FF: D for Desire #2 (Ch 15 - 21)

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aurap

@aurap

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#741

going home... awww so sweeet...😛

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

I really love the way all your updates ooze oodles of sensuality and tension. It's like a tango dance... :D

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

amazing update:) jus loved it:)

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#744

wowww...
a very sensuous n amaxnggg update...
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thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

That was amazing!!!!
Arnav making omeletes awww... :)

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bs_deeps

@bs_deeps

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Did I read something now? nooo...I didn't...or I dont remember anything...? whatever...

I just know why you finished the update so quickly...😉

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I didnt think I would come back and update this comment...LOL...you know I find it difficult to

comment on certain updates..😊

I am loving this journey back home...reminding me of "Made Of Honor" where both the leads ended up sleeping together first and then friends and how love blossomed..

Not exactly the same...but I could see some similarities...

"I am really, really hungry. I can have anything you serve. You want any help?" What was Khushi thinking when she said this? Was she talking about omlete at all? 😉 oh..yeah...he needs your help 😳

"But looks can be deceiving" Here is another cunning dialogue...LOL..was she not referring him?

I dont like when Arnav is flustered...So I was totally relieved when tables were turned, bcoz we know what will happen when Arnav is back in form, 😆

This one line is enough to talk about his character... "Khushi ..," he murmured with desire & affection, "We can .. just keep it at this tonight .. .."...He is not weak..and that is how

we want to see our ASR...

You know your characters so well dear..no messing up...straight from the heart...take your own time...continue this wonderful journey till they are home...(I am not talking about the precap 😛)

thanks for another wonderful update... 👏

Edited by bs_deeps - 12 years ago