne mujhe kaha tha jab maine use ek lame sa idea diya tha!😆

ohh padha toh itna mja aya suna hota bed pe hijump krne lagti
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG...dis was sooo cute!!! Shivam,,,and ur friend nikita.. aaawww...Shikita,, awww...nikita ki toh nikal padi...
loved Shivams dialougue wen he proposed her!! m sowrie Taareynians but more thn Taarey's part i loved Shikita's part in dis story... and end mein sunset...blush blush...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww it was so cute n sweet!!! loved it dr!! lovrd both the couples ...!!! taare yar jus amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

Wow. Very romantic confessions

thanks dear!😊

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