Uttaran A New Beginning

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PART 2 ;---

Yuvi was worried to see Mukta ... Mukta was almost to fainted by seeing yuvi's face ... suddenly he holds her ... tears rooled from mukta's eyes ... she says in her mind ..Aaj Kismat ekh aur baar yuvi mera samne .. yuvi shocked to see her and mukta leaves ...mukta was moving .. yuvi stops her and says .. today also i love u a lot . will u ??? mukta silently goes back ...and gives a smile ..yuvi was confused And he was stressed ..

STILL :- This is the Beginning of Love stoty of Yukta ..!! dont loose hopes guys ..

And award function ends ..

Everyone congragulated Mr. Rathore.

The Bundela's,Rathore's are leaving from party.Mr.Rathore is happy and tapasya says..''Kya look hai ji' He replies. 'Aisa kuch bhi nahi..bus I am satisfied with my award..

Tapasya says U deserve it..!! mera pyara hubby Rathore ..rathore says .Thanks meri pyari Tappu...

Mukta coming from back..

tapasya asks Rathore. ajib hai.Wher's Mukta Gone..he replies she will be somewhere around with meethi i will search her till that U stand here itself..tapasya says ok..Rathore turns back mukta finds there..!! U low come on be happy U father is best businesses man of the year come on..mukta smiles and all there went to home..

At 10 PM :-- Bundela house..

all came from party..yuvi simply rushed to his room..iccha going to kitchen to prepare butter milk. Meethi helps her by putting butter milk into glasses...'Iccha ...to meethi.jao beta butter milk papa ko dedo.. Meethi dinks butter milk there itself and leaves..Iccha taking butter milk glasses and goes into yuvi's room..

The door is closed .. !!!

Iccha bangs the door and says 'yuvi beta Mai andar aa sakti hu kya' yuvi replies ha maa..zarur..iccha observes yuvi's face..she notices some thing us wring in yuvi..she says to yuvi. She goes there and gives butter milk to him. Yuvi says . 'Mujhe nahi chaiye' ..iccha says kya huaa beta sab teek hai na.. Kya itna parishan hai.. Yuvi drinks butter milk..iccha goes and sits next to him ..and yuvi sleepy on iccha's lap.. And says " Maa" " Maa" " Maa"..

Icccha is worried..and says mera baccha kya huaa.bol ..yuvi remembes what he spoke with mukta.and icha said..dekho beta.."" Maan mein koi baath hai na mujhe batvo' yuvi says nothing maa .

Then iccha says ..see yuvi I know from childhood ur rude..now U R grown up youth ..i know U changed a lot..but don't get angry..plz U don't know what U will do wen U get angry like ur dad.!! ' kaash tumara parvarish mera sath hota tho' yuvi says no maa its ur fault.everything happened so happened leave that matter..Mera bachpana tha..mera naseeb sahi nahi..tha uss waqt..mera parvaish so called gunwanthi kiya..!!

Still. :-- Now yuvi hates gunwanthi..As he hated iccha before

Iccha leave that matter ..she says..ham bundela parivar hai beta..hamara izshat aur gaurav ( respect) dhono mutthi mein rakna chaiiye !! Yuvi says ok maa I m sleepy now and iccha says ..whenver U fell like sharing something plz share with me I am always there with U beta..ok good night and she leaves..

Iccha enters her room ..and veer was not there..she got worried..and says veer itni raath kaha jaa sakti hai. There was a slip there .iccha goes and reads it..it was written..'GARDEN'..@nd signature of veer right below slip.

In bundela house Garden..

Veer lighting up candles there ..and he decorated the big white swing with flowers..and meanwhile iccha cane to garden. Iccha shocked ti see all this arrangements made my veer..iccga says kya hai veer itni raath mein ...?? Kya jar rahe hai aap.. Kuch bhi nahi hai iccha ..he pulls her hands and take down her swing and asks her to sit..iccha refuses it and says veer uts already ,10 :30 Wat to do @ swing.. ???

Nothing veer goes back and pushes slowly the swing. Iccha says..tum hamesha busy hu.. Iss liye I called @ garden..veer slowly pushes swing iccha says aap bina..and veer says tum toh mera patni hu iccha ...i love you iccha and iccha slowly says i-love-u-veer ..aNd suddenly says I love u veer..and veer says ur always special to me..ur. Teacher ji,guider,mother of my child,ur all rounder to me..and suddenly rain comes...veer comes to iccha...and kisses on her forehead...and say mein.tujse boath pyar karti hu iccha . I love u...

BACKGROUND MUSIC :----------

Kuch khaas hai,Kuch paas hai,

Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,

Kuch duriyan,

nazdikiyan,

Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,

Kya yeh khumaar hai,

kya aitbaar hai,Shayad yeh pyaar hai,

Haan hai shayad

,Kya yeh bahar hai,

kya intezaar hai,

Shayad yeh pyaar hai,

Pyaar hai shayad..

Scene Ends

And its morning...:---

Tapasya and rathore having a tea..rathore asks to tapasya.. Anything special today...tapasya says no...special was over yesterday..and both laugh at each other...!! Mukta comes down and rushing near door.rarhore asks ..where are U going mukta..in this early morning 8..Am.. She says its Saturday pappa ..i have special class because its half day..and rathore says shall I drop u ..no pappa college bus arrives in 5 mins u carry on bye ...and tappu says come soon baby

In Bundela House :---

Veer reading news paer ...

and yuvi comes and touches veer's feet .. veer says kush raho beta !! y ru touching my feet .. y today more love and affection today towards ur PAA !!!

''Yuvraj says paa last week i leneded u money for cricket tournament in college .. cricket tornament is coming soon .. hope i will be captain and pratice starts from today .. so bless me paa .. veer smiles and says .. utto beta .. ur team will surely win and he says bye and leaves for college ..

In College :-----

Pratice session starts ... Yuvi was About To Bat ...Some Seniors Looked angrily on him !!

Precap :---- Yuvi was about to fight with seniors ...suddenly he remembers what iccha said last night !! ( .ham bundela parivar hai beta..hamara izshat aur gaurav ( respect) dhono mutthi mein rakna chaiiye !! )

Written By :-- Vishal Satish

Creative Idea :-- Nishmita Veer Mehra

NEXT EPISODE :-----

PART 3 (( 12 Th January Saturday ))

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...Scarlet... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dude...i don't get d yukta track
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome storyline.👏 n thanks for the veecha scene keep it up 👍🏼 we want veecha n rasya scenes in every episode of urs. 😆

one small suggestion plz proof read it there r spelling/grammatical mistakes so some parts are bit unclear. plz take it as a constructive suggestion. im not blaming/being rude.
Edited by itstimetospeak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow very nice.waiting for next episode.want this to happen in ut.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can som1 xplain me d yukta part...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice .. but me too confused wid yukta part

first tell me this is like continuation of present uttaran after happy reunion.

or fresh leap in ur style?

i felt u r writing like continuation.

so it makes yukta part confusing ...yuvi directly shock hojata hai , n says i love u?
mukta faint ho jate hai ok, but y she will smile?


basically yuvi should be guilty , mukta should be avoiding him, but circumstances are created in such way that everytym they come face to face in sumway or the other.
yuvi trying his best to make mukta happy but mukta misunderstanding.
he saves her from sum goons or anything wat u have planned , n slowly reveal that yuvi had soft feelings for her but he himself didnot realise it, n now he feels it is too late.to confess which making him feel miserable.
but destiny always get them together., mukta can sense yuvi has changed , she is affected by his pain.
iccha sensing this things.. etc

than show further story the way u have planned.

or show the story u have planned only but make it clear , so there is no confusion. this yukta secnes was like vishnu proposing meethi scene. this yukta scenes was confusing , could not understand wat yuvi n mukta felt.other wise rest was awesome. sorry me yukta fan na , so expect perfect story for them.



another suggestion add link of previous chapters.
so those peoples who missed it can read it from begining .
Edited by princessofkesar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi ..!!!!! princessofkesar thanks for ur reply .. actually my friend was supposed to give yuvi mukta track .. but suddenly her net connection was lost she couldnt reply me ... coming to yuvi's track .. this story is complete new begin where all chjaracters will be united .. and at last minute i dint got idea .. so i thought lets make it complex and suspense .. yuvi got tensed .. my intention was to know though everything happened at past and he thinks she may love him .. as every uttaran fans yuvi want to love mukku .. aso simply wrote something at last minute .. i hope rest of part was clear yar !! in coming parts .. there will be finally big turn in yukta's story ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow subervb story line... diz story would come true...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi ..!!!!! princessofkesar thanks for ur reply .. actually my friend was supposed to give yuvi mukta track .. but suddenly her net connection was lost she couldnt reply me ... coming to yuvi's track .. this story is complete new begin where all chjaracters will be united .. and at last minute i dint got idea .. so i thought lets make it complex and suspense .. yuvi got tensed .. my intention was to know though everything happened at past and he thinks she may love him .. as every uttaran fans yuvi want to love mukku .. aso simply wrote something at last minute .. i hope rest of part was clear yar !! in coming parts .. there will be finally big turn in yukta's story ..


oh really... atleast before da uttaran ending atleat uttaran would be finally yuvi, yuktha track... if diz happen trp will incresae day by day... but now boring... trap has gone down...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks dear for clarification
i was confused for yukta part as i thought it was continuation of present story. And as yukta part ended abruptly.
Waiting for u r next update.

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