We Found Love (VIRIKA FF) - chapter 25 on pg.134 - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update! :D

Loved the ending. It was hilarious! 🤣

Greatbjob! Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heeey!! awsome update!! continue soon!!:) I'd like to see more relationship between Veera and Virat ...! and thanks!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok so this time ... m a bit sad dat m really late ... but nevertheless ...
last but not the least 😉
The update was wonderful as usual ...
i loved :
~ the bhabhi - sister in law relationship ❤️ (their naughtiness ... just too cute 😛 )
~ the brother - sister relationship (how much more caring n supportive can these two be !?!?! 😆 )
~ the viren - jeevika relationship (the way jeevika gave orders n they support veera n each other ❤️)
so over all ... beautiful 😃
u didnt disclose the secret veera was going to tell jeevika 😲
may be the next part 😊
thanku for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing thanxs for PM cont soon
i m luvng ths FF alot its awesum
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update as always
thanks again for updating it earlier
ur da BEST
thanks for pm, and do pm me for the next one plzzz
last part of it was funnyy haha i feel VIRen 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
hope the doc said good things abt veera to viren n jeevs, hope veera gets well soon..
pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum!
pm wen cont! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...veera is such a sweetipie...hope she get well soon fast...n virika are just awesome...love their relationship...Cant wait 4 d wedding...😊

Continue soon...Thanx 4 d pm...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was waiting to reach 50 likes, but ehh what the heck the LAKERS won tonight. I was sitting at the basketball game, just thinking of my story so here, I'll update the next chapter.

chapter 17

viren - "You guys ready to go now? I'm starving"

virat - "Yup"

veera - "Ready, let's leave. I need to come back on time, have class again tomorrow morning"

virat - "Okay you dork. Do you know how to do anything besides studying?"

veera - "Whatever I do, I always beat you Virat bhaiya so no need to compare"

Jeevika, Veera, and Viren started laughing. The four of them left the apartment and drove to Cheesecake factory. Viren and Jeevika sat in the front, while Virat and Veera were in the back.

virat - "Veera, who keeps messaging you. Give me you phone let me see"

veera - "It's just some friends from my class" she said looking in the mirror at Jeevika who gave her an assuring look back.

viren - "You've made friends already? wow your fast"

veera - "Well it doesn't take me 3 years to go up to a person and say hi; especially if you really like that person. Cough Cough bhai"

viren - "So Jeevika you think it's okay for you to share our secrets with this little devil now?"

virat - "Wow even I didn't know that. Slow-going bhai"

veera - "Yeah if bhai is slow-going, you are the exact opposite I bet"

virat - "Very funny Ms. Veera Vadhera"

viren - "What else have you told her about me Jeevika"

jeevika - "Nothin else" she said laughing and Veera joined her as well.

viren - "Yeah I'm sure. Can't trust you two girls with anything"

They soon reached and got out of the car. They walked inside the restaurant and were given a table within 10 minutes.

viren - "Veera see the menu and order what you want"

veera - "I want just cheesecake"

virat - "Please bhai no desserts for her. The minute she eats something sweet she's hard to control" he said smiling and Viren joined

veera - "That was a very bad joke. Try harder next time"

jeevika - "Veera check out their pastas their amazing. Actually let's share one together"

veera - "Okay"

Veera looked at Viren who had quite a priceless expression on his face.

veera - "Actually, why don't you share with bhai instead. Just look at his face"

Jeevika looked at Viren's phase and it was hilarious.

jeevika - "You're such a kid Viren"

viren - "Thank you"

The waiter came and took their order. In the meantime he gave them some bread to eat for appetizers.

viren - "I haven't eaten here in a really long time"

veera - "Yeah, I'd understand why" she said laughing again. Jeevika joined as well, but they tried to stay calm as possible.

viren - "Are you serious Jeevika? How do you manage to tell her every single emberassing story of mine. I'm never leaving you two alone again"

virat - "Why, what happened bhai"

viren - "Nothin you need to know of!!!!"

veera - "I'll tell you Virat bhaiya. So this one time bhabhi and bhai came here with a few friends. And they were having a nice night and then bhai had to go to the bathroom. So our lawyer brother Mr. Viren Vadhera didn't read the ladies sign and went inside the ladies' restroom"

Viren had his eyes covered now with embarrassment.

jeevika - "Poor ladies inside the restroom must have felt violated"

viren - "Oh please"

veera - "And Virat bhaiya Jeevika bhabhi was about to go to the restroom. So when Viren bhai realized he was in the wrong place and came out bhabhi saw his priceless face. Man I wish I was there"

viren - "On my defense, I was somewhat drunk that night"

veera - "Wow you're setting such a good example for me. So bhabhi there's a party next weekend, can I go" she said with a windy face

virat and viren at the same time - "ABSOLUTELY NOT"

veera - "Why not? If you guys can drink, I can too right. And screw drinking I just want to go to a party, a real party"

viren - "That's not happening what so ever. And anyways you have to start prepping?"

veera - "Prepping for what?

The waiter brought the food and they were starting to eat.

viren - "For our wedding"

veera - "WAIT WHAT!!! YOU GUYS DECIDED A DATE AND NOW YOU'RE TELLING ME? HELLO AM I INVISIBLE"

virat - "I wish you were sometimes"

Veera gave Virat a death glare and he stared back into his plate.

veera - "Details please?"

jeevika - "Well we decided, Viren and I, that we want to do a simple court marriage. But we knew our families and most of all you wouldn't agree so we decided to all take a cruise to Hawaii the end of September and get married on the ship"

veera - "Wait, what"

viren - "Hello madam Veera, eat first"

veera - "But what about the big fat Indian wedding? With a huge lavish sangeet, and a mehndi ceremony? And I was going to dance at the reception party and give a long speech"

viren - "You can do all that on the ship. We didn't want to do a big wedding. Just our close family. And by the way everyone from India is coming in a few days"

Veera was still not eating and was somewhat angry as she knew why they did this.

virat - "Veera eat your food before I do"

veera - "Go ahead, not in the mood to"

viren - "Someone seems upset"

veera - "What do you expect. You're doing this for me right? So I don't over exhaust myself and I'm not surrounded by hundreds of people asking me how my cancer is"

jeevika - "You're right we're doing this for you. We're doing this so you get an amazing vacation to one of the most beautiful places on Earth. And we're partly doing this for us, because family is everything. And we'd much rather spend time with all of you then a bunch of people who we could care less of"

veera- - "But bhabhi"

jeevika - "No more butts. Imagine how much fun it would be, plus they have a nightclub on the ship. So the night before the wedding, you know what we'll be doing"

Veera started cheering up again

viren - "Yeah I'll see how I let you two go there"

jeevika - "Viren I know how to get by you, okay"

viren - "yes mam"

this was one of my favorite chapters, so tell me if you agree :) next update wont be till page 89!!!! so start commenting silent readers (and liking). Also note my vacation is ending in a week, so give me a reason to update when my college starts. If I don't get a good response, I'll just finish my stories before my classes start again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
First time commenting on this FF..
Beautifully written👏
Loved the bond that Virika and Veera share...Continue soon

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