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Posted: 12 years ago
Feel so bad for Geet!! Plzz di, let Maan know abt this and then he'll kill that b******
Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wen will u update nxt di???
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update dear
and did u read insatiable
how did u like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update di u give ur full justified to the part i love it nothing is dramatic its like an real for me hope maan comes to know abt all these early
thanks for update and pm di update soon next part waiting for rahul's punishment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can I say waiting or are you going to kick me out of here😆
Chalo phir bhi himmat karke bol hi deti hoon.
And a promise is a promise so, tumhara post hote hi thodi der mein apna post kar doongi.😉
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i fulfilled my promise..its ur turn now :D...m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Shruthe and Ash for the banner

Thank you friends for comments. Most of you felt update was short. This FF has usually long parts as I am trying break at logical parts. This update is also not particularly big but next few updates are. So just enjoy as the breaks are at logical ends and to avoid abrupt ending.

@Abi – Dear, I am sorry if you feel story is little stretched. From now on track will shift to Geet's emotions and hence I will really not want to cut it. Give it a try for another 2-3 updates and let me know if you still feel it getting boring, I will definitely try to speed up things.

@doublecross – Thanks dear for the song dedication. Actually when I was searching for songs, I also thought of this song but then looking at the situation favored Sita ki Uljhan. Thanks a lot.

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Chapter 18 – Koi yeh kaise bataye

Late at night, Geet finally wiped her tears and poked her head out. It was dark and lights were dimmed. She took a cleaning cloth and wrapped it around her shoulders. She called for taxi and made her way out quickly.

Pinky looked at Geet wondering why she was so late but froze seeing her state. Her lip had a massive cut and she had bruises on her face.

"Geet…yeh kya hua."

Geet could not hold herself and hugged Pinky totally breaking down.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HW_uF_U28T0&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HW_uF_U28T0

koi ye kaise bataaye ke wo tanha kyun hai
wo jo apna thaa wahi aur kisi ka kyun hai
yahi duniya hai to phir aisee ye duniya kyun hai
yahi hota hai to aakhir yahi hota kyun hai


Only then Pinky noticed that she was wrapped in a cleaning cloth and her clothes were torn. She was very worried and made her sit in the sofa.

"Geet…yeh sab kya hai…please mujhe bata…kya hua...tu thik toh hai na"

Slowly in between her sobs and tear Geet narrated what had been happening in office, yesterdays events, her today's confrontation and then finally whatever transpired in the conference room.

Pinky could not believe something like this could happen on KC premises and she just hugged her tight.

After calming Geet a little bit she started convincing her

"Dekh Geet…trust me. I have been working with Khurana Constructions for last 3 years. Tujhe pata hi humari company is known for more than 50% female staff and the respect and female friendly policies. This is all because of Mrs. Khurana, Grand mom of Maan sir who handled this company for 5 years. Maan sir maybe tough but he considers her as the role model and he has only made the policies better and fairer for girls. KC has even got award because of this.

Trust me…you need to report this. Tu sirf apne bare mein mat soch yaar. Yeh soch that you are not the first or last case for a man like him. Pata nahi Chandigarh mein kya kiya hoga usne aur aage kya karega."

"Lekin…why will anyone trust me and main kya kahoongi…aur Maan sir…unke saamne toh jaane ki bhi himmat nahi hai meri. Agar unhone bhi mujhe hi galat samjha toh?"

ik zara haath badha dein to pakad le daaman
uske seene mein sama jaaye hamari dhadkan
itni kurbat hai to phir faaslaa itna kyun hai

"You leave that to me."

Saying this Pinky quickly called Adi Sir and told him that there was an emergency and if he could come to her house.

Adi though perplexed came to meet Pinky. They were good friends and Adi even liked Pinky though have never been able to voice his feelings.

But he could have never imagined what he saw when he came and was shocked to see a clearly hurt Geet.

Pinky quickly filled him with with facts avoiding embarrassing details but then Adi did not need to know those to understand what must have happened seeing Geet's condition. He sat in front of her and said gently - "Geet…please dekho…consider me as a friend and a brother. Jo kuch bhi hua uske liye mein personally tum se sorry maangta hoon. But sabse pehle you need to change and then come with me to the doctor."

He saw wariness in her eyes and hastily added – "Along with Pinky….I understand…tum Pinky ka haath pakad ke rakhna and we will go to a female doctor only."

He motioned to Pinky who helped Geet and took her inside.

Adi spoke to the doctor in private before taking Geet there. Geet sat almost like a zombie as doctor explored and fixed her wounds. She was little afraid but then on Pinky's insistence she allowed Dr. to take some pictures as well of wounds and discoloration around her face and hands.

dil-e-barbaad se nikla nahin ab tak koi
ik loote ghar pe diya karta hai dastak koi
aas jo toot gayee phir se bandhaata kyun hai


Adi dropped Geet and Pinky home and asked her to take ample rest and not to worry about office. He even gave Pinky off till next weekend to look after her.

On the way back he dialed Maan sir's number.

"Yes Adi"

"Sorry Sir for calling so late par…woh mujhe aapse bahut urgent baat karni thi sir. Actually sir, aaj office mein ek haadsa ho gaya hai sir. I have got a harassment complaint sir and it does not look good sir."

Maan was furious after hearing to Adi's words- "What!!! Are you serious Adi…harassment complaint and in KC"

"Yes sir…actually I am just coming after meeting her sir. She is hurt a lot and I had to involve a proper doctor sir. I have asked for a report as well and it will be available tomorrow sir."

Maan could not believe Adi's words. In his entire career no one dared to disrespect a woman in his Delhi office as everyone knew how strict he was in such things. A year back, there has been a case in his Ahemdabad branch and he had ensured such harsh punishment for the people involved that out of respect and even fear, no one dared to engage in such activities.

"Who is "her" and who dared to do this?"

Maan's blood froze as he heard Adi's response. Suddenly the world stopped and he sank down in the sofa.

"Sir…sir you there."

Maan could just whisper her name - "Geet"

"Yes sir and she is in very bad condition sir. Bahut chot bhi lagi hai use sir and that is why I asked her and even Pinky to take off so that she can be looked after. Sir, after the incident, Pinky told me that Geet locked herself in a broom cupboard sir. She was there for hours till finally it was dark and late enough for her to come home."

Adi continued telling Maan about Geet's state without realizing that his every word was piercing his heart. His every word was drowning him into a sea of pain which even Maan himself could not have imagined for himself. His every word was like a blow and tears came out of his eyes.

"Sir!!!"

Maan cut the call not able to answer back to Adi. He hid his face in his hands and crumbled at the though of his jaan going through so much all alone while he was so close to her. He just sat there like a defeated man.

"How could I…how could I let this happen. That too to my Geet. God why? Why did I let her work with that bas***d. Why…my Geet…God she must be in so much pain. Pehle hi pata nahi kya kuch hua hai uske saath aur ab yeh. Geet….Geet!!!"

tum asarrat ka kaho ya ise gham ka rishta
kehte hain pyaar ka rishta hai janam ka rishta
hai janam ka jo ye rishta to badalta kyun hai

He was angry…he was in pain. He sobbed sometimes and sometimes threw things. Nothing could give him solace that night. All he wanted was to run to his Geet and hold her in his arms. Caress her, calm her and wipe her tears away. But he stayed alone, punishing and torturing himself…drowning in her pain.

Pinky stayed whole night with Geet who cuddled in her arms. Doctor had given her sleeping pills but even then she whimpered now and then in her arms as Pinky caressed her hair gently putting her back to sleep.

Precap – Kaisi Hai Yeh Udasi

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 17

sorry for the late comment but been held up with my studies

reading the update tears did make way out of my eyes
though i havent experienced anything like this by god's grace but someone very close to me has n that too when she was just 7 years
she had never told it to anyone not even her parents or her friends nor me until last year when she told me
i have seen her cry over it n it was really heart wrenching
she was forced but before anything could happen she pushed the guy n ran away.
She kept running from the place to home which is nearly like half an hour far n it all is very busy roads
thank god nothing had happened nor an accident happened bcoz if it would have happened maybe everyone would have got to know that she was tried to be forced n i dont know what would have happened after that

sorry for going away from the topic
but i think what geet did a girl wouldnt do bcoz she is too scared first only that she would never try to go n talk to anyone forget even the person who is trying to abuse her but really geet is very brave to even go n try n talk

but this creep has crossed all the limits with this

i hope now geet doesnt keep quiet n complains at least or talks to pinky at least

i really wish for her to fight this battle n set an example for many girls in this world
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok first of all could you have chosen a song and voice anymore perfect than the one you did today.
The music, Jagjit Singhji ke awaz ki woh kasak, woh labz, aur usme ghule apke shabd, the perfection of all these today just left me speechless.
While the music was playing, reading about Maan's anger and frustruation to his pained shock, to his self blaming, to the tears flowing from his eyes, everything seemed so real, I kept forgetting that it's a fiction and he's not real.
ik zara haath badha dein to pakad le daaman
uske seene mein sama jaaye hamari dhadkan
itni kurbat hai to phir faaslaa itna kyun hai
How apt were these words for Geet and Maan, but I'm so glad that she had Pinky and Adi with her, to take care of all her needs. And they are so rightly guiding her down the correct and sensible path instead of just panicking.
Geet is in shock and it hurts to see her in this state, but all that is going to change now isn't it?😃
Waiting eagerly for one of my favorite singer Kailash Kher's song.
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
eagerly waiting yar...
EDITED...
feeling so bad for geet,but pinky took right diccission,adi is sooo supportive.
true frnds r always god's blessing.
poor maan,he's feeling so helpless...
awesome update ritzy.
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago

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