Hey chweeto... 🤗
You know,i wasn't online when this ff started..I got a serious 'jhatka' seeing 16 long chaps already posted.. 😛 😃
Then i started to read one by one.Awesome write baby.Till now i have just completed 4chaps.. 😛 and will surely complete very soon. 😊
I am going to put 4 comments for 16 chaps.. 😃 one for four updates..hop
e,its ok with you.. 😳
CHAP-1 to 4
Coming to introduction of characters..great concept,esp Swaron being best buddies and Rey after Sharon!! 😉
All the chaps are written beautifully with needed bright colors,giving it a different feel.. 😊
Baby,i must say,u have mastered in describing Swaron's natkhat khatta-mitha fights.It serves to be an ornament to ur ff.The introduction of jungle trip idea in the second chap made me go crazy to read the next one.Loved the dialogues made by the gang members and Swaron-as usual,stole my heart.. 😃
Swayam's extra possessiveness towards his buddy was well portrayed and sharon,hiding her's is really very interestinh to read.Looking up to sharon's increasing jealousy towards swayam and new character,priyanka being together.. 😊
Love tanzz.. 😳
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