OS: Jor Ka Zhatka...(imp note pg 4)

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He lay on his bed on stomach. Sleeping peacefully. His half mouth is open. Suddenely his cell buzzes. He just turn his neck on other side , but his phone is still ringing. Now in sleep he forwar his hand & try to find somthing, his eyes are still closed. Finaslly he got what he want , a pillow. Hr grab thata pillow & place pillow on ear , so he sleep peacefully. Phone ring stop. He feel happy. But his happiness not long lasting , his cell again start ringing. He throws his pillow on floor & murmued , " Ab is time kon ho sakta hai , yaar koi sone bhi nahi deta." He yawing & look at phone. He lazily pick his cell & ans it.
"Hello " he speaks lazily.
"Shree , sorry iss time tumhe phone kar raha hue , but baat kuch urgent hai."
"Hmmm , i can understand Dadu. " he ans in sleepy tone.
"Dadu ????, Shree i am not your brother , I am Rathod .. "
" Rathod Sir , ohh sorry sir , mai vo neend mai tha , i thought ghar se call hai."
"Its ok Shree , acutally sorry mujhe kehena chayie tha, forget it.. ok kal early mrng mujhe Commissioner ke ofc jana hai meeting ke liye , tumhari files ready kar do ."
"Par abhi.." Shree amusedly ask him.
" Shree , mai tumhe 3 din se bol raha hue , i know you , get up & complete work. "RTathod orderd him.
"Hmmm , kar dunga."
That night Shree work whole night , " Ek raat mil gayi thi sone ke liye , vo bhi inhone cheen li , pata nhi hamesha mai hi milta hue inhe." He murmued to himself.
At Morning
Shree calls Rathod that files are ready. Rathod request him to come home with files. Shree gets ready hurridly & reach his Cheif's home on his bike.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manu.. Great Start... bechare shree.!!! he had to get up from sleep and need to finish the work.. Rathod is like his big brother.. even he didn't like to wake him up but duty comes first... when I am reading this i can imagine my self in this state.. my TL is just like rathore.. I work on critical assignments and tasks... when ever i am done with my task, my TL asks me to complete documentation, but documentation is such a boring work,🄱 i will keep pushing it to end.. at the end after completing assignment.. while every one partying.. to deliver my documents, i had sit back.. bt my TL is so good.. he accompanies me and shares my work 😃, he treats like a small kid..!! how much ever he scolds.. no way i can't change just like shree..!!!
Edited by Sandy914 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Zhatka...lagta hai kuch nayasa waiting for us

Update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

OMG... cant simply stop laughing...

the first paragraph... uff... simply awesome and hilarious...

perfect detailings... šŸ‘

waitinggg... update as soon as possible... šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 13 years ago
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He park his bike in bunglow's parking area. He goes near stairs & clibing them. He lift his gaze to see one girl yes one girl wearing a short dress try to pull big suitcase from stairs. Shree rub his eyes.. " Rathod Sir ke ghar ladki , nahi yaar Shree tu galat ghar aaya hai." He thinks to himself. He goes to front door & look at watchman. "Watchman bhi vahi hai " He look at house." Ghar bhi vahi hai."
Shree again goes to staris & start to climbing . After few steps he saw that girl stading on stairs , she must be tired. She wipe out her sweat with tissue. Shree can't see her face , bcoz she turned her back to him. Her hair rested on her shoulders peacefully. Shree look at her dress & gulped down "Itni choti dress aur vo bhi Rathod Sir ke saamne." he thinks to himself.
Girl Dress
Suddenely that girl turn around & look at Shree. Shree just shock to see her.
"OMG Ankita R. The famous model ." Shree thinks to himself.
His eyes popped out. Shree is crazy fan of Ankita , she worked many ads , models hunt , worked as jujde in some shows. She handle many top leading brands. She is the face of Asia.
Ankita raise her eyebrow & look at Shree. Then she look at herself head to toe. " Why he is looking like he sees any 8th wonder of world.?" She senses that boy comes near to her. She scared , but chose to keep mum.
Shree comes to close her & ask her , "May... may... i... i... help you?" And look at bag.
Ankita just shrugges her shoulders & and ans him "Hmm , ok."
Shree take bag & start to climbing again. After 20 steps he reach door. He rings bell. Rathod's servant open door. Shree & Ankita comes in. Shree leave her bag there & goes to sit on sofa. Ankita sits on chair & throw her cell on table. She gather her hair & twisted them & then she cover them with a clip. Shree just look at her.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one... Manali Di! 🤣

Indeed 8th wonder dekha hain!!...hamari Super model Ankita *coughs* : P

Rathore sir ke saamne itni short dress mein...lmao šŸ˜†

Ab lagege aur jhatke! 🤣

Continue soon di! 🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update Manali! šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What...shree anki ka diwana hai...


Shree...sach mein jhatka laga...aree mujhe nahi...sneha ko...jab usse pata chalega to tera kya hoa... 🤣
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Shree sees one tatto on her backside of shoulder. It s heart shape & wings sourronding them. somthing written in that heart shape. Shree sees very carefully & found initials are there " Love You S.R" "Ye S.R kon hai ?" Shree thinks to himself. Ankita feels that boy gazing at her back, so she look at him with questioning eyes. Servant comes there with glass of water. Shree takes glass & hurridly gulpes down that cold water in hot environment. Ankita drinks half & look at servant. "Mai 3 din nahi aayegi." Servant informs her. Ankita noded & ask her "Aur vo ..." , " Andar hai" servant replies Ankita gesture her to go. Servant smile at her & goes. Finally Shree gathers courage.
"Aap Ankita ho na ? The famous model? " He ask her
"Ys" Ankita ans him in smile.
"I am Shree , Rathod Sir ke sath kaam karta hue ETF mai." He give stress on ETF.
"Oh , thts gud." She replies him with smile.
Ankita pick glass & put them in tray & goes inside of house .
"Jarur Sir ki koi rishtedar hogi. " Shree murmued to himself.
Ankita comes hall & ask him "Coffee."
Shree feels very happy. He only seen her on T.V. But today she is standing in front of him and asking him Coffee. Shree nods. Ankita's gaze fell on her suitcase. she dragge her suitcase in near room. She keep her bag in one corner & heard Water sound. "Hmmm , shower bath " and smile to her self. She goes to kitchen. After 10 mins Rathod comes to hall & sees Shree "Good Mrng Shree." Shrree also greet him. same."
"Kya baat hai , aaj ekdum khush ho?" Rathod ask Shree while weraing his watch.
"K...kuch nahi... aise hi.." Shree ans him & try to catch glimpse of her , but she is nowhere to seen. Rathod check his cell for toaday's meetings. Suudenely he heard her voice "Good Mrng" Rathod turne around & see Ankita is standing there with lovely smile on her face. Rathod also smile back her.
" Come , Coffee is ready " and agin goes to inside.
Shree promise himself aaj ek photo to Ankita ke saath pakka lunga." 😊and follows Rathod who already goes inside of house. Shree comes inside of the house. & looks surroundings. He com there first time. He admire his Chief's home & taste . Interior is just ossam. Suddenely he shock , he sees big frame in front of dining table. In that pic Rathod wears White colour shirt & black 3/4 pant with avitors , his first 3-4 buttons open reaveling his chest & Ankita stand very close to him rest her head on his chest & cluch his shirt by hand. Rathod rest his hands on her waist. Ankita wears White t-shirt with red colour 3/4 pant. Shree notices satisfaction & happinees in Ankita's eyes. Rathjod sees that & smile , "Vo ... vo Honeymoon pe li thi." Rathod infromed him. Shree just nooded to him. Shree is in big shock. He knows Ankita is married , but with Rathod Sir. He llok at him. Rathod knows what he look for , "Yes , we are married from 4 years. Actually we meet in Bengal Beauty contest 4 years ago. Where she participatred . And fell in love immeadtly." Ankita comes in hall with Coffee tray & some biscutis. She also prepare sandwitches for both. She place Coffee mugs in front of both & seat on chair oppisite Rathod.
"So , hws your tour?" Rathod ask her.
"Fantastic " Ankita reples with excitement.
Rathod drinks Coffee slowly and checking Shree's work. Shree gulped down hot Coffee in on sip. Like thristy ppl drink water. Ankita & Rathod look at him amusedly.
Ankita is confused what happened to Shree , while Rathod knows Shree got shock . He remebered when he takes Ankita to his Haveli to meet his parents. His sisters looked at her astonishdly. They can't believe that the most famous model is at their home & their brother want to marry her. but after marriage Ankita wins all heart .
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st part:
bechara shreešŸ˜†, Rathore not letting him sleep at all

for the others: resšŸ˜‰
Edited by haruhi26 - 13 years ago

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