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This is the first time im reading a story of urs!😳
Oh my! u write SO well! This is the type of writing i love to read, really!
She closed her eyes tightly as she remembered reading it awhile ago. She felt a new feeling in her. It was neither sad nor anger. She couldn't describe what it is. Her heart felt heavy, her eyes was moist. Tears started flowing from her eyes.
She woke up and sat straight. She brought her hand near to her face and touched her cheek. Wet. It was wet.
"Why am I crying?" she asked herself as she wiped the running tears away from her cheek. But it kept flowing across her cheek. Now she knew what that feeling was. Hurt. She was hurt. By the person's words, she was hurt by that person's words.
She got off her bed, walked till her window and stood by there. The window was open and the cool breeze caressed her face gently. Her hair which was let loose was dancing to the rhythm of the air. She embraced herself as she felt the cool wind touch her, which gave her a tingling feeling.
^^ This part is written so well👏
It was Esha and Gaurav bhaiya's and many other people's comments. They were not bashing her,but they were bashing the basher.
"I can't believe it..." she said under her breath. She read every other people's comment and felt happy. Not because they had bashed that person, it was because they were supporting her.
That was when she knew, it isn't necessary to shed tears over trivial matter like this. There was only one person who hated her stories but there were many lovely souls out there who, not like, but loved reading it.
She silently thanked everyone and confidently replied the basher. That was the first and last time she had ever seen someone bashed her.
^^ aww...this part is really sweet!
Did all this really happen to u?😲 I can actually feel wht u wud have felt. According to me, ur one of the best writers on IF! Im expecting many stories from u now😳 Plz PM me whenever ur gonna write a story😉 The OS is really touching...Tu meri writing kaise padh pati hai?😲 tera sar phat nhi jata meri writing padh ke😲😆 i write so bad :P isliye chote upds deti hoon not to trouble ppl who r reading my ss😆
Ur an amazing writer neha, hugs and a standing applause to u. 👏 Itna hie padh ke mai teri fan ho gyi hoon😳
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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