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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IndYa4u
First of all... WOOO HOOO... She's baaack.. Finally.

Now on to the episode...

Awwweee
Whattey sweet scene. Loved the ruthna-manana part. Conversation between Ram and Priya that you write are so natural and easy to visualize. 👏

Poor RK... pre-wedding celebrations ruined by Cady (Bwahahahaha) but it sounds like guy has a plan. 😲

P.S. Why do i get the feeling something horrible is about to happen?? Since you are writing such sweet scene now and the "can't meet before the wedding day" scares me as reader... Happy moments b4 the bubble burst?? 😳

Dont worrry !

Thanks ! 😳

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
That was a no need to say awesome wala update.. U presented The most common yet 2 important files of our life and i must say that it was presented more than perfectly... All through the update was little small but am happy bcoz there was some really gud rayalious moment, and i really need them to ourcome from the current balh track... U write so well then why dnt u give as sooner updates..? Gr8 work and thanks for the pm.. Hope this tym u will update soon..

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asheema_sharma
Awesome update...
Luved RaYa moments...
Eagerly waitin for ram Plan Of Action ...
Do update soon...

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gupta90
ohhh what a lovely update and you are right reverse psychology does works everytime😃

your style of writing is really different and its good, keep writing😊

Looking forward to the next update😊

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: balhfan4ever
Kebab mein haddi Cady kahan se aagaye 😆...update was super cute and that reverse psychology trial was fantastic 👏. What is Ram upto now? ...looks like he is determined to spend his night with Priya😳

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

been waiting for so long to get the update and my wait pays me off, I loved it, thanks for PM dear, liked the idea of reverse psychology, yes it really works, in fact I have applied this quite a few times in my life and it worked...kabhi kabhi u have to adjust for others, recently I didn't wish to do go some place but had to visit coz it was my duty so u see u can't do ur manmani every time...continue ASAP, oh!, by the way how was ur exam?, I hope it was gud, take care and all the best for results

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

EPISODE 9-

Scene 80- Raat akeli hain...

Ram sat on his bed in his room,thinking what to do !
Ram in his head- Main aise haar maanke nahi bait sakta... !

He thinks of an idea and picks up the phone & calls priya who was with cady in the guest room !

Priya who was just about to sleep,sees her phone vibrating..

Priya-Hello ! Ram.. (she whispered softly, intending not to wake cady up)

Ram-Priyaa.. ( he seemed to be in pain)

Priya-Aap teek toh hain na ? (she seemed worried )

Ram-Nahi.. mere sir main bohot dard ho raha hain.. aur meri tablets bhi nahi mil rahi ! could you please come here & get me my tabs !

Priya-Aap.. aap rukhiye main abhi aati hun ! Lie down.. I.. I.. will there ok ?

Priya quickly got up from her bed,without wasting a moment.. She slowly & quickly moved out of the room... But Cady was fast asleep !

Priya entered Ram's Room... It was a little dark.. She saw the tablets on the Tablet But she couldnt find Ram.. She seemed worried...

Ram came from behind & hugged her tightly...

Ram-Oh.. I missed you so much !

He kissed her on the back on her head

Priya turned towards him !

Priya-Aapka sir... (she stopped & realised his plan) aapko ye mazak lagta hai na ?! pata hain main kitna darr gayi thi ! (she frowned)

Ram-Toh main aur kya karta ! Tumhare liye toh tumhari dost hi important hain na.. !

Priya-Haan..Aaap hatiye.. main jaa rahi hun...

She pushes Ram & heads towards the door !

Ram Rushes and closes the door & locks..

Priya-Ram..

Ram keeps his finger on priya's lips..

Ram-Shh... I am sorry.. ok ? Aage se aisa mazak kabhi nahi karunga..

Priya removes Ram's Finger.. and holds it !

Priya-Pakka promise ?

Ram-Haan.. Pakka promise..

Ram holds her by the waist & is about to kiss her...

But Then they hear Cady screaming out Priya's name..

Ram-Shh.. Koi awaaz mat karna...usse pata nahi chalna chahiye ki tum waha ho.. ok ?

He whispers to priya..

Ram-Isse pata kaise chal jaata hain ?! Jab bhi hum saat hote hain toh ye haddhi aajati hain..

Priya-ram...

Priya sees her phone vibrating..

Priya-Its cady..

she Shows Ram her phone..

Ram-math uthana..

Priya-I have to pick it up..

Ram-Nahi..

N they both pull the phone.. But in that keecha taani the phone falls down.. & gets switched off...

Priya-Mera phone..

Ram-accha hua..

oUtside-

Cady-Ye priya apna phone kyun nahi utha rahi.. ?!

She goes down searching for priya..

Priya-Ram.. abhi Mujhe jaana hoga kyunki wo abhi aapko doondte hue idar hi aayegi..

Ram tries to stop her.. but she slowly opens the door.. & slowly walks out..

Ram puts his head out to see if priya reached her room.. Meanwhile Cady sees Ram..

Cady-Ram.. tumne priya ko kahi dekha kya ?

Ram-(wipes the scared look)-Uhm.. Nahi toh.. wo toh tumhare saat hi so rahi thi na...(He spoke in a harsh tone)

Cady-haan.. lekin..

Ram-lekin kya ?! Jaake teek se dekho.. apne kamre main hi hogi... (he spoke rudely)

Ram-khud toh sothi nahi.. dusro ko bhi sone nahi deti..

He muttered & banged his room door on her face..

Cady-Isko suddenly kya hua ?!

Cady went to her & was shocked to see priya in her bed..

Priya pretended to be asleep..

Cady-Priya...

she shook priya..

Priya-haan.. kya hua ?

Cady-tum kaha thi ?!

Priya-kya matlab kaha thi ? yaha par tho thi ! so rahi thi... lagta hain ke tum tag gayi ho.. soo jao.. subhe tak sab teek ho jayega...

Cady lied down with a confused look...

Priya faced away from cady.. And began to think about Ram...

Scene 81- Raat abhi baaki hain...

Ram lied on his bed with his eyes open..

Ram got up from his bed...

Ram-Bas ye hi ek rasta bacha hain...

Ram went down.. He took a ladder with his and leaned it against the guest Room window..

Ram-apne hi ghar main choron ki tarah gussna pad raha hain...

Hey bhagwan.. Ye kya baat hui ?!

Ram slowly climbed up... He finally Reached the window...

Ram knocked on the window..

Priya who still wasnt asleep.. opened her eyes...

Priya-OMG ! Ram...

she slowly got out of the bed.. and opened the window..

Ram-Hii...

Priya-aap ye bolne ke liye waha par aaye ho ?! wo bhi aise... choron ki tarah..

Ram-Nahi.. main toh tumhara phone dene aaya tha..

Ram hands priya the phone..

Priya-aur ????

Ram-aur... Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi.. tumhare bager..

Priya-awww... Ram.. you are the most adorably craziest Fiance' ever !

Ram smiled..

Ram-tumhe bhi neend nahi aa rahi thi na ?!

Priya- Nahi... neend nahi aa rahi thi.. magar phir bhi ye sab circus nahi karti.. You are so sweet.. I love you...

Priya came forward to kiss him..

Ram-Nahi..

Priya-kyun ?!

Ram-kyunki jab tum mujhe kiss karogi.. tab mera balance hill jaayega aur main ghir jaunga..

langda dulha accha nahi lagega..

Priya laughed in a low tone..

Priya-haan.. wo bhi hain... vaise bhi aapko godhi bhi toh chadni hain na ?!

Ram-kya ?! Maine godhi-wodhi nahi chadunga..

Priya-aise kaise chalega.. Mere sapno ka Raaj kumaar godhi par sawaar hoke hi toh ayega na..

Ram-Ladder se chad ke aaya hain.. ye khaafi nahi hain kya..

Priya-Uhmmm... teek hain... chalalungi... Mujhe itna sweet Raajkumaar jo mil raha hain toh...

Kal subhe 4 baje kitchen main aayiye..

Ram-Kyun ?

Priya-Mujhe aapko ek treat dena hain..

Ram-haaye,... Abhi nahi de sakti..

Priya-aise ?!

Ram-Oh ! teek hain kal subhe.. dher mat karna...

Priya-Pakka..

Priya pulled Ram's Nose..

Priya-Abhi bye..

Ram slowly got down the ladder...

Priya gave him a flying kiss..

as he got down the last few steps..

Ram-Haye..

Ram slipped and fell down..

Priya-Ram...

Ram-Ouch... Mard ko dard nahi hota.. Remember ?

Priya-Lekin darthi maa ke baare main toh socha hota..

Ram-Kiski maa ?

Priya-Kuch nahi.. good night !

Ram-Main so hi kaha paunga..

Ram finally returned to his room... He was completely excited & stirred up ! He couldn't close his eyes.. But eventually he fell asleep !

Ram finally wakes up...

He sees his alaram clock..

Ram-Shit,Man.. ! 8 baj gaye ?! Ram beta tu toh aaj gaya.. Koi char ghante late hota hain kya ?! Treat nahi wo toh tapad degi mujhe !

He quickly wore his trousers & Rushed out to look for priya !

Missing File-

Planning.. Ye har insaan karta hain... Lekin 9/10 times hamara plan hum pe hi backfire ho jaata hain.. Aise bohot kam baar hotha hai jab humhara plan actually work kar jaata hain.. Inspite of the repeated failures that we encounter,hum planning karna phir bhi nahi chodte !

Edited by Pinky.Raya - 11 years ago

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
been waiting for so long to get the update and my wait pays me off, I loved it, thanks for PM dear, liked the idea of reverse psychology, yes it really works, in fact I have applied this quite a few times in my life and it worked...kabhi kabhi u have to adjust for others, recently I didn't wish to do go some place but had to visit coz it was my duty so u see u can't do ur manmani every time...continue ASAP, oh!, by the way how was ur exam?, I hope it was gud, take care and all the best for results

It was good ! thanks ! accha ? Haan hum sabko kabhi na kabhi compromise karna hi padta hain ! Its very true !

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157365

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

i must say it was outstanding love ur all idea

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creativewriting

@creativewriting

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks Dear for keeping your promise 😉. & about the post what should i say i love the ladder scene the most. Then OMG Ram woke up late priya gonna kill her...

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