FF: Exotic pg90 (The End) - Page 28

Originally posted by: Licyabhingya

gross... poor madhu... bt i know our hero rk is gonna set things right now ...

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

heyyy JAS...the Shrink is back...i am playing catch up with ur work...believe it or not...the holidays are busier than exams...but here i am :D

I missed you Shrink. Gone MIA?

Okayyy...so Madhu's dad is a mentally ill...psycho type serial killer ...i got chills when i read the scene where she watched her lover die like that...like what the fish is wrong with her so called father ?

I am relieved. Considering the context, you are tough one to impress. I am an amateur when it comes to psych. My knowledge base on abnormal psych is gathered from TV shows and documentaries.

And now i am wondering how RK will react...i really hope he will believe her..i mean he loves her..and he said it ( i am so excited when i read that part)...and he should have some faith despite Madhu's past reluctance to share the truth because i am sure she never disclosed the truth in fear..

Yeah that is the next thing on my mind. RK, I really do not want to ruin his character. We will see. About the confession, I think slips of tongue are the most sincere things one can say. Unfortunately, I have one of those more often than needed

Really looking forward to the next part

On to the next PM to urs

The Shrink 😉

Hey, I want a cool nick name too. Girl is desperate here.

Originally posted by: iiDona

I missed you Shrink. Gone MIA?

I missed you Jas and ur writing😳..been so busy with fam and friends, i had no chance to come on IF...and today, i decided to sit down since it was one of the rare days i got to stay home and do nothing 😃

I am relieved. Considering the context, you are tough one to impress. I am an amateur when it comes to psych. My knowledge base on abnormal psych is gathered from TV shows and documentaries.

Don't worry babe...u did well..and u have been with this story..it's on the slightly twisted, dark side and those ones are the tougher nuts to crack

Yeah that is the next thing on my mind. RK, I really do not want to ruin his character. We will see. About the confession, I think slips of tongue are the most sincere things one can say. Unfortunately, I have one of those more often than needed

Do what u feel is best as the writer because u know the story and the character the best...and i agree...slips of tongue usually are nothing but the truth..i have had a few of them myself 😆..not of love confessions though😆

Hey, I want a cool nick name too. Girl is desperate here.

I saw ur comments on the other stories...and i swear i am thinking but really want one that would be apt for u...so i am little lost

I will try and get creepier music for a creepier update. *HINT HINT NUDGE NUDGE* See, I do pay attention to all FFs😊

"Brace yourself", Madhu took a deep breath in. "Not easy. I hide from you, the world and even me, my father. Boris Gabriel Azarov, other name for evil. I witness devil in action. My mind shield his memory with lesser pain, adventure tale I brag to the world. As little girl my friends ask who my daddy , I make up stories like the ones I told you. Overlook reality that I was born of a serial killer", she narrated her past to her husband without losing eye contact. "I know I the boy who cried wolf but, trust me. I no lying. He killed my mother, my brother and my Sasha. He everybody I love. Now, he coming for you".

RK kissed her hand. "Did the police not catch him?"

"Nobody report every one scared. He kill them. He friend with policeman. He coming to get me", she had started showing her symptoms again.

"How do I know its not one of you lies?" RK questioned his own question. He should have censored his words. He could have ignited a forest fire in his wife's psyche.

"Because I no tell lie", she kissed him repeatedly. "What I tell you my alternate true. What I want to be true so bad. They no lie, they the better truth. If I say he kill me mother, me brother, me Sasha when I sit and watch, how can I live? How can I live doing nothing when he cut them? How can I live when they dead? I murderer. I criminal. I evil". With these words, she backed away as if she had tainted an idol of worship, as if not worthy of his love.

"Believe in me", she whispered from afar.

"I am an idiot, aren't I? I should have learned from my mistakes but, I choose to repeat them every time. I am sorry. I though my life was a tragedy. I was the classic Shakespearian hero with a fatal flaw. I was headed down the path of self destruction. Little did I know, a fairy with wounds deeper than mine would pave my way for happiness. Let us put our past behind us. Let us get married and start a family". He held his hand out firmly.

She slipped her fingers into his palm with some hesitation.

"This time, history won't repeat. Our babies will not see cruelty. I don't want to see you suffer narrating the details. I am comfortable knowing what I know. You will not mention Boris again ,okay?"

Madhu nodded in a yes and they head outside.

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RK rented a jewellery store for a private shopping trip with his wife. Security guarded the happy couple from the mall crowd gathered around.

"RK what we buy here?"

"A ring ofcourse and the whole shazzam, for you and the wedding party".

"No propose?" Madhu was slightly irked at the lack of a formal question.

"If you want it so bad", RK knelt down on knee. "Madhubala Rishabh Kundra, will you marry me, again?"

He emphasized the word again as if he was being forced into proposing.

"You making fun of me?" Madhu stroked his hair as he was still waiting with his arm extended.

"Princess. Me baby", a tall Caucasian man waved from the back of the crowd.

Madhu dropped the ring she was about to put on and stood behind RK.

RK held Madhu in his embrace while security detained the man in question.

"Are you Boris?"

"How about me princess' daddy?" He smiled showing his tobacco rotten teeth, or whatever was left of them.

"She may have been your princess and you had your chance. I married your daughter. She is my queen now. I am going to take care of her regardless of your presence", RK lifted Boris by the collar. "Really, I would appreciate you not being present".

Madhu cried a tear of pride. Then, went back to panic mode.

"I will be back", the old man spit the blood from his gums on the floor.

RK escorted Madhu home.

"I have my lawyers working hard. He will be out of here and rotting in a Russian prison in no time. Don't you worry", Rishabh assured his terrified Madhu.

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Two days went by without Boris' arrest. The slightest of noise was enough to shake Madhu's core. She refused to let RK out of her sight.

"This is not going to work Biwi. I have to earn money to feed the both of us. We have a designer wedding to plan".

Madhu passed him his credit cards.

"Credit bills don't pay themselves, Russian bride. I wish I had liquid assists but, I don't. All my wealth is in the market and I need to step foot outside the house to get it back".

"I make bread with flour", she presented her case in favour of RK staying home.

"You are just being unreasonable. I have similar security here and at work. I even hired a battalion of hatte katte jawans to hitch a ride on my limo. MY LIMO, where none has stepped foot beside you and I. This is all the precaution I can take Ms. Pareshan. I am going. End of discussion".

He dismissed any further pleas from his wife with a "bbb zip" and head out.