YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2):PG.155 NOTE - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update😊
Love ur writing...👏
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliantly beautiful... lol [i know it's a weird adjective!]
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Luv it thanks for the pm plz continue soon
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chapter 8

Jeevika and Viren both woke up around 7 the next day. They both went to check on Zaaine who was still asleep in his crib. They both went to quickly get ready. As Jeevika was taking a shower Viren was standing on the balcony looking out at the beautiful view. Jeevika came out and saw Viren standing himself. She went behind him and hugged in from the back. She slowly moved her arms around his waist and her head on his shoulder.

jeevika - "I could just stand here forever, just you and me"

viren - "Me too. Just the thought of having you in my arms all the time makes me excited enough. Really jeevs we need to plan to get away for a few days. Maybe even just the two of us"

jeevika - "Viren you've lost it. Who are we going to leave Zaaine with?"

viren - "Manvi and Virat. They can get some practice"

jeevika - "I think Karan and Zoya need practice before Manvi and Virat"

viren - "Well they're going for their honeymoon in 3 days. I think we need another honeymoon too"

jeevika - "How about for our first anniversary"

viren - "That's still a few months away jeevs. I wanna go out like right now"

jeevika - "Hold your horses Viren. We're here for the wedding remember?"

Viren smirked at Jeevika and then they both hear Zaaine mumbling. They walked over to see him and saw him awake with his hands stretching out telling one of them to hold him in their arms. Viren picked his son up and gave him a kiss. Zaaine just quietly and calmly placed his head on Viren's shoulder and closed his eyes.

jeevika - "Seems he's still sleepy"

viren - "He's falling asleep again?"

jeevika - "Yeah"

Viren went and sat on one of the sofa chairs and Zaaine quietly continued sleeping on his shoulder. He rubbed his back and patted his head. Just then they heard some knock on the door. Jeevika when to open it and there stood Manvi and Virat.

manvi - "Breakfast anyone?"

jeevika - "Thanks, didn't get a chance to go down yet" she said taking the tray from Manvi's hand.

virat - "Is Viren down already?"

jeevika - "Nope, Zaaine is sleeping on him. Come on in"

The three of them came inside the room and saw Viren with his son.

jeevika - "Here why don't you eat Viren. I'll hold Zaaine"

manvi - "You want to put him in the crib?"

jeevika - "He doesn't want to sleep in there. He wants someone to hold him" she smiled and said

manvi - "That boy loves attention huh?"

Viren handed over Zaaine to Jeevika and he started crying. He was comfortable where he was and just wanted to be held by his dad. Viren saw that laughed and took him back into his arms.

viren - "Yesterday at the hospital he didn't want me to hold him, and now he wants his dad"

jeevika - "Moody boy just like you"

viren - "Excuse me, did you call me moody?"

The three of them started laughing. They all sat down at the table and started eating breakfast together.

virat - "It's such a nice day to chill poolside"

viren - "I know, perfect weather. I think we should get going soon Virat. Got to make sure all the arrangements are done"

virat - "Yeah, actually the dj is coming also in an hour or two. I just talked to him and he's on his way"

viren - "Sounds good"

jeevika - "Want me to take your moody son from you now Mr. Moody Vadhera?"

viren - "Did you just call us father, son moody? You know what no, you don't deserve to take care of my boy. I'll take him with me"

Jeevika and Manvi both started laughing.

jeevika - "Viren he's going to be hungry and then start crying. You can't carry around his stuff with you"

viren - "I'll wear the carrier. And I'll keep his bag in the side of the hall. We don't need you"

jeevika - "okay fine, you have my number if you need me"

viren - "Trust us. Zaaine and I won't need you" he said smiling and looking over at Zaaine.

Jeevika held Zaaine as Viren put the baby carrier on. She then helped place Zaaine in the carrier.

jeevika - "Here's his bag. And the milk bottle is on the side"

viren - "Thank you Mrs. Moody Jeevika Vadhera. We will see you guys later"

manvi - "Byeee. Have fun you three"

The three of them left and it was Manvi and Jeevika alone in the room. Just then Manvi's phone rang and it was Zoya. Manvi turned the speaker phone on.

zoya - "Hey girls, whats up?"

manvi - "Nothing where are you? We'll come see you, both of us are free and the boys took Zaaine"

zoya - "Im actually about to down. The mehni ladies are here. That's why I called you guys, so you can come and get it done too"

jeevika - "Oka we'll come. But i can't get it done. Have to carry around Zaaine all day"

manvi - "Don't worry Zaaine is Viren's responsibility today. It will dry up in a few hours. Okay we're coming. Where are you?"

zoya - "Im going to the main hall to check the flower arrangements. The mehndi ladies will be doing it there, so come there only"

manvi - "Okay see you in ten"

Manvi hung up the phone and the girls were about to leave the room. They went downstairs and saw Viren and Virat with a few people organizing a few things.

viren - "Ohh look who we have here? Where you missing your moody boys?"

jeevika - "Very much. He's still sleeping Viren. Does he have a fever again?"

viren - "That's what I thought, but he doesn't. He's just tired for some reason. Let him sleep, I'll feed him when he's up. Anyways our work is done, we've told them what to do. Just have to wait and watch"

manvi - "Good, so now you take care of Zaaine and we'll get our mehndi done" she said and saw Karan and Zoya walking towards them.

karan - "Whatsup guys and gals?"

manvi - "The sky is up Karan. Okay girls let's go get out mehndi done"

jeevika - "You guys go get it. I don't want it"

viren - "Why?"

jeevika - "Who will take care of Zaaine?"

viren - "Hello, me who else? Anyways he doesn't want to come near you today"

jeevika- "Still Viren. You never know this little man's mood sometimes"

zoya - "So get just a little done. Or do it on one hand"

viren - "No just go get it all done. Come on, it'll look really nice on your beautiful hands"

Jeevika started blushing and Manvi and Zoya started saying "awww"

The six of them walked over and sat down in this one area designated for all the guests to get their mehndi done. There were colorful cushions and everyone was excited to get their mehndi done. All the guys sat near their partners and talking.

Just as Jeevika was getting her mehndi done, Zaaine woke up.

viren - "Let me go get his bag. He's probably hungry now"

jeevika - "Okay"

Viren went to the other side of the hall and started feeding Zaaine while the girls continued getting their mehndi done. Manvi and Jeevika were done after 20 minutes or so. Zoya just sat next to them seeing their mehndi as she was going to get it done tomorrow.

even though i said i'd update after i reached pg. 32 I posted it before!!! 😃 so if you think i deserve a comment then do so 😆
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haha loved the line " hold your horse viren"

Aww moddy father n son awww so cute.
I'm reading each line n commenting :D

Mrs moody vadhera lol.
Hello, Me who else.
Best dailouge but where's the other part?
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super cute update!
I love how Viren nd Jeevika romance nd tease each other nd stuff.
They both are sooo cute! ❤️

Yuh are reallly amazing writer!
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the early update!:) its a lovely update!

Love the balcony moment. A beautiful husband and wife moment.
Its cute that they still tease each other.
And the father and son bond is adorable:)

Continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the updatee!
loved when viren said:
viren - "No just go get it all done. Come on, it'll look really nice on your beautiful hands" soo cuteee
hope we get another update sooner
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update..👏
Loved the moody dad and moody son part😆
Loved it..
Thanks for the PM..
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.
N specially the line "hold on horses viren" haaa.
Moody son ,moody vadhera.
It was fun.
Continue soon n thanx 4 d pm

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