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Aayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by mishs - 12 years ago

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Tanvi Dandime

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

awesome update😊😊 and thanks for the pm😃

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ishka virani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

yup. tune apun ko bilkul bore ni kiya
paisa vasool
armman Ka sach se samna kab kara ri ho

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Sarvesh Redkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome parts:) just luvd them very much...
It's gud to see the armaan arushi bond... Hope ke yeh AR ke beech sab misunderstanding jaldi khatam ho jaaye...
Sab milke ek happy family ke tara rahe...
Update the next parts soon and pm me those parts:)
continue soon...
Take Care!!!

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Aayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Part 19 n 20

Khelna sikhayege...

Armaan n ridhima look at each other...

Arman(mind)-tum janti thi ridhima ki mein jan ke harta hun..???. Sirf tumhari smile dekhne ke liya... Phir bhi...

Ridhima-acha toh phir toh aap jaldi se theek ho jao phir aap ke buddy aapko basketball sikhein gaye...

Aur ...

Arushi-aur kya mommy.???

Ridhima-mein bhi aap ko sikhungi basketball. Aapni aru ko basketball itni pasand jo hai...

Arushi-par moomy phir aapke dil mein dard hoga na mujhe aacha nahi lagta jab aapko dard hota hai...

Ridhima- nahi beta aag mera dil mein kabhi dard nahi hoga basketball se...(looking at armaan) kabhi nahi hoga aab mera dil mein dard...

(armaan was admiring arushi n her love for her mommy n ridhima n arushi relation but in deep heart he is hurt that he can't have such happiness in life.. As he woud not think about any other girls given her the place in his life which was ya which will always remain for ridhima)..

Ridhima-(mind)armaan mujhe toh laga tha tum aapni purani aadato ke pass vapas chale gaye honge... Vo street fights.. Bike racings... N all aur mujhe se juda har yaad ko mita chuke hongay... Par tumne mujhe aabhi bhi aapni yaado mein khayalo mein zinda rakha hai...

Mujhe laga tha tum baketball nahi khelo gaye kabhi kyun ki hamari mulakat wahin hui.. Pyaar bhi wahin hua... Aur hum bichde bhi wahin se the...

Par tum ne aaj tak mera se judi har yaad ko sambhal ke rakh hai... Kyun armaan kyun chahate ho itna mujhe...(ridhima was thinking all this while staring at armaan. N ridhima come out of her thought when arushi call her shaking her. But ridhima's eyes where moist)

Arushi- mommy aap itna dar se bol kyun nahi rahin... Aur Aap buddy ko aaise kyun dekh rahi ho...

Ridhima-kuch nahi beta bus kuch yaad aa gaya mein aabhi thodi der mein aati hun.

(saying so ridhima leave with speed from there for fire escape)

armaan-(mind)ridhima kab tak tum aapne aapse bhagti raho gi.. Kab tak ridhima kab thak... Kabhi toh tumhe saachi ka samna karna padhega

(2 arushi) basket main aabhi aaya..

Arushi-par buddy aap ko to doctor ne rest karne ko kaha hai toh aap kahan ja rahe ho?

armaan-(mind)ridhima kab tak tum aapne aapse bhagti raho gi.. Kab tak ridhima kab thak... Kabhi toh tumhe saachi ka samna karna padhega

(2 arushi) basket main aabhi aaya..

Arushi-par buddy aap ko to doctor ne rest karne ko kaha hai toh aap kahan ja rahe ho?

Arman- basket mein bus 2 min mein aaya.(saying so he left. He was moving toward fire escape with the support of wall. In fire escape ridhima was sitting 4-5 steps down sobbing n reapeating one n only thing)

ridhima- kyun armaan kyun.???.

(armaan understand that she is upset bcoz of him so he went in)

armaan- ridhima!!! Tum th...

Ridhima(wiping the tears)- armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho tumhe rest ki jarurat hai... Tum aapne room se kaise aa gaye...

Armaan tried to set down in staircase where ridhima was now standing but do to weaknes he was about to fall but ridhima hold him.. N next sec. Both had an eye lock. Their eyes Conving each other their pain n lonliness...

But arman brok the eye lock after like 5 min... Then.

Ridhima-armaan tum theek ho na.?? Dard toh nahi ho rha???

Armaan- nahi... Ridhima mein...

Ridhima-arman bus aab chup raho.. Aur aapne room mein chalo tumhe rest chaiye abhi bhi...

Armaan-Par ridhima meri baat toh...

Ridhima-bus armaan... Tum bahut bol chuke aab tum bilkul chup raho... Shuuu ek dam... Aab chalo...

Ridhima give him support his one hand was on his stomach where there were stiches n other hand ridhima has grab around her shoulder. Ridhima's other hand was around armaan's waist to support him to walk.

She took armaan to the room n then make him lie down comfortably...

Armaan-Par bas... Oh sry i mean ridhima mujhe tum se kuch baat karni thi...

Ridhima- arman bilkul chup... Shhoo ek dum... Aur mera saath chalo tumhe armam ki jarurat hai...

Armaan- ridhima mujhe tumse kuch...(ridhima cut him in between)

ridhima-abhi abhi aabhi tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai...

Armaan-ridhima par mein...

Ridhima- plz abhi chalo tum aur rest karo.(she put one hand of armaan on her shoulder holding it another hand arond his waist to support him to walk n armaan's other hand was on his stiches.).ridhima cont.- Aur waise bhi baat karne ke liya puri jindagi padi hai...(armaan look suprise at ridhimas words n then ridhima realise what she said..)

she quikly change the topic n make their way to the room n made him lie down on the bed peacefully n comfortabaly...

Dr.s said that armaan n arushi will be discharge bu tomorrow but they both have to take proper rest no work for some time...

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Edited by mishs - 12 years ago

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Sarvesh Redkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hey nice part:) it seems the problems between AR will soon be solved... Hope to see them together as 1 whole family:)
continue soon...

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ishka virani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hye yaar
kuch bolne hi ni diya ridzs ne
continue soon yaar
aur thora lamba update

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Wow!!
I read the parts on pages 4 n 5 in one go.
You are such an amazing writer dear.
I'm loving this ff sooo much.
I was so scared when doctor said that Armaan is lying between life and death.I'm glad that Ridz managed to bring him out of coma.
It was so nice to see Ridz taking care of Armaan and Arushi so nicely.
Just before the operation,the whole conversation between Armaan and Arushi was wonderful.I love their bond a lot.
Arushi is sooo cute.She wants to learn basketball so desperately from her buddy.
I loved Arushi so much for telling about the BB match losses of Armaan to bring a smile on Ridz's face.She also told him about her mum's dil ka dard...I loved this scene a lot.
I loved the way Armaan followed Ridz to the fire-escape.
Riddhima's scoldings to Armaan were much needed and cute as well.
She didn't let Armaan speak even a word.
Riddhima is amused to see the intensity of Armaan's love for her.She is adoring him and his love silently.
I wish the problems b/w AR may sort out soon.
This ff is just amazing.I'm glad that Armaan was the donor for Arushi..
Mishs you are a very talented writer dear.
Plz update the next part soon.
Take care!
Asma

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

nice parts.
Thanx 4 d pm.

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Aayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

PART 21

Next day...

Both armaan n arushi were discharged..

But now ridhima is more tensend as im hospital she took care of him but now...

Ridhim-(mind)aab mein kya karun...

N armaan ke ghar ja sakti hun...

N hi armaan ko aapne ghar...

Kya karun mein..

Armaan waise bhi aapna khayal kabhi nahi rakhta hamesha dusro ke baare mein sochta rahta hai..

But nothing can be done ridhima took arushi to home n in way leave armaan to his home... Their apartment were just 2 building away...

Ridhima-(mind)armaan itna laparwaha. Hai pata nahi usne khana khaya bhi hoga ki nahi...

Kahin vo kuch kam na karne beth jaye.

Think about all this ridhima call armaan.

Ridhima-hello!

Armaan- no ans for sec. As he just slipped when trying to get up from bed..

Ridhima-armaan tum theek toh hona... (Axiety) tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe. Tum theek ho na.

Armaan hand again slip n word utter oouucchhh.

Ridhima got tensed n she hang up n just call Her servent..

N order to deliver the food to the armaan's apartment..

N ask her to take care of armaan n his mother for some day she will handle arushi by her own...

N also told her not to told armaan that she had send her to take his care...

Soni did same thing which ridhima told..

Ridhima-(mind)armaan tum khud aapna khayal nahi rakhte na toh na sahi par aab tum hara khayal mein... N she stop..

Armaan's apartment

soni ring the door bell.

Armaan slowly comes n open the door...

Armaan-ji kahiya

soni-ji vo ye khaana aapke liya aur vo aaj se mein aapki dakh-bal karne ke liya aai hun.

Armaan-par mein ne toh kis ko nahi bulaya na hi khana order kiya..

Soni-ji vo... Vo. Mein...

Armann- acha chalo chodo waise bhi bahut bhuk lagi hai...

Soni comes in n serve the food.

Armaan took the first bit n then he remember of some one... Non other then ridhima...

Arman(mind)- mein janta hun ridhima ye sab tumne kiya hai

PART 22

Arman(mind)- mein janta hun ridhima ye sab tumne kiya hai

tumhe aaj bhi meri utni hi fikar hai jitni kal thi...

Phir kyun ridhima...

Kyun bhag rahi ho tum aapne aapse...

Aapni feelings se..

Hum sab se...

(suddenly something stuck in his mind)

aur sid kahan hai...

Kyun vo tumhare saath nahi hai...

Vo toh kabhi itna gair jimadar nahi tha...

Arushi ko kyun nahi pata uske father koun hainn...

N mein donor kaise ho sakta hun vo toh sid...

Ridhima tum kuch bahut badi baat mujhse chupa rahi ho...

Mein pata laga ke rahunga...

Soni- sahab aap khana kyun nahi kha rahe...

Armann- kuch nahi bus kuch yaad aa gaya tha...

Armaan take the dinner n leave the apartment where soni resisted him not to go but armaan is armaan...

He went soni thought of telling this to ridhima but waited for some time.

But when there was no sign of armaan till an hr soni called ridhima...

Soni-hello ridhima di

ridhima- hain Bolo soni tum itni ghabri hui kyun ho... Sab theek toh hai na...

Soni-di vo armaan bhaiya...

Ridhima-kya hua armaan ko

soni-di vo... Vo 1 ghante se ghar se nikle hua hain aabhi tak nahi aaye...

Ridhima- what!!!! Aur tum ye mujhe aab bata rahi ho...

Aagar armaan ko kuch ho gaya na,...(she was stopped in b/w when her door bell ring)

mein tumse do min mein baat karti hun...

She goes to open the door...

Ridhima-tum!!!

Voice- hain vo mein...

Ridhima-tum yahan kyun aaye ho

voice-vo mein arushi ko dekhna aaya tha

ridhima-armaan tumhe khud aaram ki jarurat hai...

Aur tu 1 ghante se kahan the...

Armaan-kya mein andar aa sakta hun...

Ridhima-ohh i m sorry plz plz come in...

Aur tum ek ghante se kahan the..

Armaan- vo mein arushi ke liya ye lena ...,.

Waise tumhe kaise pata mein 1 ghante se...

Ridhima-vo mein ne ghar ka no...

Armaan- oh acha...

Arushi kahan hai...

Armaan n ridhima leads towards arushi...

Armaan goes n sit beside arushi n touch her forhead n fell it very hot.

Armaan-ridhima isse toh bahut tej bukhar hai...

Ridhima-what !!! Mein toh tab se iske pass bethi hun..

Armaan-par dhayan kahin aur hai..(armaan said looking at her.

Ridhima looked him n his words pinched her..)

ridhima went in shock not moving at all.

Armaan went to kitchen n take utensil n cold water in it..

N then open the word rope unlucky it was of ridhima...

He saw their the payal n kangan he gave him n an album of his n ridhima's moment...

Arman was shocked to see that but soon came upto arushi with a cloth to put on cold cloth on arushi's head.

Armaan was doing it here ridhima was in shock n didn't knew armaan was everything in her wardrob...

Armaan-ridhima tu theek toh hona. (while jerking)

Ridhima-came out of shock when armaan jerk her.

Hani!!! Main karti hun armaan tum.. Tum thak gaye honge aur vaise bhi tumhari tabiyat Bhi bahut kharab hai...

Armaan- mein theek hun ridhima.. Tum bus ye paani change karke le aao..

PART 23

Armaan- mein theek hun ridhima.. Tum bus ye paani change karke le aao..

Ridhima-okay mein abhi aati hun... Then ridhima realised that the cloth which armaan was having was kept in her wardrob... N armaan might have seen everything n now he will ask her loads of question...

But to her surprise armaan didn't ask her anything..

Armaan(mind)-ridhima aaj mein tumse kuch nahi puchunga aaj tum waise hi bahut pareshan ho par mera sawalo ka jawab toh mein le kar rahunga...

Now arushi's fever is in control.. Ridhima ask armaan to take rest n proper care of himself...

Armaan bid gud bye to the arushi n ridhima n leave for his apartment he too was having fever but he didn't make ridhima realise his fever n he came homw n take medicine n went to sleep with many questions in his heart n mind...

He decieded to call one of his frnd in mumbai n know what happend 8 years Back in ridhima's life ...

Why sid left her what all is happening in her life n ...

Thinking all this he went into deep slumber...

Secne shift to ridhima's home.

Ridhima's mind was diverted in 2 ways one was tensed for arushi's health n 2nd one what armaan must be thinking on seing all those things in her wardrob..

While she was taking care of arushi but still her mind was with armaan

arushi is okay now so ridhima too went to slumber...

Next day

bright sun, with a little wind n new hope a new day spring up...

Armaan's home

armaan woke up n decided to call his champ to know about ridhima..

Arman dialed the no.

Atul-hello

arman-hello champ

atul-arman mera bhai tu...tu kaise hai...kahan hai...humari yaad nahi aati...i missed u alot bhai...

Arman-bus bus champ itna bus ek baar mein..

Mein theek hun...tum sab ki bahut yaad aati hai champ.. Acha baata tu kaise hai anji kaise hai..Shashank sir N padma aunty sab kaise hain...

Atul-sab ache hain armaan sab tujhe bahut yaad karte hain...

Khas kar anji teri best frnd n padma aunty jinke liya tu unka beta tha...

Armaan- beta tha tabhi itna...

Kair vo sab chod ...

Champ actually i wanna favoure from u...

Atul-bol mera bhai tera liya toh jaan bhi hajir hai...

Armaan- nahi atul jaan toh anji ke liya rakh mujhe bus vo...vo ridhima ke...baare mein... I mean 8 saal pehle ridhima n sid ke bich kya hua...sid ridhima saath kyun nahi...

Atul-got another call...

Arman mein tera se baad mein baat karta hun tu aapna dhayan rakhna...

Armaan- thought atul is ignoring him... But actually he got a call in evening when atul got tym he called armaan while armaan was in hospital in cafe thing of ridhima...

Atul-mera bhai

armaan-hi champ

atul-armaan tu jaana chahata hai na ridhima aur sid kyun saath nahi hai...

Bhai jis din tu sanjeevni chod kar gaya uske 2-3 din baad ridhz ki bahut tabiyat kharab hui...

Hum sab ko laga ki shayad tera jaane ki yajhse vo...

Par jab ridhz ka check up hua toh humein pata chala ridhz maa banne wali hai...

Hum sab sun kar bahut khush hua ridhz bhi par sid nahi hua...

Ridhz-sid ka jhagda hua...

Sid ne baby ke liya maana kiya...

Par ridhz nahi maani usse baby chaiye tha...

Sid ne condition rahi ki vo kisi 1 ko chune baby ya phir sid.. Ridhima ne baby ko chuna n sid bina kuch kahe ridhima ke liya divorce paper chod gaya...

Hum sab ko ajeeb laga ki ek pita aapne hi baache ko kyun...

Par sid ne humein kuch nahi kaha...

Ridhz ne bola sid ko aabhi carrer chaiya baby nahi isliya...

Par humein ajeeb laga par ridhz ne kuch nahi bataya.

Arman- who was listen to all this realize his mistake n tearse were flowing from his eyes...

Atul-armaan tu sun raha hai na...

Armaan- hain champ i m listening.

Champ mein tujh se baad mein baat karta hun...

n he ended the call saying so...

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