We Found Love (VIRIKA FF) - chapter 25 on pg.134 - Page 20

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its not long!its too short for this story
continue wid a longer one :P
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I have no words to explain how much i love your stories and updates. it has so much creativity in it and i cant stop reading them. Excellent update your stories are always amazing. You update your stories daily. I just keep reading your stories again and again. Keep up the good work. Keep writing stories about virika and plz put a lot of scenes on them. I know this is. a long message but I don't comment on stories as I am a silent reader but I felt you deserve a comment from me since you have such an amazing talent. Again keep up the good work. The thing that I love about you besides your stories is that on a middle of a story is that you dont discontinue your story and you dont take forever to update the parts. There are some stories that I love but are discontinued. Everyday I always look forward to your stories. Once again sorry for the long message and I'm being too formal. 👏
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I really hope we get to the 30th page soon I am dying for the next update

I AM WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
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Was damn awesome loving veera and jeevikas
Connection continue soon and do pm me
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Originally posted by: Silentreader324

I have no words to explain how much i love your stories and updates. it has so much creativity in it and i cant stop reading them. Excellent update your stories are always amazing. You update your stories daily. I just keep reading your stories again and again. Keep up the good work. Keep writing stories about virika and plz put a lot of scenes on them. I know this is. a long message but I don't comment on stories as I am a silent reader but I felt you deserve a comment from me since you have such an amazing talent. Again keep up the good work. The thing that I love about you besides your stories is that on a middle of a story is that you dont discontinue your story and you dont take forever to update the parts. There are some stories that I love but are discontinued. Everyday I always look forward to your stories. Once again sorry for the long message and I'm being too formal. 👏


thank you soo much for your amazing comments 😛 it really made my day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i was going to update tomorrow cause first i haven't reached the 30th page and I'm out of town but i'll do it just for you 😊
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okay so im out of town and i haven't reached the 30th page, but I'm updating just for silentreader324 😊 please all of you who just like the update, drop in a comment. It would really mean a lot. And i'll try to put more virika scenes from next update onwards.

chapter 8

viren - "Jeevika why do you still have that picture up? I thought you were done with me?"

Jeevika had no words.

jeevika - "Let me go check on Veera"

Before Jeevika could enter her room, Viren caught Jeevika's wrist. He brought her closer to him, so close that they could hear each others heartbeat.

jeevika - "Viren leave me"

viren - "Answer me Jeevika, why do you still have that"

jeevika still had nothing to say.

viren - "Answer me god dammit. Why would you keep a picture of me in here?"

jeevika - "Because I love you Viren!!! I loved you the most in this world. You were the prince charming to my Cinderella story. I thought I had found my partner, my soulmate but I was wrong. I was wrong to even think that you were the one for me. I mean how could you do that to me Viren?"

viren - "What do you think that I was going to propose to Maya?"

jeevika - "Obviously. Why else were you carrying her to your bedroom?. Why else were her clothes in your bedroom? Why did I find her lipstick marks on your tshirt in the bathroom?"

viren - "For goodness sake Jeevika, she wanted me to stop running after you. That's why she created this whole mess and you fell for her trap. How can you not see the love I have for you in my eyes?"

jeevika - "What love Viren. Where was your love for me when I saw you picking up that s**t and taking her to your bedroom? What was that supposed to mean huh?"

Veera woke up to huge fight they both were having. She started coughing real loudly and Jeevika ran inside wiping her tears before Veera would see her crying.

jeevika - "Hows your head Veera?"

veera - "It's okay. Are you both alright?"

viren - "We're fine. I think we should go home now. I'll call Virat"

jeevika - "I'll drop you home Veera, lets go"

Jeevika refused to make eye contact with Viren. She helped Veera up and the three of them walked to the car. Jeevika started driving and reached Viren's home quickly. She went inside with Veera to make sure she would be okay even though Viren was there.

jeevika - "Veera just make sure nothing solid to eat after 8 pm okay? And make sure you eat a big meal so you don't get hungry. And this is the medicine you have to take tonight okay? Don't take the other one just for one day"

Veera didn't say anything and she just hugged onto Jeevika. Jeevika hugged her back and told her everything will be okay. She left then without saying anything to Veera. She sat in the car and couldn't drive. That night just kept popping back into her mind. She was crying and crying and really wished Viren hadn't done what he did. Viren somehow had a feeling she was still out there so he went outside to see Jeevika crying in her car. Before he could go talk to her, she started the car and drove away.

veera - "Bhai did you tell her the truth?"

viren - "Veera don't worry about it okay. I'll handle that. Please just focus on yourself right now"

veera - "How can I focus on anything but you. I mean after I leave there should be someone taking care of you. And according to me, she is the only one who can handle a freak like you no offense"

viren - "Veera, i swear one more time you say something like that i won't talk to you"

veera - "Okay okay, i'll help her take care of a freak like you too. Imagine when you guys have kids. Like omg I would take care of them all the time. And i'd tell them stories on how much their dad would irritate their mom"

viren - "Veera you're thinking way ahead. She doesn't even want to sort our differences out right now"

veera - "well obviously, you don't understand a girls heart and what she goes through"

viren - "Oh really, you care to explain to me?"

veera - "no, you gotta figure this one out on your own. It will help you in the future too :) "

viren - "Someones becoming over intelligent"

veera - "Obviously i'm Viren Vadhera's younger sister. Thank god I'm more like you and less like Virat bhaiya. Imagine what would that be like?"

virat - "I heard that Ms. Veera Vadhera" Virat said walking inside.

veera - "Good! now make me something to eat"

virat - "No, now go tell your favorite brother too"

veera - "No he's busy right now. He has to think of ways of making it up to my bhabhi. Virat bhaiya please make me some food, please"

virat - "Fine!"

Virat and Veera were in the kitchen as Viren just sat there on the sofa thinking to himself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres
Me first🥳
Story pata chal gayi
😲 Maya 😲 Kam***,
Maya ki toh😡
Bi***. Because of her Virika dur huye 😭😭
Btw the the update was amazing
Viren confronted Jeevika.
Veera is so cute
veera - "Okay okay, i'll help her take care of a freak like you too. Imagine when you guys have kids. Like omg I would take care of them all the time. And i'd tell them stories on how much their dad would irritate their mom". Loved this line
Ur an amazing writer. HATS OFF
Continue soon
Thanks for th pm
Excited for the next part.

Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..! Finally viren confronted..well they couldnt spk much as veera was up before she got her answers...thnks fr the pm n enjoy ur vacation:)!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm and for updating. Happy that u partly reveal what happened. Love how u describe the situation. Continue soon:) eager to read more

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