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Sandhya

@Sandrav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nic job...good story like it...:)

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cherry227

@cherry227

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

you're sooo goood! love the way you've written a simple OS on the basis of relationships and how each one perceives it 👏

arohi made a mistake... but when she realised, she rectified it! she may have hurt angad for two years but by divorcing him, she saved him from the same hurt for the rest of his life... it takes guts to do that 👍🏼

i loved the arjun arohi meet and arohis cheeky answer 😆

"Oh I stopped drooling the moment you opened your mouth! You should keep your mouth shut it will do you much help!" 🤣🤣🤣

arjun had to realise first as arohi had lost confidence in her ability to maintain any relationship! i loved the way he said "i love hot mess" 😳

her insecurities and his confidence... what a combination! you've explained it so so well! kudos dear 🤗 please write more achu... till u get enough direction and inspiration to continue your ff's... which, by the way, i miss a lot too

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guzaarish

@guzaarish

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

i missed reading Your works Achu!

I had to come back and read this one!! :*

Miss you achu <3

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shreya

@ShrePreet18

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

lovely yaar, I like this os

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arjuhi4evr

@arjuhi4evr

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Too good !
Luvd arjuhi first meet..its wasn't love at first sight..but still luvd it !

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Mahi-Mahak

@AAKMH2

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

read it again

truly beautifull

plx updt ur other work too achu

great writer jii..tk out few time for us too

missing ur writng so much

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

read it again

truly beautifull

plx updt ur other work too achu

great writer jii..tk out few time for us too

missing ur writng so much

i will try dear... 😊

the problem is it is my last semester and there remains only two months and i had a lot of work to do... that's why i am irregular in i-f...

and thank you so much dear! 😊