New virman ff (dhoka,pyaar and guilt)

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shamavinishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi i m fan of this form from last 6 month .

but now i m also write a ff on virman my fav couple

Characters

Manvi=21 years old girl. she is nice,caring, innocent and joyful girl. she loved her family. she love most her sister jeevika.

Jeevika= 25 years old girl. she is also innocent, caring in nature and one main point of jeevika nature is she belive easily in any one. she also loved her family and also her one and only younger sister.

MR.Anand bakshi= Father's of Jeeman.

MRS. Jyoti Bakshi = mother's of Jeeman.

Bakshi family one of richest family in munssorie.

Viren Vadera= 26 old boy. he is handsome and love his brother.

Virat Vadera= 23 old boy. He is hot, handsome and also love his elder brother.

But in my story Vadera brothers belongs middle class.

CHAPTER 1

Scene start from fire house. subah ka samay hain karib 3:30 am manali mein aur ek ghar mein achanak aag lagti hain aur charo aur se aawaz aane lagti hain area ke log aag par kabo kar lete hain par fir bi kuch nahi bajta us ghar mein .

Both brother lived in mumbai . Viren struggling kar raha koi usko assitant rakh le as lawyer assistant thaki vo apni practice kar sake apne law ka usko 2 years hogaye hain law complete kar hue par fir bi abi tak ause koi case nahi mila na hi koi job to vo coaching mein as a teacher ki job kar raha hain.

Virat completed his study in music but usko abi tak koi break nahi mila to vo resturant mein night mein sing karta hain.

Viren and Virat entry.

Both brothers jogging kar rahe hote hain mumbai ke anderi area ke joggers park mein at 7:00 am ki tabi viren ka phone ring hota hain viren phone recived karta hain aur shock ho jata hain . Virat viren se puchta hain ki bhai kya hua par viren koi jawab nahi deta.

Virat: bhai boliye kya hua aap kuch kyu nahi bol rahe.

Viren: hamare pustani ghar mein aag lag gayi hain aur sab khatam hogaya.

Virat: kya, kya bol rahe ho bhai aise kaise ho sakta hain. aisa nahi ho sakta hamare saath.

vo ek aakhri chij thi hamare pass apni family ki.

apne mummy papa ki.

kyu bhai hamare saath hi aisa kyu ho ta hain 7 saal phele papa mummy ka khona road accident mein aur ab ,

Virat cry .

Viren console his brother but nothing work.

precap

Jeeman entry and first meeting with vadera brothers.

ok for today is enough .

agar koi mistake ho to sorry .

HELLO DEAR

NOWS I WRITE SECOND CHAPTER OF MY STORY.

IF THERE IS MISTAKE OF GRAMMER IN MY STORY PLZ FORGIVE ME.

CHAPTER = 2

JEEVIKA AND MANVI WENT TO MANDIR IN MORNING BECAUSE OF MANVI BIRTHDAY.

JEEVIKA AND MANVI SING AARTI.

VIREN AUR VIRAT BHI US MANDIR MEIN AATE HAIN AUR AARTI KI AAWAZ JAHAN SE AARAHI HOTI US TARAF JANE LAGTE HAIN BUT SUDDENLY VO DONO APNE OLD FRIEND SE MILTE HAIN JO UNKA BUDDIES HOTA HAIN KUNAL .

KUNAL AND HIS BROTHER KESHAV BOTH ARE FRIEND OF VV BROTHER AND ALSO BOYFRIEND OF JEEMAN.

CHARO FRIENDS BAHUT DINO KE BATH MILE AUR TALK KARTE PATA NAHI CHALA KI KAB VO MANDIR SE BAHAR AA GAYE AUR MANDIR KI STAIR UTTARNE LAGE TABHI UNHE MAINROAD MEIN EK CHILD PLAY KARTA HUA NAZAR AATA HAIN JO CENTRE OF ROAD MEIN PLAY KAR RAHA HOTA HAIN AUR TABHI UNHE LEFT SIDE SE CAR FULL SPEED MEIN AATI HUI NAZAR AATI HAIN VV BROTHER US TARAF RUN HOTE HAIN BUT CAR KI SPEED ITNI TEZ HOTI HAIN KI CARSH AUR VO DONO SOCHATE HAIN KI CHILD IS DIED.AND BOTH CLOSED THEIR EYES IN FEAR.

BUT JAB VO EYES OPEN KARTE HAIN TO CROWD KO BAGTE HUE DEKTE AUR MANVI MANVI NAAM SUNTE HAIN AUR YE BI DEKTE HAIN KI UNKE DOST BI MANVI CILATE HUE BAGTE HAIN VV BROTHER SHOCK HOTE HAIN KI EK LADKI NE US CHILD KO BACHAYA AUR US LADKI KO USKE DOST AUR VHAIN PAR JITNE BI LOG HOTE HAIN SAB JANTE HAIN.

KUNAL AUR KESHAV KO YAAD AATA HAIN KI UNHONE APNE DOSTO KO APNI GF SE NAHI MILAYA TO VO DONO VVBORTHER KE PASS AATE HAIN AUR UNKO BOLTE HAIN .

YAAR TUMHE YAAD HAIN HUM HAMESHA YE KAHA KARTE KI JAB HUMARI GIRLFRIEND HOGI TO VO BOHUT RICH HOGI AUR VOHI HAMARI WIFE BANEGI.

VIREN AUR VIRAT SHOCK HOTE HAIN YE BAATH SUN KAR VO BOLTE HAIN MATLAB TUM LOG KYA KAHANA CHAHATE HO AUR ABI YE BAATH KYU BOL RAHE . AISA KYA HOGAYA KYA TUMHE VO RICH GIRLES MIL MIL GAYI JO TUMARI WIFE BANEGI. BOTH LUAGH.

KK BROTHER YES SAHI KAHA TUMLOGO NE VO DONO IS AREA KI RICHEST PERSON HAIN AUR DONO SISTER HAIN.

HUM TUMHE ABI UNSE MILATE HAIN.

THEY CALLED JEEVIKA AND MAANVI NAME. AFTER SOME TIME BOTH SISTER CAME INFRONT OF THEM. VV BROTHER YE DEKH KAR SHOCK HOTE HAIN KI MAANVI VOHI LADKI HAIN JISNE ABI US CHILD KI JAAN SAVE KI THI.VV BROTHER JEEEMAN SISTER KE BEAUTY MEIN AUR UNKE INNCENTLY FACE MEIN KHO JAATE HAIN . TAB KK BROTHER YE BI BATATE HAIN KI JO MANDIR VO AARTI HO RAHI THI VO BI YE DONO GA RAHI THI. AUR MAANVI KA BIRTHDAY BI HAIN.

KK BROTHER INTRODUCE FOURSOME ABD VV BROTHER WISH MAANVI.

KK BROTHER INVITE VV BROTHERS FOR PARTY IN EVENING IN JEEMAN PLACE.

FIRSTLY BOTH REFUSED INVITATION. BUT MAANVI KE BAAR BOLNE SE VO DONO HAIN KARTE HAIN.MAANVI BOLTI HAIN KI AGAR AAP INDONO KE DOST HO TO HAMARE BI. TO PLZ AAP AAIYE.

AUR KK BROTHER KEHTE HAIN KI AB CHALNA CHAIYE HUME ABI SHOPPING MEIN BI JANA HAIN. AUR VV BROTHERS KO BYE BOL KAR CHALE JAATE HAIN .

VV BROTHERS KO AACHA NAHI LAGTA KI ITNI INNOCENTLY GIRLS HAIN YE DONO AUR DONO KE SATH YE KK BROTHER CHEAT KAR RAE HAIN. FIR DONO EK DUSRE KO DEKTE HAIN AUR SMAILE PASS KARTE HAIN AUR BOLTE HAIN HUM KYA KAR SAKTE HAIN CHALO AAJ RAAT KO INTAJAM HOGAYA HUME KOI TENSION NAHI HAIN AAJ RAAT KAHANE KI KAL KI KAL CHOTE HAIN.

CHOLO AB GUEST HOUSE CHALTE HAIN EVENING KI PARTY KI BI TO TYAARI KARNI HAIN AUR BAHI HUM GIFT KYA LEKAR JAAYGE HUM TO UNKO AACHE SE JANTE BI NAHI HAIN.

OK BYE FOR NOWS SORRY FOR MISTAKE.

Edited by shamavinishal - 12 years ago