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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent part...
i loved it...
i hope everything will be fine soon...
and i liked the punishment recieved by jack,he deserves that punishment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN IS OUT OF CONTROL AND HE WILL KILL DEV FOR TOUCHING HIS GEET
FINALLY JACK GOT WHAT HE DESERVED

BUT YOU CANT KILL PREM - THE FAMILY WILL NEVER RECOVER FROM THIS AND ANNIE WILL BREAK AND HATE GEET
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 41

( Avoid as it contains violence)

Geet smiled seeing him holding her by her waist possessively, she looked up at him but he was just looking straight and the moment they reached the room he pushed her away from him. Geet was hurt but she knew she deserved it. Maan was about to turn but stopped hearing her soft voice, which was the proof of pain she was getting. He reached for the first aid box, sat down on the floor making her sit on bed. Geet was all-quite and just kept looking at him. She was feeling happy from inside and this was clearly visible in her eyes when she felt his fingers slowly rubbing the ointment on her cheeks, which had the fingers marks of Prem. She flinched a bit while Maan's heart ripped seeing tat. He softly applied the cream while Geet just kept admiring him with all love, which was evident with the tears, which not only wetting her cheeks but his fingers too. For a second he wanted to take her into his arms and soothe her with his lips, he leaned into her body closing the distance between them. Feeling his breadth she closed her eyes in anticipation but soon she felt cold and the moment she opened her eyes she could only see his back while his hands turned into a fist in anger. Her eyes let her tears flow down knowing the reason. She tried to say something but before she could say, he forced his lips to speak his venom.

Maan: I want you alive.. to see me dying..

Geet sobbed hard while her heart stopped hearing his words.

Geet: Maan…

Maan: for lusting you.. aur agar tum tayar ho than I can satisfy my lust now.. are you ready.

Geet could not say a word. She could give her body to him but she knew tat would kill him more. she wiped her tears and said in voice as hard as possible.

Geet: I m Maan.. I can shed my clothes and sleep with you on bed right now.. but I wont.. you know why.. because.. you may prove what I said by sleeping with me but your heart will die the moment you do it…

She stopped for a moment to see his reaction and the way he was clenching his fist and the way his body was shaking was a proof tat she strike the right words.

Geet: And I cant let my heart die thinking tat it lusts his love.

Maan: Tat heart is no more alive.. its dead the moment you accused it for lusting you.

Geet: I did not.. do you get I did not accuse my Maan and can never.

His anger knew no bounds and he turned pulling her harshly by her shoulder burning her with his anger.

Maan: You did try to prove my giving yourself to me and than trying to kill yourself Geet.. do you get.. you accused Maan for lusting his own Jaan.. do you get…. I lust you.

Geet: Haan kiya maine… do you get I did accuse you… khush ho app… Geet accused her own love… her Maan for lusting to sleep with her.. do you get.

Geet pushed Maan away from his body but he held her tight in anger hurting her further.

Maan: So you agree tat I lust you..

Geet looked deep into his eyes, and probably this was the very first time she looked so deep into his eyes and said giving a painful smile.

Geet: Sadly you agree to this Maan… My Maan.. agrees to it..

Maan pushed her away while she fell on the bed with a thud sound. Her tears did not stop, his anger only increased with her words. He went away leaving a shattered Geet who kept looking at his retreating figure. Her heart shank into deep pain that was shivering in an unknown fear. She tried to stop him, her heart and mind asked her to do tat but her voice was not supporting her. She thumped further on the bed while her eyes shutting slowly.

Maan reached the place where Dev was kept captive and the moment he entered he knew tat something was amiss. He knew tat just by seeing the surrounding tat Dev was not here. He sat on his usual chair closing his eyes in anger. He knew tat it was just not tat Dev escaped but his own people ditching him. His men's who were in charge of the place were even scared to stand far away from him and the moment his voice roared in the room shivered them to death.

Maan: where the hell is Khan Saab.

Maan broke the table on to which he had rested his legs. His anger was on the peak and now he just wanted the very person who ditched him. His eyes looked at his men's while his fist clenched in anger.

Maan: where the hell is he..

One of his men came forward trembling in fear started to speak but his words came out as pieces " Sir… Kha..Khan.. Sa.ab.. he..he… to..ok… D.. ev.. Raichand…he.. Prem.. S.. ir…was.. wi.. th.. him…they… to..ok.. him… and.. sai..d tat.. y.. ou.. sh..ould.. not.. know.."

Maan smirked hearing and suddenly threw the broke table away scaring the wits of his poor scared men's. His eyes spitted fire while he held the man by his neck choking him to death scaring the others.

Maan: Where the hell did they take tat b*****.

The men tried to speak but his voice choked with the pressure Maan used to strangle him. He could not speak while his tears flew down his cheeks. Maan just kept putting on more pressure. Everyone started to shiver more while a man slowly spoke saying "Sir.. none.. of .. us know.. where he is being.. taken.. None of us .. sir."

The moment these words reached his ears he threw the men away while he coughed to gain his normal breadth. None of the men's standing there went to help him. they very well knew tat their Maan Sir's anger was worst and coming into his bad list when he was out of mind in anger would threat them with their death. They stood watching Maan breaking everything into pieces hurting him in return. He was mad enraged in anger and blood to kill the one person who was responsible for all this. He removed his mobile and dialed their numbers only to hear them ringing but no answers from the other side and with each passing second his anger was gaining new heights but the moment his mind realized where they could take him he smirked. He knew tat the place where they could keep Dev away from him. He smirked moving out of the place but his smirk was wat his men's did not realize.

Prem and Khan Saab looked at each other with a sigh unknown tat the monster was on the way. They looked at the place and finally smirked knowing tat Maan would never be able to know tat Dev would be kept here. They even planned to make some fake stories as Prem was sure enough tat Maan was with Geet as she would be crying tat her own brother hit him but still tat fear was creeping inside him. Their eyes saw Dev who was all lying lifeless on the floor now tied by his legs and hands.

Prem: Khan Saab.. I hope tat we have not done anything wrong by getting Dev here.

Khan Saab: This is only the place which will not come into Maan's mind even if he knows tat we are involved in it..

Prem: But getting him into KM.. is tat safe… kahi kuch gadbad hui tho.

Khan Saab: But we did not have any other way for this.

Maan: you did have Khan Saab.

His voice made them to stand still while their eyes wide opened realizing tat they were caught. Turning towards the voice they just saw a seething Maan who was all set to kill them there and there.

Maan: Wat did you think tat Maan Singh Khuranna would never know about this.

Prem: Maan.. just listen..

Maan raised his index finger stopping Prem from speaking further while Prem just stood fearing his wrath.

Maan: but must say tat you have chosen the right place for it. mere hi ghar meri dushman ki raksha ke liye.. tats damn good na Khan Saab.. kyu Prem.. theek kaha na maine.

Prem: Maan.. just cool down.. just

Maan moved closer placing a punch straight on Prem's face fearing the hell out of them. He kept hitting him while Khan Saab tried to stop him.

Maan: Shut up.. just shut the bloody mouth. Wat do you think by hitting your damn sister you would make me stay with her. wat did you think tat I did not see you signaling this Khan Saab who ditched me on your say.

Khan Saab: Maan Baba.. aisa kuch nahi..

Maan just pointed his gun towards Khan Saab shutting him with it. He left prem and hit Khan Saab without thinking wat he was doing. His eyes spitted fire and right now he would not mind killing these two also. He could not think tat they were just keeping him away from all danger but right now he just wanted to kill.

Maan: Wat the hell did you think Khan Saab.. mere paise khate ho and you listen to this bloody Handa..

Khan Saab was hurt while Prem stood shocked with the accusations Maan put on them but his words just freeze them more.

Maan: Haan.. samjh nahi paaya ki.. it was always this.. Yeh Handa's tho banehi hain mujhe barbaad karne… Zindagi ki sabse badi galati ki hain.. did the biggest mistake in my life loving tat Handa…

Prem: Maan.. yeh tum..

Maan hit Prem hearing him speak again making him to bleed.

Maan: Maan Singh Khuranna.. do you get.. its Mr. Khuranna Prem Handa.. Dhokha dena shayad tumare khoon mein hain.. but not mine.. I promised your mother tat I would safe guard your sister.. and I will fulfill it.. Dhoka dena meri fitrat mein nahi hain.

Khan Saab: Maan.. tum janthe ho ki tum kya keh rahe ho..

Maan: Maan Sir.. Its Maan Sir for you and don't forget this anymore.

Prem was getting angry not coz he was accusing him but for wat he said to Khan Saab. He could take any insult for him but Khan Saab was the person who was just not their chief security but a person who never thought once before putting his life in danger or killing anyone for them and here Maan was insulting tat very soul.

Prem: Enough Mr. Khuranna… bahut sun liya.. do you even realize wat are you saying in anger..

Maan: kyu.. sach khadwa laga… Tum Handa's tho dhoka dena aata hain.. but I never thought ki the person who was.. humare thukdo par rehna wala mujhe hi dhoka dega..

The room echoed with a loud sound. Khan Saab stood watching Prem who had just slapped Maan.. his Maan baba.. and next moment Prem was slapped hard by Khan Saab. He could never tolerate anyone hitting his Maan baba while Prem stood shocked seeing this.

Prem: Khan Saab yeh..

Khan Saab: Bas.. its me whom he is insulting.. and don't you dare come between it.. Prem Handa..

Prem: insult.. Kya insult.. kya kiya ishne.. he has destroyed everything with his own hands… Kya galati hain meri behan ki.. just to clarify his doubt he put his own loves life in danger and now he is blind in rage wanting to kill tat b*****.. kya galati ki humne.. wat did we do.. just tried to stop him from committing another mistake.. Jack ko tho maar diya..

Prem turned to Maan but was shocked to see he was not there and that very moment a small yet sharp shrink voice caught their attention. They ran towards the room terrifying for the worst and the moment their eyes met the horrible site they feared more. Maan had quietly led out from the scene. His anger was getting worst and he needed Dev. The moment he reached the room where Dev was he grabbed and pulled him untying his legs and hands. He hit him everywhere he could. his head was completely tattered with constant hits while his face covered with his own blood. Before Khan Saab and Prem could reach to stop him he hit Dev's head on to the huge glass table which was there piercing his body with glass pieces. Maan held the gun pointing to Dev but before he could shot Prem pushed Maan away from him while Dev slowly stood on his leg unsteadily.

Prem: pagal ho kya.. why don't you understand damn it... Maar doge ushe..

Maan looked at Prem with anger and fire in his eyes and next moment held his neck pushing him towards the wall choking his throat while Khan Saab ran to pull Maan away. Maan hit Khan Saab with the gun making him to bleed. He turned while his hand strangled Prem by his neck and next moment his fingers pulled the trigger shooting the bullets into him.

Maan smirked seeing Dev Raichand's body falling and bleeding with his own blood. His smiled had tat contentment of destroying his enemy who had dared to touch and harm his love. Prem and Khan Saab stood watching the destruction in front of their eyes with pain and fear for Maan's mistake.

Prem: Yeh kya kiya Maan…

Maan: killed him.. Dev Raichand is killed..

Maan laughed with his whole heart making them to believe tat he had finally did wat he wanted. He did not fear the consequences he would face but his heart was happy tat he finally punished the man who tortured his love.. took away all his happiness.

Maan: do you get Prem.. I killed this bloody b*****.

Maan kept hitting Dev's body with his legs. He pulled him up and shook the body saying in anger.

Maan: You wanted to take my Geet under you.. Wanted to rip my Geet in front of me na.. tho ab dekho wat I do with you.

Maan pushed Dev down and stepped on his groin laughing like anything. He sat on his knees and held his manhood in his fist almost crushing it with his pressure.

Maan: You wanted to have this inside her na… now tell me how will you.. meri Geet ko chune se pehle you need to face Maan Singh Khuranna.. do you get Dev Raichand..

Maan kept hitting Dev's manhood with his shoes while Prem and Khan Saab could not think anything. the only fear they had was wat they could do now. They waited for few seconds but seeing Maan turning more violent and the moment they saw him….. Maan held an iron rod which was laying side and hit Dev hard with it. He butchered his head continuously with the iron rod and seeing him nowhere to stop Prem and Khan Saab ran and pulled Maan away and the moment they did Maan lost his senses falling down on the tiled floor.

Precap: Nahi dungi…

Done with my update.. it was the toughest update for me.. I cant believe tat I made Maan such a person.. who had totally gone mad.. and I would love to say tat m happy with this update as I could remove my anger and frustration for the recent Delhi gang- rape case. I don't know wat the verdict will be but I pray tat such violent and severe punishment would be given to those 6 accused who not only snatched tat innocent girl's sanity but they snatched the humanity from this democratic India with their brutal act.

I would only say tat none girl should be quite when they feel they are being stalked or eve-teased or touched at wrong places on their body in buses or any other public places. Its your right to fight for yourself. Don't think tat you can't do it you your name will be spoiled. Just think tat if such persons exist anymore in this country than no girl will be safe anywhere forget outside not even in your own homes.

I hope I did not offend anyone with my update and words.. do like and comment if you love the update and share your views on this.. but don't forget to tell me how is the new twist.

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊Not read yet...
Thanx for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
dev killed by maan yes you are right i also want the same punishment for those bas... who snached a girl sanity and her life



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Posted: 12 years ago
speechless update
you do justice with all character
each character is right in it,s very place
lovely and awesome are small words for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Power packed
I'm speechless n in two minds
1) I'm happy Dev🤬 met his well deserved end
Ya such monsters are not fit to live for the safety of humanity
Those 6_ _ _ _ _ _ _ should be given death sentence only😡

2) I can't see Maan like this😭
Maaneet seperation

Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wht have u planned to do with maan?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
maan has really gotten mad and he felt calm only after he killed dev
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update.. te way my maan cant bear tat some one is accusing his geet, te way he is cleaning her wounds was so lovely.. yes my maan ki heart wont go away from his geet, now my maan is in angry coz his love, his heart did to end her life.. te way geet forcing my maan to hear her was lovely.. my maan showing his angry to dev who made his geet to do tat things, te way prem and khan took dev to km, and te way my maan showing his angry to his mens was so lovely, oh god like a lion he is roaring...te way my maan came to km, and attracking prem and khan with his words and with his hands was so painful, in angry my maan losing his control, was so painfull.. my maan became like tis, te way my maan punishing tat b**** dev was so lovely,. maan dont leave him, dev now u saw ur hell , wen u ripe te girls, wat they felt, now u feeling thousands time, i love u maan for giving tis punishment to tat b******...i love te update so so so much,..

shoba dear thanku for giving tis punishment to tat b**** by dedicating tis to tat delhi b*******, thanku so much, my maan gave te punishment.. my heart was burning shoba thinking tat delhi b*****, shoba u cooled my burning heart by giving tis punishment through my maan.thanku so much
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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