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Posted: 12 years ago
wow aditi...this one was an adorable update...the old kriyansh...monster and miss talkative...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm and awesome update :-]]]]]]]]]

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Posted: 12 years ago
sry for this late comment...
update was awsm as usual...
so av tak rey n mr.singhaniya k bich k differences clear nahi hue...
n m also very happy to see old kriya same cute n jhalli...
n there chilled ice romance was really Hot...
loved the update...
so now finally rey n sanjana milne wale hai...
kuch gadbad naa ho jaye...
update soon thanx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all a very Happy New Year Adu 🥳

Its 1:30 in the clock n m leaving a review here, what can i do, this is all your fault...
Inna achcha kyu likhti hai 😃

You started with Rey's dad care n affection towards his son which is adding a new purpose to the story...
But things need time to settle...yeah?

I'm really not liking this Kria, as of i dun have any problem but seems her mother has some objections which is she trying to neutralize

Rey pretending to be his old self, n people are beleiving. Poor Ali! 😆

Hmmm! Ford Mustang... Nice
The only problem is it doesn't have a good re-sale value 😆

OMG! Kriyansh Love is touching skies...
what do u say in hindi... yes... pyaar parvaan chadh raha hai...😆

Aww.. They had such a sparky moment after Rey's prank... loved that Adu

You always send your reader to a new world, where he discovers your sense of beautify-ing things...

The whole moment between KR and their after-effects was given such a soothing feel... that i toh got lost...

You always make it beautiful Adu, with no doubts. 🤗

Awesome work 👍🏼

P.S. Song was adding charm to it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
unresed on page 18 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
rey n kria rishte ki baaat woww..
waiting fr nxt part update sooonn..
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls jaldi update karo..
plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
WAITING FOR UPDATE...

PLZ DO IT SOON...
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Thanks a ton friends for your valuable review and time. I am certainly blessed to have readers like you all. Love ya all.🤗

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Update-34

His room was so messed with cloths all over. Amma entered the room while collecting his cloths. She could see the cupboard empty and all the cloths out of cupboard. She was devastated with room's condition. Rey was standing in front of mirror looking at him. His critical gaze was checking Armani's suit which he was wearing! He just turned around and unbuttoned the court and threw it away. Amma asked "Reyansh! What is this? What you did with this room and your clothes? He sat on couch with pout. Amma sat beside him and asked "what happened? Rey looked at her and told "Amma! There is no single cloth in my wardrobe which I can wear on an important occasion. Amma stroked his head and said "is there some party? Rey looked at her with his confused face and answered "there is a meeting! Very important meeting! I need to impress the other party! Amma wondered "Rey! You never seemed that confuse about your clothes! My cool son is behaving so weird! She giggled! Rey's pout was still the same.

She stood up and scrutinized his cloths and came up with"semi- formal attire". Top was an Armani tux and bottom was Rey's grey jeans! Amma gave it to Rey with a smile and folded her hands. Wear it! My son will look dashing in this! She smiled. Rey ended up blushing! Amma teased him "blush! Both giggled!

Rey was ready for meeting with Sanjana. He had looked in mirror hundreds of time. He was nervous but royal Junior Singhania always ends up impressing others. Smug floated on his face!

He took the bugatti and paced on! In mean while he bought white lilies for the ladies. It was almost evening. He has a meeting in next half an hour in Caf Rubin with Kria's Mom! He parked the car and was heading towards the restaurant! He gazed across the hall but didn't find anyone from Kria or her Mom! He headed towards reception to enquire. The lady told him that there is a booking on that name for Terrace garden! Rey fingers were constantly fixing the crease of his tux. He was in accelerator.

It pinged and he walked out of it. A lady was sitting alone there. He searched for Kria but she wasn't anywhere. He advanced and said "Hello Mrs. Ghai! Sanjana turned around and gave him a smile. She said "Hello Reyansh! Have a seat! Rey was nervous and Kria wasn't there too! He behaved normal and didn't let out any of his nervous vibe to communicate through his any gesture.

Reyansh asked "How are you? His constant smile was telling that it's quite weird situation for him. Sanjana sneered "I am fine". Rey so wanted to ask about Kria but it'd sound so desperate. Sanjana told "Kria is not aware of our meeting otherwise she would never let us meet without her presence. I postponed the meeting from morning to evening because of this reason. Now she is in your workshop and I can talk to you about you and Kria in peace!

Her sarcastic smile was making Rey more feared. With sips of coffee, conversation started on normal ground with introduction and all. Rey was very clear about his racing profession. He didn't present it as an obstacle in their equation. Sanjana was indeed impressed with his honest and straight forward approach! But she was clear in her mind that she is not here to judge his guts. Coffee's last sip came across as sum up from Rey about him and his life.

Sanjana's mysterious smile was still there. She was determined of why she is here!

Rey was quiet and trying to look normal in this silence! Sanjana asked "so what do you know about Kria?" Rey gasped and answered "She is from palampur and here for studying auto-mechanics. She dances too well! She is little different from others. She possesses innocence and strong will at same time. She doesn't get open with anyone so easy and when she starts valuing someone, she put them above all things. She can do impossible for her loved ones. She is not fancy or show-off girl but a very determined person who values her upbringing and beliefs. His face could tell the serenity of their relationship! Talking about her was bliss for Rey! Sanjana's palm was under her chin and eyes were filled with loads of expressions. Indeed, he was telling her about her own daughter! Mother's pride couldn't resist floating in her eyes. Sanjana intervened "you got the facts right! Well done! She dances too well! But you know, she once used to live for dance. Her day never seems ending until she dances to her favorite tunes. Her whole day's synopsis of story used to be her dance. Dance is her expression for the things she never tells anybody! Did you know that? Rey fumbled "ye..ah! Once I saw her dancing alone in workshop where I could see in her eyes that dance is an important part of her life.

Sanjana again intruded "she hasn't touched her dancing shoes from the day I landed in this city! All she does is "chant you and your racing's name". She continued "do you know how much she values her studies? Isn't it unusual that a girl chose auto-mechanics as her stream! Isn't?? Rey was confused and shocked at the same time. He wanted to intrude but Sanajana didn't let him. Sanjana told "she took this subject after fighting for it! I was never in favor of this stream but she made me believe that how much it interests her and how much she can do well in it! Her face filled with a sarcastic smile. And you know what? Now she is giving her exams and that too with only 50% of heart! But yeah! She does remember that your next race is a crucial one or your XYZ car is not working well! Rey could see the disgust on Sanjana's face!

Rey intervened "Mrs. Ghai! I can understand what you are trying to say! But I want to clear something, her shifted focus from the things she loves, is due to my accident and stress of your acceptance for me. I am sure, once things will resolve, she will be back in her elements. I just want to tell you "I can do everything for your daughter. If she is giving my passion priority then I will equally stand by her regarding her passion. Our love won't come in between your aspirations for your daughter. I won't let her consign to oblivion regarding her dance. Sanjana was looking plain and unconvinced. She stood up from chair and walked towards edge of terrace. Rey followed her with pleading eyes. She said "Rey! If I even overlooked that you are a racer who endangers his life everyday still you are costing my kid so much! She is my weakness. I didn't tell her about meeting in this hour of day because she might able to convince me once again with her tears and stupid facts. She might promise me that I will take my dance and studies seriously but it isn't about me! It's about her! It's about what she always wanted to do and now she just drew a blank for her passions. Her eyes were wet but not flowing. Rey could feel the pain of a mother.

Rey said "Mrs. Ghai! If my racing is anyhow a hurdle in your mind for accepting me then I promise I will quit it. I can quit anything for Kria! he sighed! His face was determined. Sanjana answered "Reyansh! I am not here to retrench your dreams from you! She nodded her head! Rey took her palm and said "My only dream and passion is loving your daughter". You won't retrench me from my passion. Would you? Question in his eyes was killing Sanjana!

Sanjana could feel the suffocation. Sanjana said" you too are stubborn! You didn't get my point nor does my daughter get it! All I see best for my daughter is you just stay away from her life. I don't want her to end up "arm candy of your racing status and finally a fancy Singhania daughter in law! She is more than that. She once dreamed for more than this. My daughter has changed her priorities because of your love. So tell me how I can approve such love! Her voice was sulking!

A tear drop flew out of Rey's eye! He could see him failing in convincing her. He argued in his heavy voice "Mrs Ghai! I am promising you she won't end up like this. Her dreams will shape up! Sanjana intruded "what do you think "I didn't give this hypothesis a test?! I gave her full time since your accident happed, to remember her real self! But she is just changed. More you are getting close to her, more she is going far from her dreams. More you are attaching to her, more it would hurt her in future to think rationally! She announced "I think I have made myself clear enough! Her eyes were raging and raining. She walked towards door. Rey was seeing her going away and her Kria too! He shouted her name "Mrs. Ghai! Wait! She stopped on his shout! He ran towards her and said "you just can't walk away without giving me a chance. I promise you "she will live her dreams. I will make her remember her passion and you have to believe me. His voice was breaking. You just can't end our love like this. She is my life and I can never be unfair to my life. She will live every dream she has once dreamed! We can't live our any of passion without each other. It takes heart to live your passion and dreams and if you will part us, we both will be heartless. hearts which might not want to put any of heart in our passions. Please! Mrs. Ghai! You have to believe me. His hands were together and pleading for a chance.

Reyansh who always lived life on his conditions, who never ever took what life has to offer, was today on grant of Sanjana. He was fighting hard to reverse what life is offering him but first time, he was pleading for it!

Sanjana turned around and looked at his flowing eyes. It wasn't a pleasant scenario for her too. His broken status was not her desired outcome. She kept looking at him with loads of mental process. She said "okay!..a long silence stayed. He looked towards her. Eyes were twinkling a little. She continued "make her do in which I failed". Make her realize that "she is more than a lover and assistant engineer". I can't retrench this one chance from you. She smiled in those teary eyes. Rey was out of words. All he could say is "Thanks". She walked out! He was unable to express himself. Should he jump or cry? He was just about to lose her. Should he shout or stay mum? He was just about to fail in convincing her. Sanjana came back and saw him smiling and jumping in joy! She put her fingers on her lips and couldn't stop herself from smiling. She said "Reyansh! I wish this conversation remains between us only! Rey jammed in his dancing position and said "yeah! Sure! Mrs. Ghai! Sanjana said "good night! And left!

Rey had a lot to gather. He had to gather where the fragile link of their relation exists! He was aware now that why Kria's mom has issues with their relationship. Her concern is justified because every mother wants to see her kid living his/her dream. Rey now knew that it isn't "love" which is a problem but "overlapping by love" on her dreams. He knew that what he has to do! He has to make her realize that like she is always there for his passion, similarly Rey is too there for supporting her in her passions. Kria is too naive to even understand that how she is losing her desire for dance, racing does seemed overlapping her mind! Rey's mind was running to figure out failures too but he just threw all them away and became determined about what he needs to do!

Workshop was totally alone tonight. Kria and cars were alone there. She was told that Rey is in some important meeting so she didn't even call.

Rey always had her in mind but it wasn't the right time to meet her. He went direct home. Amma asked him about meeting! He just smiled in response. On dinner table, he was busy in his mind processes. He had a lot to plan. How he could ask her about dance? Was her mother accurate about Kria's forgotten passion? May be Kria is just keeping her dreams on hold and still has them in mind. He had so much to figure out. Mr. Singhania could read depth of his thinking. He was unaware of subject but fine lines on his forehead were enough to tell that he is been thinking something. Rey finished his dinner and went straight to his room. Chair cradle and fireplace were soothing his thinking process. He was thinking "how will I read her mind?" How am gonna judge that she has forgotten her dreams. The whole night was calculator for Rey! He is been calculation the every time she danced and the context.

Morning came with fog outside. It was hell cold and foggy outside. He dialed her number. Her cell was ringing. She was still in bed. She saw his name flashing on cell. She came out of her warm bed and picked it up! Before a "hello", she said "how the meeting went? Ali told me "we are purchasing new car line." And you didn't even call! I was hell worried Rey! Rey smiled and answered "Meeting went good!" Kria! You know you are so good! Kria giggled "is it buttering for not coming to workshop yesterday? Rey answered "no this is buttering because I want to meet you right now! She told "its 5 am and look at the weather outside. Rey answered "Look into your heart! Weather is alright! I am coming to get you!

She said "no! Mom won't let me go anywhere in this hour of morning! Rey answered "we won't let her know!". He hung up the phone.

Rey just took his win cheater and drove to her place. In few minutes, she could hear the horn of his bugatti. She with feather steps opened the door and went outside. He was standing outside his car rubbing his hands together. Kria ran towards him and swayed in his arms. He could feel his Kria absorbing in his amorous embrace. Morning couldn't start better. Both left the place in car. Kria asked "where we are going?" Rey answered "There where water dances". Her eyes filled with excitement.

In few minutes, they were on seashore. Dawn was on edge to break the sky. Water was making the noise and fog was covering the sea view! Winds were wild and Kria was finding blaze in his graze! Weather does bring people close. Kria was surprised why they are here in this hour of morning and that too in such a cold weather. Kria's face was white in this freezing cold winds. Rey covered her in his arms. She found calescent somewhat! She in her shivering voice asked "now what??!! Are we waiting to get sick?? Rey answered "I thought you like dancing waves. She chuckled "I love cozy bed in winter mornings! Rey asked her to tighten her grip onto his body! Rey's bluntness astounded her! She examined his bluntness with "what??" he said "you like temperate mornings na!" Endure my warmth! She lifted her face from his chest and looked at him "you are being naughty Rey!" Rey clasped her waist tight and took her hand near his shoulder. In her ear, he whispered "let's dance!" they started swaying their bags of bones to the chime of waves. Kria chuckled and said "This is no time for dance Rey!" Rey elucidated "there is no time, place and weather limitation for dance Kria Ghai! He pried into her heart "am I right?" Kria slowly said "hmmm! Right! Both kept dancing in those chilly winds for moments! Kria rested her chin on his shoulder bone! Rey was humming a melody in her ear! Rey asked "still feeling cold? She answered "nah! It's cozy and amorous!" He cited "you love dance na!" She rested her arms around his neck and answered "I love everything with you!" Rey ended up finding the depth for dance in her eyes. All he could see is love brimming eyes! She has made him her passion and her aspirations got elapsed by love! He figured out that need of arising sleeping dreams in her! Day is still ahead and today he has all the time to read his Kria! He will cite her in all the possible ways about dance before he reaches some conclusion.

I hope you have liked this part!

Your feedback is anticipated

In next part:

Rey will be conditioning her lost desire for dance!

Consolidation of conclusions will take place.

KriYansh and Dance hand in hand!

Thanks for reading!

Love🤗

Aditi






Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago

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