*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER pt 11 pg 118 28/2/2013 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

<div></div> awesome update
why is maan angry
continue soon



bcoz this is Maan's fav hobby... Lolzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

superb update ...maan"s family is too gud ...geet got gud family ..waiting for maan reaction



in next update cuty
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran





why Maan is so gloomy after marrying Geet...

what happened in past that he is so sad...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...




u sure got to know as story unfolds :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: supernasahu

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#3300ff">Nyc update...👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#3300ff">Geet maan ka lucky charm thi aur ab wife hai...😃</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#3300ff">Pr maan ko kya hua hai abhi bhi sam ka diwana toh nhi ...😕</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#3300ff">Plz next update jaldi dena...😊</font>



sweety may b ;p
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Maan sam ko bhul ja. Aur chup chap geet ke sath khushi khushi rh. Nhi to..

Janu nyc update



jaanu calm down u kno na boys ko der se samjh me aati hai...lolzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 3


GAURI took Geet along with her in kitchen,where she made sweets according 2 d rituals. Although it was not d first time she made smthing in dis kitchen bt aftr marriage it bcm compulsury 4 her 2 made smthng sugary. Maan ws taking shower 2 sooth his pain,but d warm water is failed 2 composed his wrenched heart. He only thinking y destiny played wid his life only,and d most amazing part he cant even share his pain wid any1. No1 is here 2 hear is silent cry. He inhale hard and come out of d shower. Wen he entred aftr drying himslf,he found his clothes laying on hs bed alredy. Geet arrange all 4 hm b4 leaving d room. She do coz she knew he want her help. She do it nt bcoz she bcm his wife,she do coz she always do dis 4 him since d day both joined collage. Maan was nvr good in selection of attire. On evry ocassion Geet cm and select attire 4 him. He also realy on her blindly,dats y nver care about his clothes. Geet always shop 4 his clothes,wheather it 4 a spl ocassion or 4 his casual needs. He pick up d shrt and put it inside d wardrobe again nd search anothr 1. Dis was d first time he neglect her sggestion go beyound hr choice. He fingers on 1 shirt and pick dat out,but dat shirt dragged him 2 his bittersweet memories. Sweet coz this shirt reminds him oh his frst official date wid Sam,and bitter coz she is not wid him now.
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After Maan lost hs match,he fumingly searched Geet,his mishti. He is vry angry on her. After a clueless search of whole compound,he gt 2 know dat she is leaving alredy. He fumingly went KM nd found her gossiping cherishily wid his bhabhi Gauri. He glared her.

'ruk tu mujhe hara kr yaha baithke gappe mar rahi hai.now i wont spare u.',he angrily moved twrds her nd she hide behind Gauri.

'bhabhi save me frm dis monster.khelna khud ko nai aata nd blaming me unnecessarily.',she pleads 2 gauri in her defend. Maan cm in front of Gauri 2 grab her,but she is standing as a wall btwn both.

'Maan stop nd tell me what happnd?',Gauri askd nd tryng 2 stop him,bt he avoid her que nd tryng 2 grab her at ny cost. Gauri's all tries turned fail and she bcm ping pong boll of 2. Wen she tired of 2 nd falls on couch,Maan ran behind her. Geet ran upstairs 2 save hrslf frm d angry devil.

'Maan ruk ja ladki hai lag jayegi use',Gauri commnds hm bt he not listen and ran aftr hr. She entrd in hs room and both rotates around his bed.

'Maan stop dere,i warnd u.',she gave warning bt in a weak voice.

Atlst Maan caught hr and both fall on his bed. Maan ws laying on her clenching her wrists,pinned besides her head. Both panting heavily.

'Maan u hurting me,leave my wrist',she command bossily.

'oh realy?unfortunately i m nt obeying u.y u nt com 2day.c i lost my match.aftr 5th standrd i lost my match frst time and just bcoz of u.u kno i want 2 c u cheering 4 me in a crowd',he gazing her contend face.

'on dat time i was ill u kno dat.',she clearifies.

'tabi to bach gai thi bt not 2day.i kno u intentionly do it coz u dont want that Armaan loose d match',he said irritatingly.

'no,its nt like dat',she turnd hr face,tryng 2 avoid hs assecutations.

'it is just like dat.see in my eyes and den tell u dont do it 4 hm?'he voice ws sharp.

'ok f9.waise b agar mere Armaan ne 1 match jeet liya 2 kya ho gaya?baki ki do teams to d gr8 MSK se harne hi wali hai na?',she try hr lvl best 2 hide her deed.

'ur crush on dat stupid,bcm payble 4 me.',he leave her wrists nd leaned back.

'Maan dnt call my Armaan stupid,wrna jhgda ho jayega.',he glared hm furiously,while showing her fingr 2 hm

'o realy,den go 2 hm nd nt speak 2 me again',he 2 ans resentedly.

'chali jati if my buddhu do his work at his own',she clamd her tone nd making hm contend 2. 'Maan wat if u loose i stupid match(he stare her again)ok o relax.(she wrapped hr rite arm in hs neck)Maan i fixed a date 4 u wid Sam,wo b aaj sham ko',she smiled blissfully,while whispering in hs ear. Maan's mood change instatntly nd sw her wid a huge grinn crept on hs face.

'realy?i mean in evng? Today?',he asked,having an large excitemnt on his face.

'yes mr MSK,wen u r busy wid ur game i ws monyfing her and she agreed. Now chill i planned evrything 4both of u.i bookd table 4 u and make sure dat u both got quality time and space. Now only d selction of cloths is remaing.let me do it also.'she get up and select hs clothes 4 hs spl momnt.

'yahi pehnoge tum.ok?' she showing wat she choose 4 hm.

'sure mishti,maine kabi argue kiya hai.',he said contendly.

'ok den b ready at 7,ill cm 2 pick u',she leave banging d door behind.

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A sharp sound of window's bang broke his trance nd came bak 2 hs real worls again,whch is nt liked by hm at all. He swore dat blue shirt wid brown trousers and came odown 2 join others.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wat a fishhh!!!!! Maan neglacted geet choice n wore datewala shirt nw geet will hurt NO !!!! :-"
Edited by 2102 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear 😊

for the 1st time Maan had not wore the clothes which Geet had choose for him 😒

in past --

Geet was having crush on Armaan 😲

contd soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part...
Waiting to know what happened between maan & sam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part...
so maan is still in sam's world...
n y he is behaving lyk dis with geet..??
does he thinks ki yeh sab geet ki wajah se hua hai????

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