OS on BALH- Lagi AAj Sawan Ki Phir wo Jhadi hain

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This is my post in INDIA FORUMS... I write regularly on FB.. and this is my take an One Shot after seeing the Promo... "Lagi aaj Sawan ki Phir wo Jhadi hain.."



The scene starts at Dubai...


Night 9.00 p.m..

DUBAI…..

Priya made Peehu sleep very early, coz she is not recovered totally, and Peehu didn't sleep until and unless priya sleeps wd her… priya was fast asleep………………………….

"LAGI AJJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………………."

Rajat and dai jaa…..

Dai jaa… " beta pooja… ko bolo humarein saath …"

Rajat " dai jaa par kya wo ayegi "

Dai jaa " jarur beta… baat karoon usse.."

Rajat " kya app baat karengi …dai jaa.. I just want to leave for india today… I cant afford to loose cady…."

Dai jaa " ok beta … I will manage and mein pooja ko bhi call karti hoon…"

Rajat " ok.. then mera bhi packing kar lijiye ga.. and let me inform suraj to get the details of that boy…from cady's account..and let me arrange a chattered flight.."

Dai jaa " ok beta.."

Rajat left from there…..

"LAGI AJJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………………."

MUMBAI….

Ram was sitting on the couch and moving his hand over it…..

Ram " priya … kyun aisa lag raha hain ki tum yehin hoo..aas paas ho … kyun aisa lag raha hain.. kahin par mere intezaar mein ho…" he closed his eyes… and said " priya I miss you…."

Ram's eyes fell on the pic of Peehu and his.. he smiled and stood up he took priya's photo in one hand and peehu's photo in other hand….

He smiled…..

Ram " Peehu (looking at peehu's photo..) meet this is priya ….. my angel…" then looking at priya's photo he said " priya meet Peehu… mein janta hoon tum jaha kahin bhi ho mujhe sum rahi hoot oh suno … acche se suno… agar humari beti hoti naa… priya…. bilkul Peehu jaisi hoti.. iske chal dhal bilkul mere jaisa hain..aur iska hansi … iska apna pan.. bilkul tumhare jaisa hain….khas priya tum idhar hoti aur humari bhi Peehu jaisi ek nanhi se jaan … hoti… ek nanhi si pari hoti.."

He hold the photos near to his heart and closing his eyes he smiled…..

"LAGI AJJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………………."

DUBAI……

Priya jumped off and sat up as her phone rang to its pitch….. she just dnt want peehu's sleep to be broken…. She received the call looking at the display ..and said " dai jaa haan boliye cady mil gayi..hain…"

Dai jaa " pooja beta nahi ..mili hain wo .. india chali gayi hain.."

Priya " what dai jaa… INDIA….."

Dai jaa " haan beta rajat ko pata chal chukka hain ..and he is also trying to find out which flight she boarded…"

Priya " dai jaa I just hope cady jald se jald mil jaye ..ek baar aa jane dijiye then iski hons thikane laga dungi…"

Dai jaa " pooja beta I need a favor …."

Priya " haan dai jaa boliye…"

Dai jaa " beta.. kya app humare saath india chaloge…"

Priya was about to say something…. Dai jaa said " plz pooja beta naa maat bolna .. cady ko agar koi mana k wapis la sakta hain toh wo tum hi hoo.. beta…aur koi nahi… and beta rajat is learning to live again ..aur iss waqt agar use itni bada jhatka lagega then he will break for ever….plz beta naa maat bolna.. and rajat was about to call u but he is busy arranging tickets..or chattered flight what ever he will get..'

Priya was tensed..her heart is beating very fast..she looked at Peehu ..and maintained silence…

Dai jaa " beta kya app chalogi humarein saath india….???"

Priya closed her eyes….. her heart started beating even more faster… she said " haan dai jaa…. Chalungi…"

Dai jaa " thank you beta … plz jaldi packing kar loo and pack for 10-15 days… plz…hum log aa rehe hain tumhe pick karne…and I will confirm you the timings of the flight or rajat ..as soon as we get to know it…."

Priya " ok dai jaa…."

Dai jaa disconnedted the call and priya also….

Priya said in mind.."kya ho raha hain.. yeh itne saalon baad india…. Aur meine socha tha Peehu ko sab bata dungi kal ram ke barein mein.. but abhi agar bata diya then wo jidd karegi ram se milne ke liye.. aur sab mujhe zinda dekhenge toh..nahi mein nahi bata sakti… na hi dai jaa ko mana kar sakti hoon india jane ke liye.. akhir ram aur meri jaldi shaadi hui hoti then Peehu (she kept her hand on peehu's head and caressing her hair ) said in mind…" Peehu bhi toh cady jitna hi badi hoti… cady meri bacchi se kam thodi hain…." she smiled and stood up and started packing…

"LAGI AJJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………………."

Rajat's house…

Rajat came in and said " all set dai jaa… 11.30 latest we will take off app ne pooja se baat kiya…"

Dai jaa " haan beta she has agreed…"

Rajat " good I have asked suraj to drop in to peehu's school and give the leave application and suraj kal tak uss ladke ka details bhi de dega mujhe…"

Dai jaa " mein pooja ko call kar ke bol deti hoon we will be there within….'

Rajat " hmmm within 30 mins… its already 10 dai jaa… we have to reach airport by 11…. Plz call her fast…"

Dai jaa didn't wasted a single moment she called pooja and said the flight timings…

Priya was ready only she has to make Peehu ready.. she carefully woke Peehu up..

Peehu " kya hua itni raat ko kyun jaga rahi hoo.."

Priya " chalo baby ready ho jao.. we have to leave.."

Peehu " kahan mamma.."

Priya " hum log naa india jaa rehe hain…"

Peehu was excited she rolled her eyes and said " golu uncle se milne…"

Priya smiled and said hesitatingly .." haan…"

Peehu stood up on the bed and jumped and said " yes yes yes yes ..mein golu uncle se milungi… yes yes yes…"

Priya smiled looking at her….. and said in mind " nahi beta ..i cant let u meet ur golu uncle… no I cnt….but cady k barien mein bhi toh bata bahi sakti…" she looked down and then she got busy to get her ready..

"LAGI AJJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………………."

11.45 p.m Dubai International Airport…

Priya Peehu wd rajat and dai jaa in the chattered flight…..

THE FILGHT TOOK OFF…

Peehu asked priya to bring her ear close to her….peehu whispered " mamma dai jaa rajat uncle hain tum ho mein hoon..cady kaha hain…"

Priya looked at her and said " tum thoda soo jao baby.."

Peehu again whispered " mamma rajat uncle itna sad sad kyun dikh rehe hain.. aur mujhe baat bhi nahi karne diya un se…"

Priya " babay ..plz sleep…"

Rajat was thinking something his concentration broke and he said " n e problem ms Sharma.."

Peehu " no problem mujhe app se kuch bol na hain…"

Rajat smiled and sat by Peehu and said " kya boliye…"

Peehu " jante hain kyun mein india jaa rahi hoo"

Rajat " kyun .."

Peehu " golu uncle se milne…mamma ne kaha hain…"

Rajat looked at priya and priya said " icant tell her the truth sir…u jnow why.."

Rajat nodded and said " yes…" and then smiling at Peehu he said yes .. we are going to meet golu uncle….."

Peehu smiled and seemed very happy .. priya also tried to smile…

"LAGI AJJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………………."

From almost 3 hours from then ………

MUMBAI!!!!!!!

ITS RAINING HEAVILY OUTSIDE….

Kapoor Mansion….

Ram even do not know when he slept on the couch with priya and peehu's photo…his sleep broke as the lightening struck……

He opened his eyes and found himself on the couch … he has not even changed… he looked up and found the door is drafting due to wind… he stood up and closed the door… he looked outside and smiled…

He moved to the window….he smiled and looked back and smiled looking at priya's pic …. He looked out and extended his hand to get a soft touch of the rain….

Somewhere outside the Mumbai international airport…

IN CAR

Priya and dai jaa are in the back seat wd Peehu…peehu has slept…… priya found its raining…..priya made the window glass down… she smiled ……

KAPOOR MANSION….

Ram smiled in pain….

He said in mind… " uss din bhi mausum kuch aisa tha priya… jab pehli baar tumse baat kiya tha… acche se… he smiled…and remembered there first rain scene……" he looked p and said " khas priya iss barish mein bheeg pata …khas tum mere saath hoti… khas tum mere paas hoti….."

BACK IN CAR……

Priya smiled and said " itne saalon baat Mumbai…" in mind……

The screens meet …… with ram priya…..

RAM'S PAIN…….

LAGI AAJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN..

WAHI AAG SEENE MEIN PHIR JAL PADI HAIN…

KUCH AISE HI DIN THE WO JAB HUM MILE THE…

CHAMAN MEIN NAHIN PHOOL DIL MEIN KHILE THE…

WAHIN TO HAIN MAUSAM MAGAR RUT NAHI WO…

MERE SAATH BARSAAT BHI RO PADI HAIN…

LAGO AAJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JADI HAIN……

NEXT MORNING…..

HOTEL ROOM…

PRIYA DAI JAA AND PEEHU SITTING…

Rajat came in tensed he is….

Dai jaa " kya baat hain beta…"

Rajat " abhi tak suraj ka phone nahi aaya … what he is doing yaar god damn.."

Priya " sir kya baat hain.."

Rajat " ms Sharma ..that day when cady fumed on us.. I cught her chating wd a boy ..that kid … yes that kid may have helped her to get into india.. may he knows where cady is .. raina bhi kuch nahi janti…"

Priya " sir a kid how can help …"

Rajat " bare baap ka bigada hua aulaad hoga …he seems to be that.. I will kill that boy just let me garb him.."

Priya " yahi app ki galati hain sir…"

Rajat surprised said " matlab…"

Priya " look sir kid he is too.. u r saying.. you saw him…"

Rajat " yes in chat…"

Priya " look sir … we cant charge n e one ,,,…. Like this to charge we must have full evidence what we can do we can talk..wd that kid and if u dnt mind I will like to talk wd him and his parents too…"

Peehu " mamma bhook lagi hain…"

Priya " oh!!"

Rajat " ms Sharma app Peehu ko kuch khila layiye…"

Priya " but sir call…that kid.."

Rajat " I will inform you …I will call u as soon as I get the info…."

Priya smiled and left from there with Peehu…

After few minutes………….

Rajat's phone rang…..

Rajat " yes suraj give some good news….mila details.."

Suraj ' sorry sir computer freak hain he was using a us ip … address and we cant trace him..but yes sir we can say that his original ip address is Mumbai india…..and cady is also there…"

Rajat " just dnt stop ..suraj try harder.. get the best experts god damn.. I want my kid back….."

Dai jaa got surprised when she heard from rajat …so desperately he said " I want my kid back…"

Rajat was disturbed and dai jaa said " beta call ram… may he can help ..too.."

Rajat looked at dai jaa and nodded he called ram….

.

LAGI AAJ SAWAN KI PHIR WO JHADI HAIN……………….

Ram's phone rang…

Ram " haan bol rajat…"

Rajat " help yaar,……"

Ram " kya baat hain tensed…."

Rajat " haan cady… she left home and fled to india…"

Ram " what!!!!!"

Rajat " haan yaar and I caught her chatting wd a kid… I tried to locate him but a computer freak he is original ip address Mumbai ka hi hain ..but he knows to hide the location… exact location…"

Ram " rahul!!!!!"

Rajat " rahul…."

Ram " cady chats wd rahul and wo yeh sab janta bhi hain par tu uske peeche kyun pada hain.."

Rajat " that kid might have helped her to flee raina boarding mein hain idhar Mumbai mein… but she didn't know n e thing..and I m in Mumbai too.."

Ram " par ..tu baat kar payega..mein baat karoon.."

Rajat " nahi ….pooja ayi hain mere saath and she will talk… par tu rahul ko kaise janta hain…"

Ram " wo sab chod note the address .. and rush there…rahul mera dost ka beta hain.. and let pooja talk ok.. tu kis mood pe hain pata nahi…. Let her talk…"

Rajat " ok….'

Ram gave him the address and said " tu jaa udhar mein 1-2 ghantein mein pauchta hoon ok and I m assuring you … if rahul knows where cady is definitely mil jayegi…"

Rajat disconnected the cal thanking ram….

Rajat " dai jaa chaliye…." He called pooja aka priya and asked her to wait in the lobby.. and few minutes from there they are off to rahul'shouse…. Priya unware of the fact that fate is taking her to ram very close to ram….

Shergill House…

Priya didn't recognize it cause she didn't know about the shergills present ….

Rajat stepped out and said " ms Sharma ayiye and dai jaa app Peehu ke saath idhar hi.."

Dai jaa " haan beta app dono jao.."

Rajat ran and rang the bell ..priya followed him…..

A help came and opened the door..

Rajat " rahul..hain.."

Help " haan hain but app ko rahul baba se kyun milna hain…"

Neha " kaun hain…."

Help " mam someone is here to meet rahul baba…"

Priya has stopped in between as something stuck at her shoe soul….

Neha came to the door step and looking at rajat said " yes.."

Rajat " rajat ..rajat kapur from dubai…"

Neha " rahul se kyun milna app ko..'

Rajat " plz call him plz… I beg to you…"

Neha " I m his mom…. Talk wd mee…."

Priya looked at rajat is talking d someone and she saw that rajat is getting irritataed …. His expressions are not good she rushed to the door…and….

Peeped…..

Priya " maam.. plz,….." she stopped as her eyes meet neha's …..neha stunned….. to see priya there….

Priya looked down… and said " plz let us talk wd rahul we are here to talk wd him plz…"

Rahul was coming down stairs… he said " who's there mom…"

Neha was stunned and not in a position to react after seeing priya alive standing infront of her…

Rajat was fumed off he said " rahul naa.." he rushed into the hall by pushing the door…priya shouted " sir…." And ran behind him …priya stood in between rajat and rahul before rajat could react….

Priya " sir let me talk…plz…"

Priya turned to rahul and said " beta .. hi…."

Rahul didn't recognize her early ….but he felt that he has seen her somewhere…

Rahul " have I meet u before"

Priya " I dnt know but beta do u know n e thing about cady….."

Rahul kept on looking at priya and thinking where he saw her…

Priya " beta ..plz say do u have n e idea about cady… kadambari.."

Rajat " yeh aise nahi bolega ..let me…."

Priya " sir plz keep out .. she turned to rahul and said " I know he is a good boy… he will say all if he knows about cady…hain naa beta.."

At the door steps …

Neha is standing like a statue ..she couldn't recover herself from the shock which she got….ram and vikram came there.. ram saw neha standing still there..vikram jerked her and said " neha kya hua hain…."

Neha got out of the shock and said " haan…"

Ram " darling koi aaya hain….."

Neha " haan…"

Ram " kya hua hain aise kyun dekhe jaa rahi hain…" ram stopped and turned back as he heard " golu uncle…." He smiled as he found Peehu running to him …. Neha peeped and got even more stunned.. to she ppehu….ram took Peehu in his arms and said " hi rock star…"

Peehu " hi!!!"

Neha " k…kaun hain yeh…"

Ram " yeh rock star hain ..meri celebrity … Peehu Sharma….meine kaha than a vikram pooja ke barein mein uski beti…"

Neha stepped back…vikram said " kya hua hain neha kuch bolo gi tum…"

Neha " no she cant do this to ram……"

Ram stopped smiling and looked at neha and said " kaun…"

Inside the hall….

Rahul was still trying to recognize priya and priya trying to fetch out from rahul about cady… rahul suddenly shouted.." mamma ..PRIYA AUNTY….."

Priya stepped back…… and rajat surprised…..

Ram peeped into the hall.. he saw rajat and a lady…. He put Peehu down….. he went inside and said " kaun…"

Priya closed her eyes wd so familiar voice of ram…

Vikram and neha came in and said " kaun …rahul…'

Rahul ran to ram and said " ram uncle priya aunty …."

Ram slowly moved to that lady … who's back was facing him…. He stood in front of her…… he stepped back as he saw priya… there…. He could utter "priya…"

Priya turned and saw surprised rajat there and neha vikram there… she then said " rahul if you know n e thing about cady…. Then .." she stopped as ram said " priya,,,,,, tum zinda hoo…"

Rajat " ram tuje kasie pata pooja ka alsi naam priya hain…"

Peehu " mamma ……." Priya closed her eyes …. Tight…..

Ram stepped even more back as he heard mamma from Peehu ..vikram ran to ram and hold him…..

Peehu ran to priya and said " mamma app golu uncle ko jante ho…."

Priya didn't reacted….

Ram " Peehu…. Priya tumhari …. Meri…. BETI……"

Rajat looked at ram with all surprise…..

Ram couldn't utter a single word seeing PRIYA his PRIYA ALIVE standing in front of him only he could utter …. " WHY PRIYA WHY?????" TEARS ROLLED DOWN PRIYA'S CHEEKS…. AS SHE HOLD PEEHU NEAR HER…

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