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Posted: 12 years ago
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Everything becomes normal in Vadhera Household, even the levels of Swamini Buas Kajal -

Viren - Ms vadhera ms vadera, suno to zara..

He shouts as she escapes his clutch in Kitchen and runs to their room

Jeevika - mujhe kuch nahi suna, aap ko pata nahi kya hogaya, kab kaha kuch bhi!!??? Koi dekhleta to?

Viren - aaai haai, meri fm ji, yehi to me chaahta hoon

(He slowly puts his arms around her waist and head into the direction of a wall, really slowly)

Viren - kyun, ab toh koi nahi hai, sirf main, aur tum.. toh ab kyun nazra jhuki hain?

(she smiles, just a little one in the corner, to try and hide her happiness)

Viren - accha, kuch bologi nahi (still moving back with her) toh main hi kehta hain.. Main tumhe bohot pyaar karda :)

(She immediately looks up with her big beautiful eyes, still not saying anything)

Viren - heraani kyun!? Aisa toh nahi hai ke me pehli baar keh rahu hu

(finally, he slowly leans her against the wall, and gently moves the hair off the side of her face)

Jeevika - aaj ki baat mein kuch aur hain viren-ji, uski mithaas mein hamesha yaad rakhungi

(He smiles, moving himself just a bit closer)

Viren - toh phir zahirsi baat hein, ke aap mujhe bhi kuch yaad rakne vali cheez de (he smiles and raises his eyebrows)

(Her eyes immediately lower, and her smile widens)

Viren - Ek baar kehdo na

Jeevika - Kya

Viren - ke tumhe bhi mujhse pyaar hain

Jeevika (with a cheeky smile) - sabardasti hein kya, nahi hain phir bhi me kyun kahu

Viren - achhhaaa! Va va FMji, aapka tuning zara badla badla hua hain nah, paka yakeen hain ke pyaar nahi hain?

Jeevika - (laughs) Ji Viren Ji!

(He moves closer, and their music plays in background)

Viren - abhi?

Jeevika - tilts her head to side - Nahi

Viren (moves closer to her cheek) - aur abhi

Jeevika - (after a small pause, with a soft voice) thoda thoda

Viren (further into her cheek) bad raha hain

Jeevika - (tilts her face to face his, noses touching.. eyes still closed) Hmmm (nodding her head)

Viren - Haiii



And the usual parda girta hain :-P

My first writing, criticisms most welcome :)!:)!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful do continue and pm me babe..
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg not fair yaar! i wanted 2 read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovly written do continue yar looking 4ward 4 more romance n plz next time no parda hahahaha
Divyaaaaa thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Thanks Guys :)

Will definately start brainstorming and post soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful updatee!!!! reallyy awesome n amazing updatee!!! do continuee soon n pls PM me..thnkuu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dats beautiful.
plzzz update sooon
nd dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUED..

Manvi - Diii

Virikas closeness slowly breaks up

Viren - bas, issi ki kami thi

Jeevika - smiles - Mere hazaaron mein ek pati .. as she slowly moves him away - ab meri behna aah rahi yeh.. Bye :)

He watches her walk away, whilst leaning on the wall, one leg against it, and arms folded..

Viren - palte gi? Kya farak penda hain, kuddi meri hi hain ;)






Very short update guys, hopefully this will reel you in for some special update soon :-P! Promise I'll go on soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet update.
But very short next time a long 1.
Love whn viren said kudi toh meri hai.
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet & short update continue soon with a longer one

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