OS : Fate...that u can never avoid {Thank u Pg12}

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Dear readers!

Just one request. I know I am writing this OS, even some doesn't like the idea. I know This would make u cry...but for one time cry...live one of the best feeling of love...get drowned in depth of love...a love story that God made only once...!


Please, even if it make u cry, even if u feel like killing me...just comment...at least, i would know, that my writing has that potential to make u cry...to portray all the feelings that I have been carrying since one month! To portray one of the best Love Story!


Please do comment, 'coz this is not just one day work!😳
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No dream that a person achieves in his/her life, is his/her individual work. Lots of people work behind that person...to make that dream a reality. I am not unique. Same goes with me. Lots of people have worked behind to help me live my dream. I can't thank everyone...still few people I would like to thank.

First, Coldy!👏 Without her, this OS wouldn't have been NOTHING. So, A big thank u and applauds to her.

Then, my Jeena di...who encouraged me pen down this idea...even though I had doubts whether its going to be good or not...but she stood besides me n made me pen down these ideas.


Shree di, a big big thank u! Without her, the sound in the next post would have been impossible...that music holds all my emotions...and was much much necessary!


My ICGians...I love u people...for being there as always!


Last but not the least, My wonderful readers, who believe me, and allowed me to pen down such a dreadful OS😆


Hugs everyone!

Happy reading!







"Arnavji, aap humaru zindagi kaa sabse ahem hissa hain.." She said this and gave an emotional hug to him. He hugged her, with same intensity...caressing her back simultaneously.

"AHEM", Family interrupted.

"Nannav! RM is really big with many rooms...with doors and closed windows. You may continue there!", NK teased.

Quite embarrassed, love birds broke their long and passionate hug.

"Pata ni...ee Love birds kaa honeymoon kab khatam hoga...Khatam hoga ki lifetime chalta rhe", Maami teased. {when will ur honeymoon will come to end...is it going to end or continue till eternity?}

"Okay! Shut up now! And everyone, get ready! We all are going out for lunch to celebrate Khushi's success..." , Arnav announced. Everybody got excited, and went to their respective rooms to get ready n so did ArShi. Suddenly, Arnav's phone rang...of course, Aman on other side of phone...After some time Arnav shouted at Aman.

"You...!!😡 I told you not to keep any meeting today...! And you kept...Idiot!😡

Aman spoke something, to which Arnav shouted again,

"However important, I don't care...cancel the meeting! And don't call me again...DID YOU GET THAT", with this he cut the call in anger. Khushi was listening all this, she came near him and said,

"Arnavji...what the😆...On my success, you are missing such an important meeting? Giving me happiness n taking all the glooms with u?"

"Khushi its just a small deal...I 'll get better than this! Don't worry! You get ready and we'll..." Khushi interrupted him.

"No, Mr.Raizada! You are going to office, attending meeting and coming soon in evening to spend time with your beautiful wife.", Khushi said.


"But Khushi..."


"No Khushi Khushi...Now call Amanji and tell him that you are coming.", Khushi instructed🥱 With no option left, he called Aman & got ready for office. While helping him with coat, Khushi said ;


"Arnavji, come soon! ", getting emotional.


"Khushi! What happen? Why are u so tensed? ", Arnav asked...seeing sudden change in Khushi.


"Bas Aise hei...Bas aap jaldi aa jayega", Khushi said, while hugging him. {Nothing, just come as earliest as possible} He hugged her back, then Kissed on her cheek..nd bid her good bye.


After bidding him goodbye...she went to all family members to inform them about cancellation of Lunch.



*Hours later*


It was 9pm. Raizadas had finished their dinner n had gone to their respective rooms...but there was no sign of Arnav. Khushi too went to her room, without having dinner...she was waiting for him. She was tired, so she dozed off.




A driver was driving insanely on road...like a drunk. Car was moving like a snake. As the car turned on left side...A speeding truck came on the way...to save himself...driver turned his car to other side. Car finally lost its balance and hit a tree hard.

Khushi was standing on other side of road. "ARNAVJI..!!!" , she shouted..in total shock



"ARNAVJI..!!" , Khushi's woke up, and ran towards her room's door. "ARNAVJI" , She shouted again. NK's room was near...he came running on hearing the scary yell.


"What happen Khushiji? What happened to Nannav? ", NK enquired...tensed.


"Ar..na..vji", she said in shaking voice..."Nightmare"...she said again.


NK sighed in relief. "Oh! Khushiji! You scared me...it was just a nightmare. Now, calm down, Nannav must me on the way...", NK gave her water. After NK was gone, Khushi sat down on bed and recalled everything that came to her dream.


"Just a bad dream", she said and looked at the clock. It was 12:15am n still no sign of Arnav. Now, she got really tensed. He never gets late than 12 n today. She picked up her cell n was about to call when her phone rang. It was Aman on the other side.


"Yeah Amanji!" . He spoke something which made her dead scared.


"What he's doing there...there so much height there."


"I don't know Ma'am...you must go fast before he does something to him", Aman scared her more & cut the call. Without thinking anything, she picked up her purse and ran out of RM. Somehow she reached the prescribed place.


"ARNAVJII" , she called out..She looked here n there, but couldn't spot anyone.


"ARNAVJII", she again called out. Finally, she spotted someone...near the edge.


"ARNAVJII", she called out again. He turned back to see His Lady...then he came away from edge and spread out his hands for hug. Crying, Khushi ran towards him and gave him one of the tightest and passionate hug. Arnav was forced back...he smirked & congratulated him inside, for calculating right length, upto which he should move forward😆. After hugging him for a long time, she remembered, what happened sometime back. She pulled herself away from him and angrily looked at him.


"YOU! You were joking...dammit! You know what I was going through...I wasn't getting any medium to reach u...was tensed to what would have happened and here you are measuring the height of this cliff? ", Khushi shouted at him, while holding his collar. Warm tears, wetting her face.


He said nothing and smiled.


"You are smiling? I am dying here n you are enjoying this", Khushi shouted again...clutching his collar more n more tight. He still said nothing. Softly, he removed her hands from his collar...held her hands and turned her towards the cliff. He took out handkerchief from his pocket and blind folded her.


"Arnavji", Khushi got scared, due to darkness.


"Shhh..."


He moved little forward and brought her near edge...maintaining a safe distance. Then, he placed his hands on her waist, standing behind her


"You can take off the cloth from ur eyes", He whispered in her ears. He then, rested his head on her head. She removed the cloth and slowly opened her eyes. She couldn't believe to what she saw.


She could see whole Delhi from there. City seemed like a jewellery...studded with gold and diamond...which gleamed due to divine glow. Arnav looked at her face from back... She looked like a kid, who was taken to wonder land and was amazed to see such a big Fun Land, a land that was only hers. Simply, Priceless!


Arnav too smiled. He travelled his hands from her waist to her hands...his hands reached her palms and entangled it with hers'. They were standing like Titanic couple... His head resting on her head...Their hands playing random game with each other.


"How's it? ", Arnav enquired in husk voice.


"B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L" , Khushi said in awe. For it was like, looking at heaven. Her eyes were twinkling more due to glow which her city showed.


"I knew it. I knew u would love it...I spoilt ur day, I found nothing better than this to celebrate your day." He said.


"OUR day", Khushi corrected him...She left his hands and turned towards him. She cupped his face...Arnav still holding his waist.


"This is our day Arnavji! Only our! You know Arnavji, the very thought of loosing u, completely kills me within...even in joke never say anything like that...promise me", Khushi said.


"I promise !" He promised.


Khushi could not resist anymore...His innocence...his love for her...his care...all tempted her to love him more n more. She bought her lips near his. Slowly, she touched his lips with her's...Finally, that touch changed into passionate kiss. She caressed back of his head and he, caressed her waist.


Khushi broke their kiss to get some air...both rested their forehead on each other's.


"I love u", Khushi said


"I love u too, Dammit😉" And continued their kiss.


Later, they went home. After having dinner, they went to their room. " Khushi, I will take hot shower today..I am really tired..", Arnav said n went into the bathroom. Khushi irresistible today.


"I will join u too Arnavji", She told to herself and opened the bathroom door. {Yeah! It was open😉☺️}. She slid her hands from back...giving him a backside hug. He knew she would come n that's y left the lock open.😉 He turned towards her...both lost in each other's eyes...lost in each other's love!






It early morning. Khushi was sleeping with her head resting on his bare chest. His arms was across her bare shoulders. Suddenly, same dream started flashing in front of Khushi.



"ARNAVJI", She yelled again. Arnav was startled with voice n got up quickly.


"What happen Khushi??😲". She looked at him...started checking his face.

"Are u okay", she asked.

"I should ask this question to u Khushi. What happened to u...why you shouted like this...n why are u so much tensed.? ", Arnav asked, cupping her face. She just pushed herself on Arnav...resting her head again on his chest...very very scared.


After sometime she spoke, " Arnavji! I want to go to temple."

"Okay! we'll go in afterno..."

Khushi interrupted " No...Now!"

"Okay okay...don't get hyper. We'll go after breakfast.", Arnav promised and kissed her again on her forehead.



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Please play wen song attached to the thread stops...pls...😳


During breakfast, Khushi was really restless. Why such dream is coming again n again? She thought.


After breakfast, both Arnav and Khushi made their way to temple. Throughout the way, Khushi was thinking about the dream. Finally, they reached the temple.


"Arnavji, I want to take some thing for Pooja...The shop is there...", Khushi said, While pointing on the other side of road. "I will go n get it"


"No! You are not crossing alone...I am coming. ", Arnav said.

"Arnavji...", Before she could complete, Arnav pulled her and crossed the road. Reaching there, Khushi selected the material required for pooja. "Give that Sindoor also." Khushi said to shopkeeper.

"Khushi, give me! I'll carry these...you bring sindoor." Arnav said, while taking everything from her hands. Khushi took sindoor from shopkeeper and was about to cross road with Arnav when her phone rang.


"Jiji! ", she exclaimed. "Hello jiji..." she continued and started walking behind Arnav.
Arnav first checked the road then, "Come Khushi"


Khushi followed him...still talking on phone...engrossed more in her talks. Arnav crossed fast and Khushi was walking slow.

"Hello...helloo...Jiji your voice is not clear..." Khushi stood where she was n then wnet forward on the road...unaware that she was walking in the middle of road. Arnav reached other side of road and sighed. Suddenly, he heard her voice, yelling "hello..hello". He turned around to see where she was. As he looked back, he saw her walking in the middle of road. He was horrified to see her there. Before he could yell her to come back, he noticed a speeding truck coming towards Khushi.


His eyes widened in shock...No..he cannot let her Khushi D...



"KHUSHII", shouted Arnav and ran towards her, throwing materials aside. Khushi heard him yelling and looked towards the voice, when she noticed the truck speeding towards her. He ran as fast as he could...running with all might to save His Khushi, His life..


The truck came near Khushi.



"KHUSHIII"


"BANG"



A body was thrown in the air with full force. It flipped and then hit the road hard. First its head hit the road then, whole body submitted itself to the life shredder (road). Instantly, people gathered around it. Its eyes did not care to count how many people were there, its hands did not turned around to seek help...its lips did not move to call them. All it cared to see the other being, who, its mind wished was safe.


It looked around and finally spotted an unconscious body, that lay on the other, yet safe side of road...Bleeding body tried to get up, to save the conscious ones, but injuries bought it down. It stretched its hand...to reach the hands of unconscious one...but it was too far. Now, everything started fading...then came a blackout and *thud*...the lifeless hands fell back on the road. Ambulance came and took both the bodies to hospital.




Khushi gained conscious. She was lying on hospital bed, with Raizadas all around her. She smiled faintly as she saw little Aarav holding her hands. With Doctors help she got up..and looked at everyone and gave a smile. Everyone was there...Except..😕


ARNAV!


She recalled what happened hrs ago. She looked at herself...she was perfectly fine...no injuries, except minor one on head. If she wasn't injured then...


"Where is ARNAVJI??", Khushi enquired. Everyone went silent. Suddenly, Doctor came in and informed Raizada, " Mrs. raizada, There is no chance of his survival...we did everything...but...If anyone wants to meet him last..."


Khushi was shocked. "Whom are u talking about? Tell me dammit! ", She shouted.

"Mr. ARNAV S. RAIZADA.", Doc said..." He got hit while saving you"

Doc kept saying but Khushi didn't pay heed to what he was saying. Her eyes were wide open due to shock.


"N-O. He C-an't", Khushi said in shock. She got up from bed and ran crazily towards the door. "WHERE IS HE", she asked.


"ICU...", without hearing what he said further she ran towards ICU.


She pushed open the door "ARNAVJI"


She started shivering...her hands went numb. Under the white sheets, lied his butchered body... enveloped with white bandages. Still in shock, he slowly moved towards her protector and sat silently beside him...observing the vapour forming in his oxygen mask. Slowly, she bought her hands to his head & started caressing it ; tears continuing to come out. One of her drop fell on the lifeless hands, which instantly wriggled, sensing the wetness.


"Arnavji", she called out softly.


Slowly, he opened his eyes, trying to catch last glimpse of his lady. Assured that he finally saved her, he gave her a faint smile. Khushi couldn't control herself and burst out. He couldn't take it and raised his hand to wipe it. She held his hand and kissed it and cried more n more. Khushi cursed herself for this...why did he save her? It was her fault after all. Arnav understood her inner feelings and with his other hand; which even though pained very hard; removed his mask.


"No Arnavji..." , Khushi said in concern.


"Khushi! Pls bolne do, ", he said in weak voice. {Khushi lemme speak}


"All this didn't happen 'coz of u. In fact, no one is at fault *pause*I told you , I design my fate, so did I. Devi mayya design ur fate...how can she let her favorite child hurt? " He continued in weak voice.

"You know Khushi , all my life till here, I have been losing my close ones..I couldn't do anything to save my mom...but, I cannot afford to loose you Khushi.", A lone drop left his weak eyes.

"Khushi, u say naa, that devi maiyya punishes the one who hurt her child. How could ASR be spared? Even though I don't believe in her...but you do. In fact, you are her favourite child. I hurt you...I am sorry Khushi! I...", he started breathing heavily. Khushi quickly tried to put mask, but he turned his face to other side.


"Arnavji pls", Khushi was interrupted again.


"Khushi, i don't have any complains with life...neither with your God...Just one..I was not given chance to repent. "


"No Arnavji..."Khushi said...continuing caressing his forehead. He started breathing more heavily. "I'll call the Doc." Khushi said. Khushi went to the door and called for doc.


She went to him and started caressing his head. "Arnavji...doc is coming"


"Khushi, its paining...pls promise me...prom...is..e me! ", Arnav said in almost fading voice...keeping his hands forward. Khushi held his hands and started rubbing it.


"Wada karo, tum jiyogi! Wada ka..o...tu..m jeeyigo...Ah...Ah Aar..av ke liye! D..i..ke liye...ap..ap..ni...Jalebiyon ke liye...Khushi...mere liye", He said... {Promise me that you will live...for Aarav...for Di...for ur Jalebi...for ME }


Just then, doc came in quickly...they wanted to make him wear the mask but he turned to the other side...


"Promise Khushi?? " , He asked while breathing heavily.


"I promise Arnavji...pls...pls...don't talk..", Khushi said. Arnav smiled...Nurse came, forced them to leave each other's hand. Khushi was pushed outside...doc surrounded him..blocking her view. Arnav's hands dropped and he smiled... Docs continued there ways to save him. After sometime Docs came out and said - "I am sorry! He's clinically dead...I'll get the papers ready"


With this he went away. Raizadas broke down. Khushi went numb. Nothing was left inside her...she was not able to hear wailing Anjali...she was not able to feel Aarav's little grasping hers...she could not see , NK standing in front of her.


She pushed the standing being in front of her and went inside the room...where he lied. His chest...still going up n down...slowly...marking only little amount of life left in him. She went near him...her eyes filled with tears. She didn't knew what she was doing. Slowly, she bent down and put her head near his heart...her hands rested on his heart.

She closed her eyes n whispered - " One heart"





Khushi was standing in the middle of road...harsh winds were blowing...she was alone..she called out.


"ARNAVJI"


*no response*


"ARNAVJI" she called again and started encircling on her place. She looked around...and finally spotted someone. Khushi wiped her tears to see clear image of that person.

He was standing there at a distance...with his heads down.

Khushi was really happy. She wiped her tears in joy and moved forward. As she moved forward...he moved back slowly..

"Arnavji why...? "Khushi was confused.


He looked up. Khushi saw a divine glow in his eyes...very strange and unknown glow. His tears left his eyes, which looked more like a pearl. He raised his hands and softly said - "I love you Khushi...I will love you forever...Hamesha! "





Death certificate :

D.O.D : 30th November 2012

Time : 11:45 pm

Reason : Cardic arrest

Name : Mr. Arnav singh Raizada.




Can I let u cry?😳 Surprise awaits for you!
Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago
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Res waiting Gazal

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What an emotional story. 👍🏼

you write it so brilliantly Gazal.


Thank God we didn't face to this onscreen.
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res wa!!
my net is damn slow
atleast reserved!😃😃😃



finally un res ing wa...!!! omg... this is awesomely wonderful... death scene of him made my mind feel dizzy...

u made me cry completly...me sob sob!!
tym is nearly goiong to strike 1am..and havng practical exam tomor!! am not worried abt it. worrying abt my arshi's fate... 😭

u wrote it wonderfully and luved! Nice try dear!! Thanks for pm 😳
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You really wanna kill him, oh God. I am for it/not for it.

You broke the promise you gave me Gazal, I am cutty with you. I can't take this up. Khushi won't live a second without her arnavji. they are one. They share one heart. They share one breath. She won't live a second without him.My arshi. Oh God, why did I read this.

Emotions are good dear.

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Thanx for the surprise dear.

Edited by dkatmala - 12 years ago
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Silent readers, I think we deserve ur likes at least!😳
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can you plz tell me how to follow coz i don,t know how to i love the vm i don,t know about the ff plz sombody help me plz plz plz plz plz
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Originally posted by: kashmala.123

can you plz tell me how to follow coz i don,t know how to i love the vm i don,t know about the ff plz sombody help me plz plz plz plz plz



Mention in ur comments that u loved the VM...also, press like at the main post... (if u really liked it..😳)

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