New FF ideas Virika/Virman

Would just like some opinions on this ff ideas.

Character Sketch
Viren and Virat- Hot, Handsome and cool guys. Viren has finished his studies for a lawyer a year ago but hasn't been working as one. Virat is currently studying to be a lawyer. They both love to party.

Jeevika and Maanvi- Both gorgeous, bubbly and outgoing. They love their Swamini Bua very much and never go against her decisions. Jeevika has finished studying and Maanvi is currently studying.

Swamini Bua- Not a Vadhera and related to them in any way. Loves Jeevika and Maanvi to the core and wants to them have the best life. Initially thinks the Vadhera brothers are not good for Jeevika and Maanvi.

Karan- Thinks he'll waste his live marrying Jeevika. Hates both Jeevika and Maanvi. Prefers to party and have one night stands. A total idiot bacisally.

Plot: Swamini Bua wants Jeevika to marry Karan, son of a rich businessman. Also wants Jeevika and Maanvi to stay away from the Vadhera boys.

Wow its looking Awesome.
Continue soon n do pm me

wow nice concept

seems really interesting waiting for the 1st part continue soon

Suamini loves maanvi hahaha great yaar cont soon

Thank you for all your opinions. I shall be putting up chapter 1 soon. I am also currently thinking of a title, but I am open for suggestions.

love the concept

very interesting

Hey guys, Just posted chapter 1.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3413100&PID=75040239&#75040239

Also if you want a pm for my updates, just like this post.