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LOVE LIFE






PART 6



Its been a week geet had came to daarjeeling
and the next day itself she had went to her school and college to submit the application form since it was holidays 
.so geet had nothing to do except sitting at home cribbing about that thief 
.

Geet was sitting on bed 
when mamta came with her lunch since it was snowing outside she had instructed geet to remain in her room as she catches cold very quickly
..

Geet was sitting hiding in blanket she was totally packed with a warm cap
. Pink sweater..looking like a pink bunny
..

Geet : maami..kitni thandi hai..her teeth were chattering
. Geet was like this since she was so small..she used to hide herself in the quilt and still feels cold
.

Mamta: isliye to kaha tha ki room se bahar nahi jaana
 she look around and found that the heater was not on
..

Mamta chided seeing geet's nature


Mamta: geet heater on kyon nahi kiya hai..dekh tabhi thand se kaap rahi hai
.

Geet made a baby face and mumbled sorry and 
immediately riaed her arms calling her maami
. To join her
.

Geet: maami jaldi aajao
dekho kitni thand hai
. Baaki ka kaam baad me kar lenge
.

Mamta smiled seeing the still child in her daughter
.. geet is always like this


Mamta: khana nahi khana bhook nahi lagi hai
.

Geet: lagi hai na
. aap batho me le kar aati hun
.

Mamta: nahi batho yahi par..apna chehra dekho kitna laal ho gaya hai thand se
..

Geet smiled


Geet: jaldi aana
.

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Here In delhi


Maan went to orphanage with mansi and abhinav..well who will say that the great business tycoon could be so down to earth
. Maan was engrossed in the admission of the tiny tots of the orphanage in the school
. And was playing with jay and shreya all the way
.

Mansi and abhinav were his friends they too were from the same orphanage but the love and affection maan gets and he showers on the small kids here is something they can't even compete
..

He had himself set up a trust for the children who wants help for higher education
mainly girls
.coz the guys will be doing on their own..the trust pays for their education and fees 
and when they starts too earn they can pay back
..

Since it was only for the orphanage children
 maan had not revealed who is the main authority behind all the procedures since he didn't wanted any acknowledge for his work..

Mansi saw maan playing with the two tiny three year old
.. who were ready to go to school


Mansi poked to abhinav who first made a cranky face
. And then looked at mansi who was very loving staring at the beautiful scene ..maan was running and the two tiny babies were chasing him
 the baby girl was chubby she suddenly fell down so maan immediately held her up and asked her if she was alright
.

The baby girl nodded in a yes 


Maan: kahan lagi baby ko
she showed her elbow
.

Maan blowed there
and the baby kissed his cheek


Here abhinav looked at mansi lost in seeing her best friend with two babies
.

Abinav: mansi kya dekh rahi ho


Mansi: see abhinav


Abhinav: kya dekhun ..kahan
 he looked around
.yahan to kuch bhi nahi hai
.

Mansi wacked at his arm


Abhinav: oucchh
mansi control..itna kyun marti ho yaar
..

Mansi: maan ko dekho


Abhinav looked at maan ..he was also mesmerized with maan
maan was actually looking like a baby himself playing like lost the count of time with his age
..

Abhinav: ye maan..look at him..kon kahega ki ye itna bada business empire handle kar raha hai that too with too much perfection
..

Mansi: me kahungi na
. aur waise bhi socho..the girl will be very lucky to have our handsome and sweet maan as her life partner 
hai na


Abhinav: wo toh hai
.

Maan saw his friends looking at him and talking like something is very urgent
.so he came with the babies near him
mansi looked at him carrying the girl in his arms..she asked him to give the girl to her 
.maan forwarded his hands
. But the baby girl refused
.

Maan and abinav chucked seeing the baby refusing mansi
..

Abinav: see mansi 
 even children are scared of me
kyun maan ..see you can't say that only me or maan gets scared of our quarrel queen


Mansi frowed and showed him her big big eyes
.

Abhinav: nahi nahi I am not cared..and you are only queen wo bhi sirf meri
mere dil ki raani


The two can never stop
maan thought
..

Maan got a call and excused himself
.

It was from the client
MISS akanksha was wanting to meet him
. But maan refused saying he can't so he talked to him on the phone and asked if they could change the place of housing project from noida to darjeeling
..

Maan thought for a second and asked her to wait for sometime he will give his final review after discussing with his team



Maan gave his final consent in the morning and it was decided that he will accompany her to daarjeeling
. Since she wanted him to be present with the details of the project in short she wanted him to handle the project
..

Since maan can never refuse to anyone so he accepted 
.. next day he had to leave to daajeeling
.

Maan , mansi and abhinav were at the dining table..mansi was serving both
.however maan told her many times not to bother they can do it themselves..but her reply was
." Maan don't you say anything what I do for my family and my brother and this monkey

"

And abhinav was like
." You love this monkey mansi
."

Maan after the dinner 
told them about his daarjeeling trip



Maan: mansi abhinav I am going to Darjeeling tomorrow for a meeting
..

Abhinav: when you will return maan


Maan: depends abhi
 the duration of project
..

Mansi: ohh..okk..maan why don't you take that bag with you
.. I hadn't sent it till now
.kal bhejna tha..it will be good if you give it to the owner
bechari ke certificates hain
she must be in a panic
.

Maan: theek hai mansi..give it to me I will give it
.

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely one
maan became child with other children only they give him happiness
maan is going yo darjeeling waiting for maaneet meet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shri12

Lovely one
maan became child with other children only they give him happiness
maan is going yo darjeeling waiting for maaneet meet



thankkksss shri..wait for tomorrows part dear 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one
love maan's care for children
nd waiting maaneet meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
can't wait fr maneet to meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update
geet ko thandi
n my cutiee maanu
lvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww that was so cute with geet and her mami
gosh she gets a cold pretty easily right
and the poor girl is still sad about her certificates naa
and maan playing with those kids so adorable
man he was just so lost in them
wow he would make a really good dad and geet a good mother right
well looks like our maneet could bump into one another in shimla for all we know
hey anything is possible when maneet are there right
cheers for pm in future

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