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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

wow nice update 6,7,8 i know its late but i was busy for this months so i has a little time to read ff sorry for that



Thanks Dear..
No need for sorry i am glad you read them
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 8 Page 44

Love Never Looses

Part 9

I felt a sharp pain in my neck due to which I opened my eyes and realized that was sleeping while sitting on the stool beside Nupur's bed and my head was in rest of my elbow.I getup from my place realize that it was morning.I looked towards Nupur and my sweet angel,it's my best morning in this four years as in this morning I could able to see my love's face,today my long lasting wish got fulfilled.without making much noise I moved out of the room and went home to change and freshnup.

Nupur's P.O.V.

I opened my eyes to find myself in the ward,I rolled my eyes to the whole room but couldn't Mayank to anywhere,Shriya was still sleeping,I was wondering where could Mayank be when Nurse entered the room and greeted me.

Nurse:"Good..Morning Mam..!! How are you feeling now.."

I nodded my head and smiled showing her that I am much relived from pain I was about to ask her about Mayank when herself told me while checking my reports,"Mam..!! Sir has gone to house he said he will be back in half an hour and asked me take care of you and your daughter till he come back..".

I was very much relived to know this from Nupur.Mayank so much cares about me ,he so much loves me where are you Mayank..come soon I want to see you'!!! All these four years I have been always wished to see you in morning and now I know my wait is finished you won't leave me ever..come soon'.
Nurse helped me to freshenup as my fracture still pains a lot,I got up from my bed slowly without disturbing my angel after lot time she is sleeping soundly and I didn't wished to break her sleep.After washing my face and freshing myself the nurse helped me to laid down my bed back.
She checked my glucose level and everything and was set to leave when Mayank arrive with bunch of bags in his hands.He gave a sweet smile to me,I was so missing his dimple smile and moved towards me,this time I too replied him with my smile though proper smiling was paining my cheeks but still I tried my best to give my smile to him.

He came to me and placed the bags on the couch and sat besides me,"How are you feeling..".
Giving him a warm smile I replied," much better'By the way where have you been..?"

He said,"I had gone to home for freshenup and also to bring fresh fruits for you both,you both need lot of vitamins and minerals and also to buy some clothes for my darling..see her this dress is so worn out'I just wish I would have bought correct size'"

I was so amazed ,Mayak was not only a good man or a true lover but he was a perfect father.He so much loves his daughter I wish I could able to give him the happiness of his daughter's birth but ou r fate has something else,shrugging my thoughts as I don't want to think about past I thanked him,meanwhile my angel also woke up from her sleep.

"Good Morning..!! Shriya.."
"Good Morning Mamma'!!!"Saying she hugged me,Mayank was keenly watching us.

He too said,"Good Morning Shriya".She didn't replied to him I know she needs time and space to adjust but somewhere it hurts Mayank but next she does was a next step towards him,she looked towards him and nodded her head as if replying to his greet.The smile on his face was enough to show how much happy he was atleast for the first time she replied to his greet,where yesterday she was just ignoring 'I hope everything to fine with time.

Mayank's P.O.V.

Though it hurts me that my daughter didn't replied me but still a hope was develop as for the first time she replied to my greet she didn't ignored me like yesterday and I know slowly with time she will also become close to me like she is with her mother,I just wish that day.
"I had brought fresh fruits for two ladies and also I had brought a dress for you Shriya'"I got up and went to couch and bring dress for her,"Shriya,your clothes had become dirty why don't you fresh your self , brush your teeth and change to this dress.".

She gave me a helpless look,no wonder her eyes are so expressive like her mother that I could easily tell what she need right now,"Don't worry I had brought a toothbrush and paste for you also..see.."I showed her a baby pink barbie coloured toothbrush,seeing the brush a cute smile appeared on her face and she gave me her largest smile,I was so happy she was actually answering to my gestures,she was looking so cute I want to pull her cheeks but controlled my self.

I gave her accessories and she went to bathroom to brush herself.when she returned I showed her dress,It was light blue with a pink coloured baby doll at the centre frok.She firstly looked towards her mother as if asking for her permission and when her mother said to take it she grabbed from my hand and ran to the bathroom without saying anything."You know she is replica of her mother..".Nupur raises her eye brows as if asking what-do-you-mean,"I mean..her mother also never thanked me when ever I bought a gift for her rather she used to say me *immitating in her voice*It's your duty Mr.Shrama why should I thank you.".I looked towards her only to get shooting daggers before she could burst on me Shriya was back,I thanked her she is indeed my angel saving me from her mother's anger.I shifted my gaze from Nupur to her I was bewilder she was looking a sweet fairy,my daughter was looking very very beautifull,"You are looking beautifull Shriya.."
She lokoed me nodded head and went to towards her mother wanting her remarks but Nupur wasn't saying anything I elbowed her to come from her thoughts I know she was very much surprised indeed Our daughter was looking beautifull.

Nupur's P.O.V.

Oh..My God..!! my angel was looking so beatifull I was just so surprised Dhruv never bring anything for her not even a toy and here Mayank bought such a beautifull dress for her and even it fitted her so perfectly why shouldn't Mayank do all these things after all he is her father and I was so much today my chain of thoughts were broken when Mayank nuged me that our angel is looking for my words I signalled her come near me and made her sit besides me and kissed her both the cheeks and said,"You are looking a sweet llittle fairy my darling..!!! You are looking very beautifull'my angel.."

She replied to me,"Thank you Mamma.."And she said something in my ear I was very much surprised but somewhere happy also saying she went to do her drawings.I know Mayank looking towards me impaitently to know what she said in her ear.
Sighing I replied to him," She said to thank you for a such a beautifull dress she liked it."

Mayank's P.O.V.

I nugged Nupur as our angel was waiting for her compliments she came from her journey of thoughts and made her sit besides her and kissed her both cheeks ,I know how I had controlled myself as even I also want to kiss my daughter cheeks but I know I have to move slowly in this and was so feeling jealous of Nupur but then was also content that I had my family loving family infront of me.She thanked Nupur and said something in her ear and went to do her drawing,the way she acted it gives me a hint that she has something regarding me no wonder I could understand her each geasture coz she is replica of her mother,I was impatiently looking Nupur to say after a moment she said, " She said to thank you for a such a beautifull dress she liked it."

I was like I mean I was so much happy from inside this was something really ,made he happy from inside,she liked it she said Nupur to thank me I so want to hug her and said her that darling I am your father you just order you don't need to say thank you to me what ever yo need just order me I'll bring everything for you,happily I looked towards Nupur showing my happiness and know she would have understood it well after all she knows me too much.she both just kept on looking our daughter admiring her where she was busy in her drawing.Afterall she is my daughter won't loose her concentration so easily that's why she was unware that we duo were just looking at her and smiling each other.


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Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it is
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was very small😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

Update was very small😭



next time would try to give a bit longer update
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very sweet and cute part
loved it
well written:)
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.

A very sweet and cute part

loved it
well written:)
continue soon.



Thank You Maria Didi
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
both mayank and shreya were so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww this was the most cutest and amzing update ...

just loved the way u have shown the father mother n shriya emotions... so beautiful so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
fynlly nupur missing mayank ...n shriya breaking the walls b/w her n mayank ...mayank ke to waare nyaare ho gaye 😛
nywaz nice update

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