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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

They met after a long time and finally Geet broke down in his arms. We may be very strong but there is someone who is so much apna that only he can bring out our innerself...Maan brought out the pain he has been hiding...us se toh kuch chupa hi nahi sakti woh...

very painful part and I really hope she accepts her brother and finally he helps her in getting that man and woman down...


Yup she finally broke down and it is definitely needed for her.. yeah people who are close to our heart only can make us feel this way 😳 and rahi geet ki baat she just cant do anything without maan.. hope geet understands both maan and karan, their confrontation is on the way..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

awesome part.. wht Geet is upto now.. waiting for next part

thanx for pm😊


Thank you dear, hmmm have to wait to know what geet is planning 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for ur update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 28



Maan and geet shook their hands, hoping their plan will be successful and rano will get justice while mohinder and his so called love interest will be punished for what they did. A satisfactory smile formed on geet's lips which made maan happy. Geet hugged maan feeling so happy, if he was not there with her now then she might have lost her battle. She is so glad to have maan by her side when she needed support. Its always him who helped her and today also he did the same.

"Thank you thank you thank you maan, I am so happy. Pata nahi, what I have done without you. But when you are by my side nothing to worry, you will correct my every wrong step and make it success" told geet kissed his cheek. "I am always at your service ma'am" said maan bowing his head. Geet giggled at his antics. "Maan, today I want to stay with you" told geet. "You said I am going to leave you now. 6 years you tortured me but not anymore" told maan hugging her tightly. But he only received a slap on his biceps. "Ouch' what was that?" asked maan. "I tortured you, ha?" asked geet angrily. "Aur nahi tho kya, first 3 years you were angry on me and didn't talk to me. Next 3 years, you always busy and called once in a while. You are so cruel. I hate you, I know you don't love me" told maan making sad face. But geet only giggled, because it her who always accuse him saying he don't love her. Now hearing same from him made her smile, and thought how foolishly she behaved the first 3 years.

"Aww my maan is angry?" asked geet innocently. Maan nodded for a yes. "Then what should I do?" asked geet. Maan is just looking here and there ignoring her question. As they are in the garden, geet took the water pipe without maan's knowledge. She started watering maan, laughing loudly. "Geet geet stop it, what you are doing? Pagal" shouted maan coming close to geet. Maan acted fast and took the pipe from geet, now geet is all wet from head to toe. "You moron, idiot what you did?" shouted geet angrily and took other pipe. "Isse kehte hain tit for tat" told maan and laughed out loud.

"Guys, what is happening here?" came a voice. Geet looked at them while maan turned back to see his friends are back. Geet felt uncomfortable suddenly as she is all wet and her dress is glued to her body like a second skin. The throwed the water pipe aside and went inside excusing herself. Maan too is embrassed seeing his friends giggling at him. Before anyone talk they heard a scream. "Maaan"

All of them panicked hearing her scream. "Geet geet where are you?" shouted maan from the hall worriedly. "I am in your room moron" shouted geet back. Maan rolled his eyes hearing moron and understood there is nothing serious. For a second she really scared him. Maan entered his room.

"Maan, what you have done. Because of you I am stuck here" shouted geet from washroom. "What?? What did I do?" asked maan confusingly. "What was the need to water me? now I don't have any spare cloths, what should I do now?" asked geet making baby face. "Its all you started and blaming me. kya zamaana aagaya" taunted maan. "Now stop your non-sense and do something" shouted geet back indicating that she is really in a very very bad mood.

Their sweet convo is loud enough that aparna who came to her room heard them. She is surprised and shocked to see maan arguing with geet, by now she understood that geet is not that sweet too. She is full into sherni mood. She smiled and took her bag, she took out a pair of clothes and knocked maan's door. Maan opened the door to see who it is?

"Maan here are my cloths, give this to geet" told aparna. Maan smiled and took them. "You saved me today" thanked maan and knocked the washroom door. "Kya hain?" shouted geet. "Cloths" shouted back maan. "Ohhkk" geet opened the door and stretched her hand out to take them. Maan sighed, he went to his cupboard and took out a pair of dry cloths changed them before geet come out.

Later they both went down to see his friends, maan introduced karan and aparna to geet. Geet and appu clicked easily and became good friends. After talking for a while, geet called rajni to tell she will be with maan for today. "Geet, why don't you call them for dinner today? They all will be tired of journey. Call them geet" told rajni. "Ok maa, we will be there" told geet and cut the call. Geet informed same to them.

By 8pm they all reached Raichand Mansion, Rajni and abay welcomed them. Abay and maan talked for sometime, maan is happy to meet him. Till today he just talked on phone but not in person. Geet went to her room to freshen up, maan and his friends are in hall talking with abay and Mr. Raichand while Rajni is busy in kitchen. Suddenly there was a power cut, because of that the whole house became dark.

"Geet dad" panicked abay. "What happened?" asked maan worriedly. As expected they heard a scream from geet's room, to their luck power came within few seconds but there few seconds done its damage. Abay with maan rushed to geet's room followed by his friends. When they opened the door, maan's heart pained. Geet sat in one corner of the room all shivering. Maan rushed to her. "Geet, geet what happened? Open your eyes" called out maan. Geet is shivering badly and is afraid. "Maa, meri maa ko mat maro. Maaa" shouted geet and fainted. Maan is shocked, he immediately took geet in his arms placed her on the bed. He tried to wake her up.

"Geet, geet open your eyes. See geet its me your maan please open your eyes. No geet to fear geet, your maan is with you" tried maan again and again. Silence prevailed in the room for some time, they are just looking at geet. After some time geet woke up which came like a shock to raichand's. After the panic attack, she wont woke up until the next day, but its like a miracle. She opened her eyes in few minutes. She saw maan beside her and hugged him tight. Rajni wiped her tears feeling relief.

No one talked about the panic attack, all were busy in talking and teasing each other. While maan's full concentration on geet, he need to know what happened to her. Mr. Raichand saw maan is not participating or even listening to their talk. He called maan out. "Maan, come with me. there is something I need to complaint you about geet" told Mr. R

Geet looked at him wide eyes, "Papa, this is cheating" pouted geet. Maan tried to smile but the previous incident which took place didn't allow to. He went out with Mr. R. they both are in garden. "So maan, what is bothering you?" asked Mr. R. "Nothing uncle" told maan. "I am a psychiatrist maan, I know you are tensed about geet. am I wrong?" asked Mr. R

"Yes uncle, I want to know what happened to her" confessed maan. "Maan, I will tell you everything. The first thing is that geet lost her childhood" maan nodded what he is referring. "The truth that she came to know about her dad is killing her inside, when she came here at first she use to have nightmares like her dad killing her mom. They increased day by day to that extent that she was afraid to go out alone. As a doctor I treated her, gave her all love which she missed from her dad" maan is shocked to know this piece of information about his geet.

"Thinking continously about those incidents again and again it effected her very badly. After few months she was ok, but she is afraid of dark. When ever she is alone or in dark she will get panic attack, shouting for her maa. Her dad's truth effected her deep inside her that her brain is always thinking about that. Normally when she get panic attack she wont get up till next day but today she was ok and didn't think about the attack. I think you are effecting her maan, your love and support will effect her and soon she will get rid of this panic attack" completed Mr. R only to see maan in tears. Maan wiped them, he is angry on himself for not being there with his mishty when she needed him the most.

Now he is surely afraid of telling the truth to geet. "I am afraid uncle, may be again because of me she may not be come out of her shell" told maan in trance. Mr. R looked at him confused. "The brother whom geet is searching for years is my friend Karan who is inside, I know the truth of him years back but didn't tell geet as he is not his father. He is good at heart and loves his sister. when she comes to know about this will she forgive me?" asked maan not able to think anything.

"Definitely not Mr. Khurana" came a voice, when they both turned back saw geet standing there.

Precap: 😡😭


A small question, i am embrassed to ask this but i have to. Well whom do we call tayiji ??? Sorry actually kannada is my language so i dont know what is this meant? Please anyone can clear?


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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...ooops geet knows about karan .uff
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh kya abhi mile hain and nw this Karan problem

m scared tat geet will hutrt herself and maan also

superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet moments were too good...
Maan worried about geet getting these attacks...poor girl
Geet came to know about karan...how will she react...waiting for the next part eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
We call tayji 2 papa's elder brother wife...
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lovely update
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