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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a lovely and sweet update, I really liked Virat caring.
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Posted: 12 years ago
1st of all...
srry 4 commenting l8...
due 2 exams...
it was brillaint as obvious...
getting interesting day by day!!!
thanxx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
1st of all...
srry for commenting l8...
due to exams...!!!
it was marvelous as b4...
its very interesting...!!
doo continue...
w8ing 4 next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...purely shows virat n manvi's thoughts...virat trying to adjust in his new life as well as with manvi...luvd his small gesture towards manvi by giving her privacy...cntn ASAP swty...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Was damn beautiful loved how he explained everything to
Manvi was damn cute Lol loved theory little
Kitchen scene and loved how he said he missed tarun Lol
That was sweet awesome update update continue soon
And do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Anu awesome update.. I loved it to the core.. Virat is such a sweetheart.. I loved the way he pacified Manvi .."Because the person standing in front of me is so beautiful. I can't let that change in anyway" - superb lines ❤️.. I guess Manvi is falling for him.. cant blame her.. Virat is just so so caring.. Loved their cute little arguments.. The kitchen moment was really cute.. They are already behaving like a married couple.. They understand each other so well.. I loved the last part very much.. He does pay a lot of attention to her words.. It was really very sweet of him.. Im really excited to read the next part.. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. and dont forget to wish your brother happy birthday on my behalf 😛.. Take care 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice...plzzz continue SP fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago

***Part 6-(i)***

Next evening, Virat comes to Manvi's college to pick her up. "Kya huva madam, itna jaldi katam hogaya tumahara charity function."

"The whole thing is such a joke Virat, the collection was completed in thirty minutes, people are just partying like crazy in there. I got super bored."

"Why? what do you have against partying?? It's fun especially when you look like that" he said pointing his hand at her.

"Look like what?" she asked flipping her hair.

"hawt" he replied with his eyes popped out. But, he immediately checked himself and added 'dedfutiya'. "What the hell is wrong with me?" he thought.

Manvi had worn a nice black dress and was looking extremely sexy.

"I am sure a lot of guys must have hit on you." He said, half asking and half stating.

"Not really, maybe I am intimidating to most guys and it may also partly have to do with the fact that I am married to an ex-college bully"

"Huh? me no bully babe. Kids in there revere me like god."

"ya-ya-ya..anyways..are you done with work? I really want to get back home, my bed is calling me with open arms. She said closing her eyes and yawning.

Virat parked his bike in style and said "I am not done yet. I am going in. So are you." He pulled her inside with him."

"What has gotten into you Virat?" Manvi asked him puzzled.

"Me wants to party" he said walking in a no-nonsense style and gulping a couple of shots. He gave Manvi one.

"I don't want to." She said looking at him in surprise.

"Ohh common, be a sport. All work and no play makes Manvi a dull girl." He said making her guzzle it down.

"Thats more like it, Let's go party tonight" he screamed at the top of his voice.

Everyone hooted back. People really did worship Virat, and why wouldn't they? he had a reputation. He had consistently stood at the top of his batch all four years. He was an excellent sportsman and had won numerous tournaments and competitions for the college. They were excited to shake a leg with the prodigy.

After a couple of hours, looking at Virat, Manvi realized she was back to square one, without a ride home this time. "Virat, bahut hogaya, let's go home." She pulled him.

"But, the night is so young. Let get in the groove darling." He said leading her to the dance floor.

Suddenly Manvi found herself dancing with Virat, swaying, so close. His arms were around her waist. He seemed very relaxed and loosened up. The time like stopped still. Forgetting where she was, she looked into his eyes. Maybe he was just drunk or maybe they were deep wells of unstirred desires, but she was being sucked into them, like a feather into a vortex. She moved her arms from his shoulders to around his neck, drawing herself closer to him; he was almost magnetic.

Her large sparkly eyes were telling him something. They looked at him with a passion he had never seen before. He kept staring back into them, trying to uncover what lay underneath. As she put her arms around his neck and came closer to him, he felt an unrecognizable excitement within. He quickly turned away, to walk away from her, while he still could. But he felt her hand, holding his, calling him back. He turned back facing her, trying to process this new surge of emotions inside him. He stepped away backwards a little more, but this time only to pounce onto her, her lips. He kissed her passionately and uninhibitedly, with a sense of urgency and excitement. They both did.

This was a new territory for both of them. They were unmistakably attracted to each other, even though they didnt know what it meant for each of them, they couldn't pull themselves away from that moment.

>>> part 6-ii

...this part not yet complete. There is 6-(ii) I didnt get enough time to complete it, but I wanted to upload whatever I had. Again, I havent yet gotten to the comments and ff yet and I doubt I will be able to in the next two days. Will post whatever I manage to write though. Thanks for the birthday wishes for my baby bro. We had a nice celebration, he is a cutie pie. He will stay so until a few more years, then he will turn into a monster like my other brother who is an incarnation of evil. Hope everyone is enjoying the holidays. I will update this soon.😊

Edited by bluebolt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome...it was unexpected...hope they remember everything after their hangover...looking forward to next update😊😛😉
Edited by avika26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was so awesome yr ,
really loved it a lot .
thanks for the pm dear

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