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ILTHBEB

@ILTHBEB

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

After a long time i have read any ff..its very nice at all.

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

I'm removing the story from here, as it was brought to my notice that the story was copied to a different site from here without my permission.

Edited by SobtiFanShree - 10 years ago

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cutelittleangel

@cutelittleangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

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*un(.)*

so finally i grabbed the first place to c0mment...feeling g0od... :)) and n0w u must be wondering that what that (.) means?? :P well its my style of 'res' actually.. :))
okie so i wont talk much 2day... :)) just heading 2wards the main t0pic...
It was gr8...yeah the update was fantastic...
Payal and Akash's date...hmmm...that was really well-written and i was just wondering that what happened to Akash??
god...! he is too cheesy...! :O
i didn't expect it...i mean th0se pick-up lines... lol
i cudn't be m0re surprised...!
And i was just wondering that why khushi felt like akash was a playb0y...hmm...is he?? if yes, then its a big wala twist.
payal's look was gr8.. :))
And khushi is too protective t0wards laxhmi,,,o0pss...i mean bubbly... :))
That part was gr8, even Arnav admired it...!! hmmm
and Aarav is his br0ther...wow... :))
just wish that everything went g0od for them both... :))
and i think Arnav is finding ways to meet khushi..ahem ahem...!
All in all that was an amazing update...! :))
s0rry di, i am really tired right n0w...or else my c0mment would have been a l0t better...just feelinh l0w...!
and h0pe you update s0on... :))
waiting 4 ur update and h0ping 2 see m0re Arshi r0mance... 😳
xoxo

Yours...

Edited by cutelittleangel - 12 years ago

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Shree big bear hugs and a very happy 2013 my swthrt !!!!

i hope u always stay happy and once again...am sorru for the hurt u got in ICG !!!

i love u and will always love u !!!

coming to the update...i loved it baby !!!

payash date ws really cute and khushi and bubbly were tooo cutee and awww so adorable !!!!

loved it !!!!

waiting for ur surprise update now !!!!

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Amanda Lim

@Amanda.Lim

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Awesome part...

Exciting precap..

Continue soon..

Thanks for the PM. :D

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Unres

wow akash ...with cheesy...buttery pick up linesss...

Payal flatly fallen for aki...

Arnie impressed by kushi's decision...nt bad...

Precap,... 😲 surprise... Oh no,...

HAPPY NEW YEAR NANDA...

Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago