MG FF - PARINEETA THREAD 7 - Page 10

good to see finally getting close.

though me skeptical abt the twist

A very peaceful n calming chapter Aish 😉
Loved it 😃
Wat twist

humko nxt update kub milega?

OMG… was a first of a kind….so Maan Babu also felt something...ahaan

Teri aadat si pad gayi…sala gadha itne saalon baad aadat padi hai Geet ki….

Waise Geet was so shocked with her attraction as well….jhalli…she doesn't know the intensity of her love yet….ab bhi….mujhe laga tha sirf Maan is clueless…

Eye lock was intense and a little different and then tadaa…..anarkali…even I laughed remembering that incident…sigh…those were the times even I liked Anisha a little bit…pure infatuation girl…

Now the reason for my delay in commenting. Got busy on weekend and then Ayush got fever. But anyways, yesterday, I could not comment because I was in all day meeting and could not hear the song. Ab jab tak song nahi sunungi, toh aage padhungi kaise aur comment kaise karungi…simple logic….so now I have listened to the song and it was just beautiful…fitted the update to "T"

Even nature conspired to bring Geet into the place she belongs…his arms…but then he let her go. That whole mist bit…I thought we discussed it somewhere else nahi….but yahan bhi fit hua….I could almost see their finger tips touching as she went away

I loved your positive and hope filled line "her most beautiful moment with him was yet to come."…amen to that

Also, I absolutely loved the metaphor…of him standing in front of Anishas's portrait…wishing for her and lost in her pain when Geet's and his family's laughter brought him out of it and forced him to walk towards that laughter

And then the final hug…those unsaid emotions of Geet and those not understood of her same emotions by Maan….today he felt a glimpse of those emotions and even in his mind he accepted that she was always his…always there for him and deewani of him…..

Last but not the least…precap mein Devil…kyon aaj ke rone ka dose reh gaya…well even this brought tears to my eyes though they were happy and emotional tears…lekin nahi princess ko toh humein rulane mein mazaa aata hai…woh bhi phut phut ke….sob sob sob

I finally read all the parts. The FF is BRILLIANT!!👍🏼 Sorry for reading it late. I have a smalll problem and that is i need to read some chapters to get in the story. I can just read one and wait and the the second. I need some read some beofre comming in the story. But Ash the story is awesome

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

updating

He didn't know what he was doing… but everything felt so damn right.. so so peaceful…so calming..! his hand snaked her back and held her close to his heart. The feel of her skin over her wet clothes send shivers down his spine. She was soft… warm…and for some reasons he said it in his mind..that she was his! She had always been his! His hands went tighter around her..pressing her more into him… feeling her so near to his heart.

The warmth radiated by their body enveloped them and even the drizzle felt warm. His hands wrapped her tighter, gently learning the feel of her body… soft and warm. Geet breathed out sharply and kissed his chest lightly. It was all his embrace that she had been seeking… those 5 years…the pain, the tears everything seemed to start right from him and end exactly on him. Her fingers gently caressed his back, her tear drops mixing with the rain..and the final peace after years of longing!!!

"aye yaar tu ayaa paas is kadar

ki zindagi ka har lamha jhi utha

soocha tha na kabhi muskra

uthega naseeba mera

jin lamho ko tarsti thi

neegahe meri

woh chupke se

meri jholi mein aa padii

ab toh baas rab dua hai meri

rahe salammat duniya yeh meri"

by tabby999

the moment was so beautiful… she wished of she could stay there for eternity… she wanted to belong there…it didn't matter if she was his second..it didn't matter that he was married to someone else..it didn't even matter that he was the father of kids who are not even her own… she just desired the warmth of that distant sun which she knew was going to burn her alive if she goes near it.

it was probably after a long time that he was feeling so peaceful in someone's embrace. He didn't want to let go had it not been little dia, crying and searching for her angel in half sleep. She had woken up at night and went to Geet's room, not able to see. She couldn't find Geet..and it was dark. She got scared and started crying, running in the hall calling for her angel. He was so lost in the moment..he didn't want to let her go..but he was shocked by the sudden push he felt. He snapped open his eyes only to see her running away from. It killed him!!! Why…why did she run away??? He realized what they were doing..but strangely he had no guilt in him..not even a tiny bit of it. but yes her running away did hurt him and he didn't know why! Emptiness filled his life once again!

he ran his finger across his hair…rage and sorrow filled his heart…why did she run away? Did she misunderstand him?? He was so much at ease…probably trying to give himself another chance… he hated every bit of that feeling! He felt as if suddenly someone had pushed him back into the darkness once again..which he was trying so hard to come out of. Her pushing him away and running into the house haunted him..and he just dragged himself inside..hating himself for losing his mind around her..hating her for leaving him like that…hating everything. he dragged himself up to the stairs, angry at her…so so so angry..she will leave her again…when he saw the kitchen light on. He was sure that she was there in the kitchen. He was so angry that he didn't even realize he had marched towards the kitchen, to ask her why she left.. to demand an answer for where she was lost all these years and to know how the hell she dare to misunderstand him!!!

He stepped inside angrily..but what he saw and heard just made him stand like a statue right there.

She wiped dia's tears and made her drink some water!

"shhh… its alright. Am right here baby…."

Dia sobbed, "angel…sob..wh..where..were..yo…you…me..me sc..scared…."

She caressed her head and pulled her closer to her heart, "I was here in the hall beta… wo office ka kaam kar rahi thi na…"

[ I was here in the hall beta.. was doing office work..]

He breathed in sharply which didn't go unheard by Geet. She had heard dia crying and that's why run away. She turned her head towards him…he looked angry… his eyes questioning her…and then the sigh..but still he didn't look happy! Ohh boy… she blushed… she actually blushed remembering what had happened between them.. and then his anger… it was because she had run away like that? She met his angry gaze..which were actually giving her a burning sensation. She pouted cutely and then shook her head softly indicating its not what you think!!! He still didn't look calmed. She gestured at a sobbing dia and made a baby face. She saw his expressions changing into a calmer one and he walked towards them.

He lifted dia in his arms and kissed her cheeks. Geet stood up too.

"ohh my princess was scared??"

Dia nodded cutely and said, 'namla kicked me…." Geet smiled..namra would have done that in her sleep.

"ohh ok no problem.. my princess will sleep with me tonight..okay? namra ko akele sone do.."

[ohh ok no problem… my princess will sleep with me tonight…okay? Let namra sleep alone!]

"sachi???" dia squealed. She wanted to take revenge from namra for kicking her in sleep.

[really??]

"yep..chalo chalo..lets go to sleep..kal school bhi hain na aapka…"

[yep..move..lets go t sleep… you have school tomorrow right!]

Dia hugged Maan with a big smile on her face. He walked out carrying dia in his arms..and she just stood there..looking at him in awe!!! He was so unpredictable and so…sweet???? She giggled to herself and walked abck to her room. She stopped near the kids' room and peeped in. namra was sleeping peacefully but she knew madam will throw tantrums the next morning that dia slept with Maan leaving her behind. So she cuddled beside namra, tucked her closer and slept off thinking about him!

The next morning, she was running all around the house, getting the kids ready for school, preparing breakfast, attending to dadima and her calls. Even during holidays the office people won't let you live in peace. Maan got ready to leave and sat on the breakfast table with dadima, muching his toast. The kids were there too but no Geet.

"Geet kahan hain??"

[where is geet?]

"papa..angel ko phone aaya hain.." namra replied. She had seen her angel running around with the phone in her hand.

[papa angel has got a call]

Little dia was looking at namra and smirking all to herself. Namra noticed it once..twice..thrice..

"kyun dekh rahi hai aise tu?"

[why are you looking like that?]

Dia giggled and tried to finish her milk. She took a sip and again looked at namra evilly.

"dia… tell me.."

Dia showed her tongue and spoke, "namla..tune mu..mujhe kal kick kiya…"

[namra..you kicked me yesterday..]

Namra couldn' understand what she meant.

"so…", she gave a naughty smile, "I slept with papa…."

Namra's eyes widened at first..but then she also gave her a teasing look and continued with her breakfast. Dia wondered why wasn't she getting angry. She poked her finger on her shoulder, "namla…"

Namra gave her an equally evil smirk, "huh.. kal I slept with angel…"

It was shock for dia..usually angel doesn't sleep with them at night..she does occasionally..but angel sleeping with namra..and not her..was so so so unfair. She was about to start crying when they heard Geet shouting on someone over the phone!!!

"its my holiday pinkey… so better get off my back and let me live in peace." She disconnected the phone and sat with a thud beside dadima!! she looked quite irritated!!!

"Geet…Geet relax… go and visit roops or mumma.. and enjoy your holiday!!"

He spoke carefully seeing her super spoiled mood.

"am not going anywhere…", she snapped!!!

Everyone became quiet seeing her angry and quietly finished their breakfast and left!!! She finished her food but looked irritated.

"Geet..what happened beta???"

"dadima..dekho na..meri holiday hain.. but these people..mujhe chain se bhi nhai jeene dete.."

[dadima..see.. I am on holiday but these people don't even let me live in peace]

Dadima smiled and caressed her forehead, "relax Geet..maan was right you know! Just go out and enjoy!!"

"nahi dadima…I really don't feel like going anywhere. I just want to stay back and enjoy…"

She skipped going to the gym this morning… fearing her own feelings. It was beautiful..yet it was scary. Anyways she was too shy to face him like that again. so she slept off again. she instructed nakul what to do and what not to… cleaned her room, kids' room..doing all odd stuffs… speaking to dadima, to roops over phone, prem and rashmi!!!

She didn't even realize when it was already 12 and the kids were back!!!

She stepped out of the car..after one whole month she was going to meet her grand kids. She was out of country..and she missed the kids. She saw the time..perfect! the kids would probably have been back from school. She was back last night and the first thing she did was to meet the kids. She wanted to surprise them so didn't even call. She slowly walked into the mansion, elegantly.. excited to meet dia and namra. Gayathri she was..the queen!! She was just about to enter the hall when she heard a familiar yet the very voice that she loathed. Her eyes widened..what was she doing there? She just wished she was wrong and hid beside the door, and peeped in.

Namra had come back home crying badly and hugged Geet. Dia stood there quietly.

"kya hua bacha.. why are you crying?"

[what happened baby..why are you crying?]

She was sooo worried seeing namra cry sooo much. she wasn't even able to speak due to hiccups. Geet made her sit on her lap and made her drink some water, caressing her back.

"tell me beta… did anyone tell you anything??"

Namra just hugged her tighter and cried more. Geet looked at dia for an anwer but even her eyes had started to water. Geet was totally scared as to what happnened. Even dadima.

"namra..baby batao kya hua..angel hain na..sab theek kar degi..bato kya hua…"

[namra..baby tell what happened..angel will make everything right..tell me..]

Namra looked at her through her tearful eyes but with some kind of hope.

"an..an..angel..sab theek?"

[angel..alright?]

Geet nodded and urged her to speak.

Namra ceased her cry but she was sobbing uncontrollably.

"an..angel..sob…sob..meri mumma…mumma k..kahan hain??"

[angel.where is my mumma?]

Geet went blank with the question… a very sudden and random.. and something she didn't know how to answer. Even tears filled her eyes..what will she tell?

"class..me..sab…sab tease karte hain..ki..ki meri mumma nahi hain…"

[everyone in my class teases me that I don't have my mumma..]

"no baby..aisa nahi hain…"

[no baby..its not like that..]

"sob..everyone has a mumma..sob..phir meri mumma kyun nahi hain angel..?"

[ everyone has a mumma.. then why don't I have a mumma angel?]

Geet held back her own tears and wiped namra's tears, "aapne kahan nahi.aapke paas mumma nahi tho kya..angel tho hain na.."

[didn't you tell them.. what if you don't have your mumma..you have your angel right…]

"i..i told.. but but..they said you..you are step mumma…"

The lump formed in Geet's throat began hurting when dia even spoke up, "han angel..meli mumma kahan hain?'

[yes angel..where is my mumma..]

Geet hugged them tightly, unable to control her tears anymore. Even dadima was speechless.

"aap meri step mumma ho??"

[are you my step mumma?]

Geet wiped her teas and spoke, "no beta..why step mumma.. mein tho aapki mumma bhi hun.."

[no beta.. why step mumma.. am also your mumma right..]

"but..but aap tho angel ho na…"

[but..but you are angel right?]

Geet smiled, "hmm.. hoon tho… but mein aapka khayal aapke friends ke mummas jaisi rakhti hun na…"

[hmm.. I am.. but I do take care of you like the mumma's of your friends right?]

Okay..that seemed a valid point for namra!! She sniffed and asked again, "aap..aap papa ka khayal bhi rakhti ho?'

[so you..you take care of papa also?]

"yes..bilkul rakhti hoon..", Geet said with a cheeky smile.

Dadima smiled hearing Geet and spoke up, "aur pata hain.. aapke angel papa se shaadi bhi hui hain…"

[and you know even your angel has married your papa…]

"shaadi kya hoti hain dadima?" dia asked innocently.

[what is marriage dadima?]

"umm..umm… yes aapke rashmi aunty ke marriage mein wo round round kiya tha na… usey shaadi kehte hain.."

[umm…umm.. yes you did round round in rashmi aunty's wedding na..thats called a marriage…]

Namra: umm..meine dekha..angel aur papa ne bhi round round kiya tha…

[umm..i had seem… angel and papa also did round round…]

Geet couldn't help but smile….now they round round did come handy!

"tho aap humari mumma hui??" dia asked!

[so you became our mumma?]

Geet couldn't be happier, "yep.."

Namra smiled after a long time, "I will also tell my friends that I have my mumma…"

"mumma…." Dia started giggling. The feel was so exciting..angel got promoted to mumma! Geet just smiled…so happy to hear that from them!!!

"chalo..go and change..meine aapka favorite dish banaya hain lunch mein.."

[now go and change.. I have made your favorite dish in lunch…]

They ran away shouting mumma mumma… jumping around. Geet smiled at them and looked straight..but her smile vanished instantly. She stood up abruptly and looked at gayathri.. who was standing in front of them… tear eyed…dadima didn't expect her to be there. But she had to tell her sooner or later.

Before she could speak, gayathri spoke up, "itni badi baat humse chupai aapne… aur kiske kehne se aapne aisa kiya maaji? Anisha ki zindagi tho barbad kardi is ladki ne..ab aur kitni zindagiyan barbaad karne aayi hain ye yahan?'

[you hid such a big thing from us… and who told you to do this maaji? This girl destroyed anisha's life..how many more lives is she going to destroy?]

Geet was shocked to hear that from gayathri..but she was thinking all wrong.

"nahi aunty aap galat soch rahi hain…"

[no aunty… you are thinking wrong…]

Gayathri didn't even let her complete. She was too broken at the turn of events. She just gave her a disgusting look and walked away.

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