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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys, sorry for the long delay for the update. Me and Nahi were both busy with School. Im really sorry to say that now Nahi won't be able to write anymore and there fore I have decided to contiinue the FF however there may be a long gap between them as I have to plan it out single mindedly. Please feel free to leave me your ideas, I would really appreciate it. And please be patient, also do spam and PM me as most of the time I'm really forgetful. And last but not least, please leave me ur precious comments.


Chapter 14:-


The house began to fill with guests and there was a pleasant atmosphere throughout. People were laughing and joking with one another whilst others took the opportunity to catch up. Viren and Virat were being social and decided to get to know the people. They were all having a laugh.


Meanwhile, Khushi's preparation was done and the girls were allowed to leave her alone. Maanvi and Jeevika went downstairs to greet everyone; Maanvi being the first to go down.


Whilst Jeevika was walking slowly down the stairs, Viren stopped his conversation and started looking at Jeevika and admiring her beauty. "She's beautiful," Viren whispered.


As Jeevika came down, she saw Viren looking at her which caused her heart to flutter. Without being careful, she missed a step and was about to fall when Viren quickly catched her.


('Naino ne' plays)


Maanvi clears her throat and then viren allows Jeevika to stand. "Thank you," Jeevika muttered to him whilst she was blushing. Viren smiled wanting to say more but he knew he couldn't. Everyone was watching them.


"It's okay," Viren replied back before returning to his brother.


"Wah, kya performance diya meri bhai," Virat teased him.


"Chup reh," Viren scolded him, wanting the attention to get away from him.


"We all know the truth," He laughed quietly. "Bhabhi se pyaar hua." And then he winked. Viren couldn't help himself from smiling at the memory of Jeevika and turned around to look at her. She was talking to the other girls.


*


Later on in the day, Virat was about to walk over to Maanvi when he saw Viraaj.


*Flashback*


"Here, let me get your drink," Virat says, and picks one up and hands it to Maanvi. Maanvi takes the glass holding a clear liquid, and brings it up to inspect. Just then, the waiter turned around, and Maanvi dropped her glass.


"V- v- Viraa..." Maanvi gasps and quickly walks away with her heart beating against her chest so hard. Virat stood there really confused to what had just happened. The waiter had disappeared in seconds after the incident. Virat decided to follow, thinking that the name Maanvi was going to say was his.


"Kya hua? Why did you say my name like that?" Virat asks, stopping Maanvi from running away. He places his hand on her shoulder, and forced her to turn and look at him. Her face was covered in hot tears which were gently flowing down her flawless skin. "Why are you crying?"


Maanvi quickly wiped her tears and composed herself before replying. "Kya? I'm not crying."


"You were crying, I just saw your tears. What happened?" He asks softly. She takes a deep breath, knowing that she couldn't get out of this situation. This was something she hated looking back at, but she knew she'd have to tell him. He had realised there was something up with her weird behaviour.


"I- I wasn't trying to say your name," She started off. Virat was really confused after hearing that, he was so sure that she was trying to say his name. "I was trying to say... V-v- Virraa- Viraaj"


"Who's Viraaj?" He asked.


"Viraaj was my ex..." She slowly said, and with that followed the whole story. The way her best friend had betrayed her and how she lost her love. Hearing the whole story Virat became angry.


"How dare he! I'm going to kill him when I find him," Virat says clenching his fists into balls.


"Virat please no... just please don't do anything, please," Maanvi begged him, tears flowing more rapidly down her cheeks. Seeing Maanvi in this state, he's anger calmed down and slowly he unclenched his balled fists.


"Okay, I won't do anything," He softly tells her, wiping her tears away with his thumb.


"Thank you," She barely replied back to him, and then she walked away.



*End of Flashback**


He clentched his fists into balls again. Virat couldn't take it anymore and he punched Viraaj in the stomach. Viraaj dropped to the ground, with all the glasses smashing to the floor. He looked at Virat with surprise in his face.


"How dare you..." Virat's words were put out quietly so that only Viraaj could hear. The man below him looked up confused as Virat's anger grew and grew. Virat grabbed him from his shirt and punched on one of his cheeks, Viraaj took defence and punched him back.


There was a yell from a distance and a girl came to stop the two from fighting.


"Please Virat, please stop," The girl cried. Virat didn't look at her but continued hitting the guy.


"Let's take this outside," Viraaj said, clearly remembering the girl who was pleading to stop the fight.


**


Jeevika smiled as Khushi and Arnav walked around and did their vows. Everyone was smiling at the couple. She looked to her right expecting Maanvi to be there too, laughing at the couple, but she wasn't there. Jeevika searched amongst the crowd for her sister but she was no where to be seen.


(to be continued)

Edited by -Niha- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
* res *
* unres *
somebody pinch me... am i dreaming...????
wait... i am not... you really updated it...
thank u soo much... 😃
n
i am the first one to comment...
so 2 reasons to be happy... 😃
coming to the update...
it was short but nice...
manvi actually told virat everything n loved his anger towards viraaj...
pls pm me wenever u update...
i am already in ur buddy list 😊
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update please pm me when you update next thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg you updated breathe in breathe out
Breathe in breathe out Lol ok I'm Gunna stop
Was awesome loved virats anger
Wonder who was stopping them from
Fighting hope it was manvi continue
More sooner and do pm me
Edited by madpaki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.Loved Virat and his anger.Wow, happy to see the update.pls accept my buddy request and please pm me wen u update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update.i love angry virat he looks cute.continue soon
-Niha- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

* res *

* unres *
somebody pinch me... am i dreaming...????
wait... i am not... you really updated it...
thank u soo much... 😃
n
i am the first one to comment...
so 2 reasons to be happy... 😃
coming to the update...
it was short but nice...
manvi actually told virat everything n loved his anger towards viraaj...
pls pm me wenever u update...
i am already in ur buddy list 😊


hahaha ur not dreaming
i rly did
no probz
lol yeaah ;D
okay will do... i didnt have time yesterday but pmed everyone today

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Posted: 12 years ago
Update! And awesome too! Love the update! OoO! Fight, ViraaJ and ViraaT. Rofl! Viraaj remembered the girl whose heart he broke. And how cute/hawt! Virat not being able to control himself. Awesome!
Syed695 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update..Its nic eto see angry Virat...:) Thnaks for the pm!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad to be reading a update after soo long!!..
Awesome part!!...
I guess Manvi is the girl trying to stop the fight...
While searching for Manvi,will Jeevika also see Virat fighting??.
Thanks for the pm..

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