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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG. . . . .
U updated. . . . .
I only 2day i got to knw tat you have update part 2 and tat too long back. . . .
Dammm. . . . . . .
Bt,m happy i read it,before its too late. . .
Ok,cuming to the update,
the update was awsome. . . . .
The way u describd evrythng,
the audition,
sharon's entry,
kriya part,
sumit and vinod's planing,
kriya seductive nature,
sharon's confidence
and
last but not the least
sharon dance was realy realy realy awsome. . . .
Specialy The way u describd sharon's attitude was superb. . . . . . .
And the way u describ sharon's dance,i was just like,. . . .awee. . . .
I wish i cud have seen it. . . . . . .
And kriya's small part was realy awsome. . . .
Full of girls part. . . . .
Loved it. . . . . .
I didn't get the pm. . .
U told u will snd me pm. . . . . . . . . . .
Its ok 4 dis time,
bt,next time i want a pm. . . . . . .
Update nxt part soon. . . . .
And dnt 4get to pm me. . . . . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bhai aap bilkul average writter ho


I am just joking. 😉
Coming to the update. Loved the attitude of our two divas. Ready to pounce on any one at anytime. Sharon ka to scene hi kuch alag hai. Ek taraf she want to be independent aur ek taraf har baat pe apne dad ki dhamki dete rehti hai. Aur kriya is no less. Poor crew member. Usko to dara hi diya tha. She have got a great talent of tricking people in her ideologies. Eagerly waiting to see these divas fighting. That too for dance. Hope to see a nice track in the story
Coming to sharon's dance you descibed it beautifully. Her each and every detail was potrayed in a nice way and i loved it
Edited by LoveShantannu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

phhhew resres
hmm i know i told sum1 that i wont read that sum1's updates but reading your reply to my last cmnt here once again...ummm i thought chalo i'l read this... hmm such a long one...so long time IF vacation ki bhadaas 😆so now u wait 4 "the cmnt" 4 a lil more time...wil unres pakka 2day..

unres
so here your satu comment comes which i feel is not being awaited for these days.i dont know why but i feel like that,i am sry if i've done something wrong or have hurt
bhaiya!😭
woooww now the length of this update was way tooo long bhaiya!!!😲😆
but i enjoyed right from the start...though i 4got where did u end but glad you told it in the beginning!😉
you explain each and every minute detail ...which is why i love ur updates bhaiya,coz i can imagine more clearly by reading them.😊and enjoy it more!😃❤️

so starting from the long lines at the auditions,to the excitement to see whose in the car n in the end who turns up!... and that smiling face which was happy as she got to know she has got a tough comp out there...you described them again but with a different flavour of your writing skill!!😉love this fact of your writingthat you've got variety in terms of everything bhaiya!!⭐️
the tensions mounting sumit-vinod oh!woooww you beautifully got that scene written !!!as how they were discussing about their criterion,the judging format n everything.then sharon's drama which was so obvious to happen...😆 and then kriya coming in and taking her stand!n now i come to sharon's audition directly!you described her audition...really awesome bhaiya!you linked everything just the way it happens in real!!😊😆
this OS was pretty long and a good comeback from a long IF vacation!and focusing on girls.after reading this i am so looking forward to kriya's audition n then boys!!!😃
i am happy that your exams went great!!!and yes i am here to pray for you bhaiya!!so dont you worry!!😊 please update soon...dont make me wait for too long.and sorry once again.
keep writing


Hey Sats your comments are eagerly awaited still i dont know what makes you think like that...but trust me you were always special to me dearest sister...I know i am like inactive still on IF but you know the reason why i am inactive because i have hell lot of work these days...but trust me my updates are just inocmplete with out a Satu comments dear no comment can make me happy as your comments does trust me...Your comments are just way to special for me dear...and i am really very glad that you liked the update...oh i am not that good one as you have described sats...ya i am trying my level best to make this SS more entertaining than all other my works so do guide me in lacking things...and I am so happy that you liked the Sharon audition part because it took me lot of time to write that one...hahahaha you enjoyed the girls introduction wow the boys intro is also there in the next update but girls intro se totally different hai...so wait and watch for the next part... i am sorry for being late again in updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Daaahhh.. Em lovin it..!!
Finally u updated..
So dis part was on KRISHA.. Yeah..
Okie.. Nw m really lovin d gal's attitude..
Sharon on one hand want evn aware abt kriya's existence wea as kriya on d othr hand was happy abt d fact tht she has got a competition here.. I really loved whn she said.. Il mk her earn dis place which means its nt at all easy fr sharon to grab d place..

One thing tht took my notice is.. Sharon as always flaunted bt kriya.. Though bein a daughtr of one such great dancer was standing among d commom ppl which definitely shows a diff side of hr..!!

So our egoistic diva is bk.. Ws missin hr.. Haha she made d judges to tk hr audition at d frst position usin her dad's name buh buh kriya aint less.. Instead of d name she used hr charm.. Poor boy.. Hahaha.. D way she confronted d judges duo.. Poor dem.. Ek trf sharon toh doosri taraf kriya.. End mei jhukna e pda.. Haha..

Dese acts of krisha surely showed a bit of thr personna's..

I loved sharon's confidence.. D way she said tht she's born wid dis name n she jus cnt leave it lik dat.. She def knows to giv ppl thr pieces of s#** !! She surely wud hv dazzled d floor.. Bt wait kriya ka performance toh dikhaya e nhi.. Not fair !!

One is fire n othr is ice.. Lets c wht hpns nxt..
Waitin fr kriya's performance+Reyam's entry.. Wonderin how it wud b..
Ermm.. One mire thng tht took my notice is tht sumit vinod r gonna select two male two female dancers.. One wud become a part of d team n othr fr emergency situation tht directly refers to Ego Clashes,Games,Pranks,Fights n somewea frnshp too .. Haha.. M thnkn too much..:p

As u said.. Dis story is abt d dreams bt love always follows.. :)
U did a splendid job.. Brilliantly written.. Lovd it..
Waitin fr d nxt prt.. Update soon :)
N yea.. Tnx fr replyn to d comment !!

Hey thanks really for a wonderful comment...you really make me amaze with your comments..how do you manage to analyse each and everything perfectly yar... I mean you said everything perfectly just the way i worte the update brillient yar...ya i know i am bit lazy in updating but i am actually not having enough time to come to IF and update so being late actually...and ya love does happen in other stories but in my story love is more of a object to reach the heights they want...so all the stories here are bitchy and dont worry yaha pe koi dost banne wale nahin hai so dont wait for ShaRey or KriYam to happen because yaha pe sab self centred arrogant persons hai jinhe sirf apne aap se matlab hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello I am finally here with another update on dancing stars. I know I am very lazy with updates but I am really hell lot busy with my commitments. I want to say sorry to Tanya for being lazy and not replying to her msgs. Tanya thank you very much for being a curious reader I hardly have curious readers so you are important reader for me. This update here will carry on from where we had left last time.

DANCING STARS Part – 3

Sumit-Vinod was just amazed with resilience and hold Sharon had on herself throughout the performance. It was efforts definitely worth praise as she had done a remarkable job not many female dancers are found who can carry of all the styles with same effect. And the same time her face was also expressive so it was a huge bonus as they can put up an act which requires acting than she is capable of doing that also so all in all Sumit-Vinod knew they have cracked gold here.

Sharon who came out of her closing posture came and sat on the audition chair back and was ready for the result of her performance.

Sumit-Vinod on the other hand actually didn't had anything to say to her as she was just about perfect in whatever she did whether it was classical or western part.

Both of them looked at each other and Sumit just hinted Vinod to speak whatever he thought and give the result.

Vinod: Well Sharon that was really nice effort, I can surely say that not many can do what you just did. Ya there were some areas that could have be worked on but that cannot take away the credit that you are a brilliant dancer. We are putting in you in the final short list of dancers to choose you will have to wait for one day to know the results but you surely are a good candidate and you have proved your candidature very well.

Sharon: If I have something different than why are you making me wait just choose me you know I can pull of anything than what are you waiting for?

Sumit: well there are others who are waiting and we want the best so we cannot take even a bit of risk with that so you will have to wait if you want to join this.

Sharon was really irritated by such a reply but she was helpless as this was the only way she can prove herself that she is best even if she is dancing with any group that is not led by her father. So she had to follow what Sumit-Vinod said.

Sharon: ok your call but I can say that you are wasting your time as you will not find anybody who can match up me.

Vinod: That we will se Miss Rai Prakash but thank you coming here. We will be glad if you are the final choice and we get to work with you. It is just a matter of one day.

Sharon just smiled and went away showing full attitude of hers.

Kriya was patiently waiting for her turn to come as she surely was there to prove something to her mom and others who thought she cannot make her career in western dancing.

Just as Sharon was making her way out from the audition hall she came face to face with Kriya.

Both of them saw each other in eye to eye. An eye to eye contact just warmed up Kriya as she saw the same arrogance in Sharon's eyes which she sees in her mom's eyes.

Sharon saw attitude to Kriya as she was trying to ignore Kriya because somewhere she knew there was a competition on between them as Sharon and Kriya knew each other well enough. Sharon had learnt classical form from Kriya's mom and from that time a cold relationship has been established between them because they always end up arguing to the point who is best and today certainly they were on a point where it will be proved that who is the best actually by getting selected in the audition.

Sharon just went out without saying a word to Kriya but her eyes conveyed one thing to Kriya that I don't care whether you are here or not.

Kriya also showed a calm attitude by showing a sweet smile to her and it was like whether you care or not but I am here to make your chances week darling.

Kriya just entered into the audition hall and sat before the Audition panel which were Sumit and Vinod.

Sumit and Vinod were getting happy because they had good fortunes of audition two very talented dancers at one time.

But how little they were aware that big troubles were waiting for them outside Mr. Outsmart Hunk Reyansh Singhania was approaching towards audition centre. But wait a minute he was talking to somebody (Rather he was bribing somebody to get into Audition list fast)

Rey: Hey listen I am paying good bucks so that I can get in before all these shit trashes get in for audition. If I don't get an early chance than you are for sure into hell lot of trouble remember that.

Boy: Sure sir just waits a minute I will check what I can do for you.

Rey: (hold him with collar) I am not here to wait mind it.

Boy was trying to save himself from the Anger of the Casanova.

Just than a tall figure from the crowd emerged and took hold of the hand of Rey and gave him a swift stroke which made Rey fall on ground.

The boy got relief as he was saved from the anger by somebody.

And that somebody was none other than Mr. Swayam Shekhawat who just was not able to tolerate any unethical acts in front of him.

Rey stood up still shocked that the boy actually pushed him to ground.

Rey: What the hell you think of yourself? How did you push me on the ground?

Swayam just smiled impulsively as he didn't know what to reply to such a dumb question.

Swayam: Dude do you want me to push you again to show you how I did make you push on the ground on the first instance. And well I think I am here just like you to get into the audition alright so don't act smart and wait just like all.

Rey: Hey you street smart muff what do you think all these cheesy acts can make you stand before me no ways get this straight to your mind. You are here to audition so you are different because I am here to get selected and they need me so you all have no chance ok.

Swayam was laughing like a maniac...

Swayam: look who is giving attitude to me. Look whoever you are get this straight when I dance they will have no other option but to choose me but that is another thing. You think they need you than they would have taken you inside just as they took the two girls there prilimary in their audition ranks. So don't try to give me all this old dirty shits and get this straight I will be the final choice of them.

Rey: what the hell? Which two girls got in first? And you dumb shit of boy I have paid you enough money to get me in first than how did this two girls go in first.

Boy: sir both the girls knew to them personally so there taken in primary basis we cannot do anything in that.

Swayam: satisfied now Mr. I is something you just like all this maniacs here for audition to them.

Inside Sumit – Vinod were gearing up to question Kriya.

Kriya was already to answer anything that comes her way.

Sumit: so Miss Kriya Ghai the famous daughter of the great Indian classical dancer of Anushka Ghai what makes you come here and join the troupe?

Kriya: well I did not know that you knew my mother but anyways being daughter of successful dancer doesn't mean I cannot do anything on my own. And besides that I am a western unlike my mom.

Vinod: Fair enough also, but what do you think about the troupe and academy we are not here to train you guys we want guys who can train ok?

Kriya: and who actually said to you that I am here to learn anything or I cannot teach anybody? Well for your information I am a certificate holder hip hop dancer from New York Academy of Dancing.

Sumit: yes I saw that and it's very impressive the way you have performed there but as you know papers doesn't help the cause when it comes to us.

Kriya: I know very well that you guys believe in what you see and that you will see in my dance.

Sumit: Ok that we will be waiting to see that but before that one final question as why do you think that we should select you when you are aware that Sharon Rai Prakash has just auditioned here and as we all know she is a brilliant dancer.

Kriya: Look I don't know what makes you say that just because Sharon Rai Prakash auditioned for a place nobody else can be better than her. And ya she a terrific dancer but that just doesn't make any sense in comparing her with me because I am way different than her in dancing and in just everything I do.

Vinod: well you can surely talk well but honey we are here for dance so get up and prove yourself worthy of the dance.

Kriya just smiled and took out a zip drive from her pocket and went towards the DJ who was there to play music.

And outside here Rey and Swayam had already created attitude chaos and which was just not getting stop.

Rey: Are you afraid that if I go first than I will get selected and you will be thrown out.

Swayam: What the hell? Your act doesn't even affect my chance to get selected

Rey: Than why are you arguing so much just let him make me go first and you go in that queue and prove yourself by getting selected like that when I audition first.

Swayam: Oh so you want to play a smart game with me. Do you think that I suffer from inferiority complex or something? Or do you think that I will get too much anxious and award you a golden chance?

Rey: well you are for sure because agar tumhe fark nahi padta to let me go in the way I want to and tu apni tarah se AA fir dekhte hai.

Swayam: Ok I am not coming in your dumb tricks but ya let's see how you can prevent me from getting selected by auditioning first ok. Now here is a challenge for you that get auditioned first and stop the male auditions after that? And if you can't than just wait outside until I give my auditions?

Rey was getting furious now as somebody was acting too smart with him.

Rey: Ok fine accepted. Agar mere bad male auditions band nahi hue to I will wait ke tu select hota hai ya nahi?

Swayam: ok deal than get going and pull up your socks.

Rey: I will you don't need to tell me that.

Both of them went in their places as Rey was scheduled to be the first boy to get auditioned as he had bribed the crew to a big amount.

Inside Kriya was already to audition. Her track was set up and lighting was adjusted to Kriya's requirements. This changes actually Impressed Sumit-Vinod because it made them aware of the thing that Kriya had this amazing stage awareness.

Kriya got in the starting pose as something like on head and two legs locked upwards.

The track got hit with bang. The track was mix of Beyonce and Shakira songs.

The first move Kriya did was just enough to amaze judges as she struck a b-boying leg movement to start with and then swiftly went into the Hip hop style and was doing all the leg work to perfection.

What most noticeable was that the expressions of Kriya were bang on in Hip Hop mode. There are hardly any dancers who express with face while dancing in Hip Hop.

So these were delighting for Sumit – Vinod.

The floor work was just amazing it was mesmerising to see the mix of Hip Hop with B-Boying.

A girl doing B-Boying is a novelty in India and Sumit just indicated the same thing to Vinod.

The More Kriya was dancing the more Sumit – Vinod were getting impressed with Kriya.

The track was getting slow as it was progressing that really amazed the Duo because she was dancing Hip Hop and B-Boying which requires fast beats to move.

But they were in for a surprise as she was shifting gears to the Belly dancing and Kathhak style.

She just started dancing on Belly moves that suited her most and was just amazing to see her like that. Sumit and Vinod were just all glued up to see what she was doing.

She was just thoroughly enjoying herself moving here and there. She had actually covered a lot of space in belly dancing which was another impressive thing.

Just when Sumit – Vinod thought that they had enough surprises and the dance will in that posture suddenly music changed gears and it went to in to classical tabla and sitar mode and Kriya started moving in Kathhak form.

This was just a shocker to see 4 dance forms going in one 5 Minutes performance.

Kriya ended her dance in the typical classical Kathhak posture.

And it left Sumit – Vinod dumbstruck.

Kriya came and sat on her chair and was ready to hear the results.

But Sumit – Vinod had no idea what to say.

Vinod: Well that was a really brave attempt Kriya and we really liked the way you set up the whole dance.

Kriya: Well I told you, you will see my skills when I dance.

Sumit: Ya sure you have skills but you will have to wait for a day for results as we want to complete the auditions and than announce the results.

Kriya: Well I don't mind waiting but consider this that I know Jazz, Bollywood and contemporary also.

Sumit: Ya we will surely do.

Kriya: Well thank you sir and it was really nice of you to allow me a early audition.

This had actually surprised Sumit and Vinod as they were not expecting a kind gesture from Kriya.

But as you know Kriya is a brilliant manipulator so she just showed a sweet bubbly attitude to make her look different from Sharon.

Kriya went out and left the two most confused minds there.

Sumit: Vinod we thought no girl can dance like Geeta but here are two girls who are just forcing us to re think.

Vinod just smiled at this statement...

Vinod: Ya really both them were brilliant and frankly I am very relieved that at least we have two girls to short list now. And let's see age kyu hota hai ab?

Sumit: Ya right boy's ka tension hai ab mereko to because girls to ab koi achi Na bhi nikli to ye do to hai hi...

Vinod: Ya right but ye dono girls full of attitude hai bhale hi Kriya last me sweet banke gai hai but these two girls are tough to handle I am telling you this in advance.

Sumit: I know Vinod but talent bhi to hai we want talented people to represent us right.

Vinod: Ya right we want talented people to represent us surely but we will have to be more arrogant to take out desired work from them.

Sumit: Ya right ye log ke sath dedh Shana banke hi rahena padega Varna ye log humien kacha chaba jayenge.

Vinod: of course right. Let's see ab baki contestants' kaise ate hai.

Both of them take lots of auditions of girls than but as they were expecting there were no girls that could match the level that Sharon and Kriya set to begin the auditions with.

Sumit and Vinod were still satisfied because they had got Kriya and Sharon two options with them to explore and it was more than useful to them considering the event coming up.

They had two most suitable options for the place Gita had left behind her.

But what was worrying them most was if they didn't find any suitable boys to match up with Sharon and Kriya than what will happen?

Sumit: Yar ek bahot bada factor hai ke boys kaise hai audition mein because ek to Ganesh ki position ki baat hai and uparse jo humare probable choices hai Sharon and Kriya unhe match up kar sake aise hone chaiye na.

Vinod: Actually right yar ab agar boys us level ke nahi mile to humien firse sab kuch suru karna hoga and ab iss point pe we cannot afford to do that actually.

Sumit: Yes right ab is point pe everything starts se karna is not possible. Let's hope do ya teen ache boys' nikal aaye Jo Sharon and Kriya KO match up kar sake but in a way Ganesh se better ho.

Vinod: Ya Sumit let's wait for good things to happen and keep the figures crossed.

Well guys this was the part 3 for all of you. I know maine abhi tak part 2 ke comments ko reply nahi kiya hai but I will do that soon actually I was hell lot busy with some things so could not come online regularly so was not able to reply all but I will surely reply to all the comments very soon. Please hit the like Tab and leave your precious verdict as I get to know how the update was from that.

Thank you for the time and patience to read this one.

Pratik...

Edited by pratik54000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Guys I know I am supposed to update more regularly but I am into some work so will try an update as soon as i can. Thank you for the love and support you all have shown to this Story is really amazing. I hope you all will stay in support just like you all have been doing at all the time.

Pratik...
Edited by pratik54000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome loved it...

merry advanced christmas...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res :)

Unres
awesum update! :D
loved it! :)
thank You for the Pm.
pm me when u update nxt!
Will be waiting!
Love,MiNi
Edited by SwaRon_MiNi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Kria's dance was amazing
waiting for Swayam n Rey's performances
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow as always a 'Superb' part 😃...
Well Sumit-Vinod were ought to be surprised after all it was 'The Sharon Raiprakash' , who was performing 😉...
Same goes with Kria's performance , 4 forms performed in 5 mins , that really is Amazing ...
That was a nice trick of being 'Sweet' at the end...
They really were wasting their time auditioning other girls , they couldn't get anyone better than them...
On the other hand 'The Boys' made their entry , as expected both had full on 'Attitude' 😎...
Swayam pushed Rey , now that really was an insult for 'Reyansh Singhania'...
Poor Sumit-Vinod already got 2 shocks in a day n are unaware of another 2 of the shocks waiting for them 😆...
Well this is an Awesome story...
Loving it ❤️...
Will be waiting foe the next part...

About u being lazy , well it's alright u must be having your own reasons...
N Merry Christmas in advance Bro 😊.


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