VIRMAN OS : BREAK-UP PARTY EDITED

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Posted: 12 years ago

VIRMAN OS

BREAKUP PARTY

"How can I be reasonable? To me our love was everything and you were my whole life. It is not very pleasant to realize that to you it was only an episode."
? W. Somerset Maugham, The Painted Veil

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viren : what the hell virat...??? this is the fourth time in two months...!!!
virat : but this is the final time... grand finale...
viren : grand finale... thats why there is a party tonight...
virat : we want to end it gracefully n on a good note...
viren : wow... applauding... this would be the first ever breakup party of my life...
virat : mine as well...
jeevika : what is this guys...???
virat : hey jeevs... i hope you already know about this... your rude arrogant friend must have invited you...
jeevika : yes yes... i am invited too... viren what is this man...???
viren : my brother n your best friend have gone mad...finally...
jeevika : yeah she just gone to have a beauty treatment...
virat : see last month only she had one and i paid for it...
viren : just shut up...!!! and add it in your petty expenses...
virat : petty expenses...??? a paid a good amount of rs.31,000/-
viren: ohhh i see...
jeevika : thats not too much... but we have something important to discuss right now...
viren : and whats that...???
virat : bhai i also dont know...
jeevika : you dumb vaderas... calm down jeevs... breathe in breathe out... okk... tell me why are you guys breaking up...???
viren : yeah virat you can tell us...
virat : jeevs why dont you ask your best friend...??
jeevika : bcos she is very busy today getting ready for the party... and she told me to ask you...
virat : you know what she just told me that she doesnt want to go for the football match...
viren : and...
virat : and what...??? thats it...
jeevika : shit... you both broke up just because she didnt agree to join you to the football match...
viren : you both are really impossible... cmon jeevs lets just go...
virat : jeevs.. listen bhai...
viren : see you at the party virat...

at the party...
viren : so hii... wish u both your happy breakup party... whatever...
manvi : thanks viren... and you mr. virat try n have some courtesy...
virat : thanks bhai... dumb girl...
manvi : arrogant freak...
virat : bhai you carry on and enjoy the party... where is jeevs...??
manvi : she is just coming... dont bother about my bff...
virat : i wonder why that sweet girl is friends with you...
manvi : dont force me to kill you vadera...
jeevika : hey sweetie... just got late mannu... i was deciding what to wear and what gift to give you...
manvi : jeevs there is no need for a gift babes... i am just happy to be free...
virat : i am more than happy...
jeevika : now pls enjoy the party guys...
virat : you are right like always...
manvi :get lost virat...
virat : you too chipkali...
manvi : bandar kahin ka... hurrr...
virat : cmon dj...

the dj played the song " break up party "

Aaj maine breakup ki party rakhli hai ( virat was constatnly looking at manvi with a smirk on his face )
Subah se ek botal daru bhi peeli hai
Sleeper lagake mummy daddy ko suake
Aao mere paas yaaron gaao sur sa lagake
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Aa jehdi nachde ae use bi peeni hai
Dil se hai aaj maine usko nikala ( now it was manvi's turn to tease him and stared at him with naughtiness in her eyes )
Dil to hai pagal jo fudakta tha saala
Finger dikhayi uski photo bhi jalayi
Phir flush me bahake thodi thandak si aayi
Is baat se baat se baat pe uthao haath
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Aa jehdi nachdi ae use bi peeni hai

Tujhe bithake rakha tha maine raani palko pe ( virat started moving towards manvi )
Tunhe thokar maari samjhi aa jaunga sadko pe
Na aisa na tu soch ri chori
Everyday my new love story ( and while walking he turned around towards some hot girl)
Pehle toh meri baat na gauri
Ab boli ke we m sorry
Chal ri chal re ab side me hoja
Dhundle apna aashik duja
Aira gaira nathu khaira
Fukra sa shehri chuusa
Ja karle tu usse shaadi, Fir shuru teri barbaadi
Dhoyegi tu kachche, Aur gande bartann
Dekhegi saas bahu aur durdarshan
Banke reh jayegi tu house biwi
Aur chaubis ghante tera yaar hoga on tv
Phir tv dekh ke tu bahot pachtayegi
Fir yo yo honey yo yo honey singh hi tu gaayegi
Aur bachcho ko sunayegi aur yehi batlayegi
Agar galti se mujhse na hota ye paap
Toh yehi hote bachcho tumhare baap ( manvi was now burning in anger unable to digest his i-m-so-cool attitude)
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Aa jehdi nachdi ae use bi peeni hai

Ab uski best friend ko fasaaunga ( now virat purposely went near jeevika and asked her for a dance but his eyes not even leaving manvi for a second )
Long drive pe usko le jaaunga
Usko jalaun use bada tadpau
Apni ex ko aaj main sabak sikhaaun
Is baat se baat se baat pe uthao haath
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Upar upar upar upar in the air
Aa jehdi na chadi ae use bi peeni hai

the party was in full swing... evrybody was apparently enjoying the so called breakup party and so were the host virat and manvi... but the next moment virat burned in anger and jealously on seeing manvi in the corner of the hall with his buddy, arjun. talking, laughing, and dancing with him on their current romantic number, with arjun's hands resting on her waist and pulling her close with passing minute.

maya : virat lets dance...

virat : get lost... you all girls are like that...
maya : what are you saying...???
virat : i just cannot take it...

virat went towards manvi and arjun ; and pulled manvi towards him.
virat : i know arjun you were waiting for this moment only... you always had the hots for manvi... but back off she is mine...
arjun : hehe... breaking news buddy... its your breakup party... you just broke up with her... and why do you have problem when i want to hook with her...???
virat : f**k the breakup party... just get out...
manvi : stop it virat...
virat : you just shut up... i have had enough of your immaturity and childishness... but this.. this is just testing my patience...
manvi : why cant i hook with him...??? speak up... why are being so bipolar...??? why are you being so possessive...??? stop acting like one because now you are my ex...
virat : i am leaving...
manvi : see same old habit of running away from problems...
viren : chill guys... dont create a scene...
jeevs : mannu... calm down pls...
virat : she is just so insensitive guys... she only cares about herself and no one else...
manvi : like you care about the whole world...
virat took hold for manvi's hand and started taking her with hm...
virat : guys enjoy the party... we need to sort out things...

while driving...
manvi :speak up damn it... we havent come for a long drive... we need to sort out things...
virat : exactly my point...
manvi : so just open your mouth and blurt out whatever u want to... and where the hell are we going...
virat : we are going to my guest house where we can talk peacefully...
manvi : i am not going there...
virat : you have 2 options - sit quietly or jump off the car...
manvi : you can never change...
virat : get off... we have reached...
manvi got off the car and went inside. she without thinking once went to his bedroom upstairs...
virat came inside and looked for her in the hall and then went to his room...
virat : we are here to sort out things and not for a sleep over or something...
manvi : i know... i am sorry...
she was going out of the room, when virat held her and pulled her close to him...
virat : do u really wanted to be in his arms...????
manvi was just looking into his eyes...
virat : do you really want him...??? dont you love me any longer...???
manvi : leave me virat... and why the hell do you care...???
virat : because i love you... always have and always will... i honestly thought that this breakup was just like the previous ones... and this party was another crazy idea of yours
manvi : what makes you think i dont love you...??? i thought you were over me...
virat : i love you so much... and that arjun i will teach him a lesson...
manvi : hug me you idiot...
virat : a hug wont do for me... i want something more...
manvi : ditto...
virat : never ever try to leave me mannu...
manvi : i promise... but that doesnt mean i am going for that stupid football ma-
virat crashed his lips with hers and kissed her with all his love and passion towards her.
virat immediately broke the kiss and manvi was confused and shot him a glance...
manvi : fir se break up karna hai kya...??? (do u have to break up once again...???)
virat : you know what he was about to kiss... this is not done... you kissed me after full one month of our relationship and he was just flirting with you...
manvi : can i tell you something that always you guys say...??
virat : hmm...
manvi : it was just a moment and it passed away...
virat : moment ki bachi... i will not leave you...
manvi : for leaving... you first have to catch me viru boy...
virat : you are gone mannu...
manvi was about to reply when virat again captured her lips in a hot kiss...

manvi submitted herself quietly and held his shoulders pulling him and virat tightened his grip on her waist and other clutching her head pulling her more towards him... after a long passionate kiss, they parted as they were humans and if they wouldnt have parted, their lungs must have bursted... he again pulled her into his embrace and manvi leaned close to him and buried her head in his neck to inhale his fragrance. The next thing manvi knew was, virat's hands were running through her hair, and he was pulling her closer, as if he couldn't get enough of her..… as if he couldn't get enough of holding her closely and touching her.

"manvi..." It was just one word; her name, in fact. But the way he said it made her breath hitch and she thought that her name never sounded so beauitful and divine before.
manvi purposely stepped back and went and stood near the window. she was looking at the moon and thnaking god for making everything fall into place.

virat came near her and hugged her from back. he came near her ear and whispered " dont do that ever, you will regret it manvi... " while his hot breath tickling her. his tone held possessivenss and immense love which went unnoticed by manvi as she was too busy in enjoying his touch or to be honest she ignored what he said.

virat came on her neck placing some luscious kiss while his hands roaming all over her body. manvi was now breathing heavily as she wasnt used to all this. manvi without removing his hand from her body turned around and captured his lips.. virat was dumbfounded and he couldn't help but smile. Her fingers played with his shirt button where he groans in the kiss and in return tries to remove the only barrier... her dress...

manvi immediately broke the kiss and said " thats my new dress virat... dont behave like an animal..."
virat : i really dont care about this piece of cloth... i just want you now...
manvi : i will help you but dont u dare and spoil my new designer dress...
virat : oh god... why am i in love with this designer dress obsessed chick...??

in the meanwhile, manvi took off her dress carefully and placed it on the couch. she got into his bed and settled herself in the duvet...
manvi : will you just stand there like a statue...??? wait i will call somebody else to make out with...
virat : think about somebody else once again and you will be gone...only i can make out with you... no one else...
manvi : then dont make me wait...

virat joined her and went on top of her and whispered " get ready for the punishment..."
manvi giggled but soon she was quiet as he lips were captured again. virat's hands were roaming all over her body and his feet massaging hers. manvi was no less, her hands were busy enjoying his toned body and his warmth.virat tried to pin her hands so that she doesnt disturbs him but she dig her nails in his skin making him groans in pain n pleasure.virat broke the kiss and She held his nape puling him more close to her. he came on her cleavage and sucked it hungrily.
manvi screamed " ahhh virattt..." It made him more want her. he came on her belly bottom and kissed her naval sucking the skin more...

and the night faded away...

ps : dont blame me...!!!!! blame honey singh for the song or virman as they are always on my mind...!!!

i was blushing hard while writing it... its all bcos u my buddies out there who are way too naughty and shameless... 😉

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LINK TO MY INDEX

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IMP NOTE

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72190669

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG!! Virman's Break up Party 🤣
Just Too Gud Naina,Its Amazing Story...I loved it...❤️
Only Naina can Do This...😉
Thanks alot 4 the pm dear...🤗

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kriyasree

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey its really. Nice.n congratz u became a goldie n ya cont ptyka soon nah

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Pyaasi Chudail

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very bad time to end
Waoo the whole os war jus freaking awesome just loved it

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js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

gosh you and nisha are on a roll!! Very good - hilarious!!!

Keep them coming

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virumanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

very nice..lol break up party ...loved it ...thks 4 de pm

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nikki1211

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice, different...it was cute...loved the idea of them breaking up and then realizing they will always love each other and coming back together...loved the virika aspect too...overall a nice funny sweet fic...loved it...

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely os.. Very well written👏.. specially the dialogues.. Break-up party!! nice concept.. Virman are too much adorable in this one...I loved the ending.. Jealous Virat😳❤️.. But why did you stop there?? 😆😆.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care😊