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Posted: 12 years ago
hey Maan.. wht's this. .how can he agree for this stupid thing.. pagal

thanx for pm.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff
add me too ur pm list
pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
BOTH DEV AND SAMEERA WANT TO MAKE MAAN J BUT FOR DIFFERENT REASONS

AND MAAN IS GETTING ATTRACTED TO GEET
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting eagerly dear
when r u planing to update
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Posted: 12 years ago
again forgot to pm me
yyy meee always
all writers r not pming me😭
nice update
lovely
next part soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
already read this ff from starting dear
anyways thanx for the pm
superb ff
waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago

IMPORTANT- i have seen many of issues on GF about writing the same or copying others work & i hate buddies turning into foes..so i want to say this CLEARLY to all, though i won't copy other's work..(even if i do, either i have asked permission first,or the similarity would be unintentional) & if anyone sees similarities pls contact me & tell me straightforwardly
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PART 20
Sameera went from there in her car & then the guy got up smiling & shaking his head & started to walk towards to the parking area. He walked upto his Harley Davidson Cvo (price- 34,95,000) & zoomed off
...
A very broad & musculine back rippled..with waterdrops in it..a manly hand turned of the shower tap..the bathroom was steamy ...droplets of water stuck to the glass door..

the door opened & the man began to dress up.
he was smiling & remembering his conversation with sameera..he was the owner of the mall & it was his duty to see if the shops were going well. so he had decided to inspect the mall shops himself. as he was not going to a business meeting he had decided to wear something casual.

bt o boy!! this girl sameera understood him totally wrong,bt the reason he agreed for the proposal was the pic of the girl sameera showed him...it was his geet...

his face hardened at the thought...i know geet u are going through trobles & i will save u from ur crisis...like always. he thought..

he wore his watch & looked at the miror..I AM COMING GEET...
Abhinav Shukla

...
he was irritated...super irritated & hence he decided not to talk to anybody & made a grumpy face..
are maan..app yaha aise..app breakfast nahi karenge.geet said
nahi..he said stubbornly.
kyun??
kyun ki aj hume bahar jana tha..& u are going to that stupid function..
maan pls, wo hamare ristedaar hai.
so what? u are my wife & i have the first right to be with u always ,everywhere ,everysecond & every nano..he stopped his mouth realizing what he was saying & what other meaning it could have☺️..

well the sameeksha chapter was just an old chapter in his life..yes he has just given her permission to use his name within the limits of her area..& she was now working in his office..that was it...
neither he had any relation with her nor he had time to think about her...

his all time would be either on business or on geet😉 ...bt this stupid big business shark was still busy in contemplating what realtion he had with geet other than the social realtion called marriage..it seemed bizzar to him that until he met sameeksha again..this girl geet who was ONLY his friend , so how can she attract him so much that he tends to forget the surrounding ..
i ..i..i..mean we have to know eahother better & if u don't give me enough time how can we get clo ..i mean know each other??
maan..i will be back na, i am going for this after noon only,then we can go for a drive..
hmmm..sounds good..
now chaliye..no bahana..lets go to breakfast.
..
she stood up for going bt lost her balance & fell on maan who was sitting on the bed


wo..main..main..wo

geet stammered while maan kept looking at her..never ever..their bodies have made a close contact like this & it sent a jolt on them..geet was stammaring & blabbering nonsense without looking at maan as she was too shy to look at him.. bt seeing him not responding she mustered all her courage of her tiny heart & looked at maan..OH!! the love & intensity & passion..without touching her he made her melt like a icicle ..

they were about to kiss..bt someone interrupted their HOT moment ..
ahem ahem..it was Namrata..yes..she was cured..well not fully , she still had to use her wheelchair..
maan darwaja to band karliya karo..she chided him with a stern voice bt naughty expression..
both of them jumped looking at her..
geet was tomato red while maan was no less..
geet beta..
j ...j..ji..
wo someone has come to meet u.
abi gayi..phew..she didn't wanted to face namrata at this moment nor maan so she thanked the person in her heart for saving her from such a shame shame situation😆
she ran down stairs while maan followed her slowly.
the man was standing with his back facing her & maan.
she reached him & called.
suniye..
the man turned & geet gaped at him..
ANURAG!!before she could say anything more the man suddenly hugged her tightly...
oh geet i missed u sooo much..
i missed u too sweety..she said hugging him back while maan looked at him with utter rage..it's not that he didn't trust geet..it's just that he was not at all liking himtouching HIS geet...
precap-bolo bolo who is sweety?? uff uff MIRCHE!!

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
Tyro thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
new entry...nice...n J maan...lovely...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan toh already blunder kar hi diya uss sam ko apna use karne k liye bol diya...business tycoon ho kar bhi itna bada bewukulf kaise hai maan...kash anurag geet aur maan k life settle kar de ek angel ki tarah...aur maan ko realise ho jaye ki he loves geet...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb,lovely amazing updtae
loved it alott
hmmm maan getting possesive n jealous
why do i smell something burning????????
hmmm so lets see what this new entry anurag brings in maan n geet's life
it was a short update me sad:(
update the next part soon

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