TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

taani ke words ka itna effect rey par!! wo bhi milne se phele. socho agar wo dono milgeye to??? 😆

but really waiting for tht moment!! ur such a great writer dipu di!!

and poor yug 😭 he heard everything.

really waiting to see wat happens nxt!! but i know taani wil handle yug very well!! lukin forward a touchy update (if tht's what u've planned).

thanks dear...i will update soon...

Originally posted by: dh19

loved it dear.
taani ki bat sunke hi rey pe uska effect hone laga. just wow...
Taani and sharon are living in the same apartment...
yug heard that he is not taani's son😭.. hope taani will handle everything...
thanks for the pm and do update soon.

thanks...

Originally posted by: tarey_forever

wow its awesome

n oh god yug ne sun liya...

hope sab thik ho jaye

plz update soon

n thanx 4 d pm😊

thank u rythsy...ya badhu saru j thase...

Originally posted by: khyati2000

Dipu, u r the best writer👏...will be eagerly waiting for the next part

thank u khyati...

thanks all of u...for ur love...

Guys here is the next part...i know aaj ek hi update diya but kal pakka where is my diary part 24 update kar doongi...tab tak enjoy this...

Yug run from there...

Sharon and taani run after him...

Taani's dad is in kitchen...

Yug go in his dadu's room and lock the door...

Taani and sharon are knocking the door...

Taani:yug...open the door...

Sh:yug...yug darwaza kholo...

Ta:yug mumma aap ko bahot sari chocolates lake degi...yug...plz open the door...

Hearing this noise taani's dad come there...

Td:kya hua beta???

Sh:vo uncle yug ne ye sun liya ki vo taani ka beta nahi hai...

Ta:papa ...mujhe bahot phikar ho rahi hai...yug ne andar se darwaza bandh kar liya hai...

Tears are falling down from her eyes...

Sh:taani...calm down...yug abhi darwaza khol dega...

Td:taani...apne aap ko sambhalo...

Then taani's dad said to yug:yug beta...darwaza kholo...dekho aap ki mumma ro rahi hai...aap unhe chup nahi karvaoge???

Sh:yug...dekho agar aapne door open nahi kiya to...to...aap ki mumma aap se kabhi baat nahi karegi...

Ta:ha yug...me aap se baat nahi karungi...

Inside the room yug is sitting on the bed...hearing this he open the door and again sit on the bed...

All sighed bcoz yug is alright...

Taani said to sharon and her dad:aap log yahi ruko me baat karke aati hu...

She go in and sit near the bed...yug and taani are face to face ...

Taani is staring at yug...there is no tears in his eyes...

Yug:i hate my mom...

Ta:but kyu yug...isi liye ki me aap ki real mom nahi hu???

Yug hug taani and said:i hate my real mom...jisne mujhe akela chod diya tha but i love u...i love u mumma...u r my real mumma...jisne mujhe itna pyar diya...kabhi mujhe ye realize hi nahi hone diya ki i m not your son...aap hi meri mumma ho...i love u mumma...

Ta:ha yug...me hi aap ki mumma hu...

And she shower kisses on his face...

Yug wipe her tears with his tiny hands...and put his forhead on hers...then both hug eachother again...

And then they go in the hall smiling...

Td-so...lagta hai situation under controll hai...

Ta:ya pops...situation is under controll...hai na yug???

Yug:yes mumma...

Both sit on the sofa...

Yug see sharon and ask to taani:mumma...ye kon hai??

Ta:ye hai sharon aunty...

Yug:sharon...aunty...!!!

Ta:ha...meri best friend...

Yug:nai...yug inhe sharon aunty nahi bulayega ...

Sh:achha...to kya bulaoge aap mujhe???

Yug:i will call u maasi(mom's sister is called maasi)...and wink his eye at sharon...

Sh:maasi...so sweet of u yug...

Yug:mumma...i have a surprise for u...

And he run into the room and come back running...

He give taani a pocket watch...jise open karte hi yug ki favourite poem play hoti hai...

"twinkle twinkle little star
How i wonder what u are
Up above the world so high
Like a diamond in the sky"

And then "i love u mumma...u r the best."

Ta:yug...this is the precious gift for me...love u...she kissed his forehead...

Yug:love u too...

Sh:u two are so cute...hai na uncle???

Td:ha...too sweet...

Sh:achha yug...maasi k liye koi gift nahi laaye???

Yug put his index finger on his lower lip and said:nahi...par aap ke liye bhi le aaunga...ok maasi???

Sh:ok...

Just then sharon's phone rang...its rey...

Sharon pick up the phone...

Sh:ha rey bolo...

Rey:sharon tumhe yad hai na kal se college start ho raha hai????jaldi aana...

Sh:rey...GS tum ho...to tumhe jaldi jana chahiye...and i know tum late ho jaoge...

Rey:no...kal me time par aaunga...

Just then taani said something to yug and rey heard it...

Rey thinks...ye to vo hi aawaz hai...

Sh:rey...rey...

Rey:ya sharon...

Sh:kaha kho gaye...???koi ladki to pasand nahi aa gayi ki uske dreams me kho gaye????

Rey:what rubbish sharon...me and love???no chance...

Sh:rey...life me har kisiko ek baar to pyar hota hi hai...

Rey:mujhe nahi hoga...

Sh:dekh lena...

Rey:dekh lunga...but plz kal tum jaldi college aa jana...

Sh:ok baba aa jaungi...aur swayam???

Rey:ha tumhara swayam bhi aa jayega...kyu ki uske bina to tum kam hi nahi kar sakti...

Sh:ha ha abhi chidha lo mujhe...jab tumhe pyar hoga na to phir dekhna ek ek ka hisab lungi...

Rey:esa moka hi nahi milega tumhe...

Sh:ok ok...hum baad me discuss karte hai...

Rey:ok...bye...

Sh:bye...

Then sharon to taani:ok taani...bye...kal milte hai...

Ta:umm...sharon...ek baat batani thi...

Sh:ya bolo...

Ta:i m joining st.louis...

Sh:what...????taani...tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho...???oh my god...ab hum sath me padhai bhi karenge????i m so happy taani...and sharon give a tight hug to taani...

Ta:sharon...i cant breath...

Sh:(broke the hug)oh...sorry sorry...

Ta:to kal hum college sath me...

Sh:taani...sirf kal na mujhe jaldi jana hai...new students and all...but uske baad pakka hum sath jayenge...ok????

Ta:ok...

Sh:bye...

Ta:bye...

Then after an hour...

Ta:yug...chalo...dinner kar lo...

Yug come there and silently eat his dinner...

Taani and his dad are surprised...

Ta:(to his dad)pops...my detective agency is saying that...koi to baat hai...aaj yug bahot silently betha hai...

Td:mene bhi notice kiya...tum ne usse koi promose kiya ho aur bhul to nahi gayi na???

Ta:pops...mujhe na...yad nahi hai ki maine koi promise kiya tha ya nahi...

td:hmm...lagta hai tum kuch bhul gai ho...jao pucho...

Yug go in room and taani go after him...

On the bed ...yug is sitting with both his hands on his chin...

Taani came and sit against him...

Ta:kya hua ...???mera bachha mujhe nahi batayega??

Yug look in opposite direction...

Ta:shona...where is your smile???mere jeans ke pocket me???let me check...nahi hai...to kaha hai...kaha hai...and she start tickling him...

Yug:ha...ha...ha...he...he...mum...mummaaa...stop...mummaaa...hahahaha...mumma...plz stop...

Ta:hmmm...now ok...ab batao kya baat hai..???itne chup chap kyu the???

Yug:aap mere liye icecream nahi layi na!???make puppy sad face...

Ta:oh...sorry beta...bhul gai...plz forgive mumma...me abhi lekar aati hu...ok???

Yug:no mumma...abhi nahi...aap kal lana...abhi raat ho gai hai na???to aap kal le aana...

Ta:my samjdar bachha...ok...chalo ab mumma kitchen clean karke aati hai...phir hum sath me aap ka fav cartoon dekhenge...ok????

Yug:ok mumma...

Here with rey:

Rey on his bed...

"aaj phir vo hi aawaz...kon hai wo...us se to milna padega ...uske hisab se love is magic...par mene to aaj tak love me sirf fight hi dekhi hai ...love changes life???life complicated ho jati hai...but rey...why are u thinking so much???tujhe us se kya???tu love me believe nahi karta par vo karti hai...sabki apni apni soch hai ...tu so ja varna kal phir late ho jaayega..."

And rey sleep...

Here yugaani also sleep...

In the morning...

With rey:

Alarm rang...

Rey forward his hand and stop it...and again sleep...

Here taani wake up and freshen up...then she wake up yug and get him ready...then she make breakfast and all eat...

Taani look at watch..."oh god ...first day and m late ...jaldi karo taani...pehle hi din koi late hota hai kya???

Here rey's phone rang and its swayam...

Rey:swayam ...kya hua???subah subah disturb kyu kar raha hai??

Sw:excuse me mr GS...u r late...come fast...

Rey jump in his bed...

Rey:oh dam...oehle hi din late...bahot dant padegi...chal me 10 min me aata hu...

Rey freshen up and rush to college...

Here taani said to yug:yug...dadu ko jyada tang mat karna...ok???

Yug:ok mumma...bye...

Taani kiss his forehead and said:bye...she also rush to college...

Both reach at college same time...but both are late ...

In the corridor...rey is coming from left and taani is coming from right...

Both are walking looking here and there...all students are in classroom...

Rey thinking...agar kisine dekh liya ki GS khud late ho gaya...to me to gaya...professors to student ko bhi nahi jane dete agar vo late ho...to me to student and gs dono hu...oh god plz bacha lena...

Both are walking not looking straight and **bang**...

Both collide with eachother...both fall down...rey on left side and taani on right side...

Taani and rey both are angry...both stand up...

Ta:aankhe hai ya button...dikhai nahi deta kya??

Rey:oh...exvuse me...tumhe dekh k chalna chahiye na...

Ta:ek to galati karo or upar se mujhe suna rahe ho aap ...

Rey:galati tumhari hai ...tumhe dekh k chalna chahiye tha ...

Ta:aap ki galati hai...

Rey:tum...but just then he saw a proffesor coming there...

Rey grab her from her waist and both are in an empty classroom now...

Ta:aap ye...

But rey cover her mouth with his hand...and said:shhh...

other hand is around her waist...

Both are so close to each other...first time both look into eachother's eyes...and get list in it...tr bg tune...

Both come to their sense very soon...

Rey:chup raho...agar proffesor ne dekh liya to do no ko punishment milegi...

They stood there in the same position for five minutes...then come out...

Both are going to their class now...

Ta:(lightly)galati ki aur sorry bhi nahi bola...

But rey heard it...

Rey:suno angry bird galati tumhari thi...ab ussa mat karo aur mujhe sorry bol do...

Ta:sorry...me kyu bolu...galati aap ki thi...aur me angry bird...to aap...mr.akdu...jo kisiko galati karne par bhi sorry nahi bolta...

Rey:tumne mujhe akdu bola...

Ta:ha bola to...kya kar loge aap???

Rey:me...

Just then their class is there...so they stop fighting...

Taarey:we r come in sir???

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