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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tere ishq pe Jaan Kurbaan

Madhu was shocked. Silent tears flowing from her eyes. She just could not believe her own ears.

Her eyes were glowing with tears of happiness. While RK was mesmirizing her from top to bottom. He smiled and said those three magical words which she wanted to hear from a long time. " I love you Madhu.. I love you.. I love you " RK waited for her response. Why wasn't the earth shaking? Am I still alive? she thought. RK screamed even more louder this time " I love you " and she timidly replied " I love you too Rishabh. " this was all she could manage to say. He ran towards her and hugged her tight. They both could feel each others warmth. Madhu wrapped her amrs around him like never before.
Her facial expressions changed when she felt her shoulder getting a little wet. RK was crying. She broke the hug and said " Shhh.. My husband doesn't cry. I will never leave you Rishabh. Never. "
" But, will you leave everything for me? "
Without any hesitation she shouted out loud. " I can even give up my own life for you Mr Rishabh Kundra. That so called family is nothing for me. But I have a condiion, you'll let me speak to Maa and Padmini Maa." Rishabh's face gace a proud expression.
He advanced towards her. This close promixity and her warm scent mad him even madder. He couldn't control his emotions. Nor could she. She closed her eyes to make this even better. Soon their lips were on each others.
First the kiss was rough and passionate but then it became softer. She could not get enough of his scent.
They parted and Rishabh spoke up. " How can you be so selfless Madhu? You're ready to give up eveything for me? " " Rishabh, I started loving you ever since you got shot. That crucial part of my life taught me to love. If I love you with all my heart I can easily spend rest of my life with you and only you."
" I proved her wrong. I knew you would make me prove that witch wrong. " Rishabh put on his vistory smirk.
" Who did I help you to prove wrong ? " confusion written all over Madhu's face.
"You proved Deepali wrong " and Rishabh narrated the whole story to her. " Rishabh you weren't trying to prove Deepali wrong. You were trying to prove RK wrong. " Ever since that time no RK existed only Rishabh did.
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"Ever since that day Madhubala Rishabh Kundra and Rishabh Kundra spent their lives loving each other " an old Deepali told Madhu and Rishabh's son Rohan who was now 16 after narrating his parent's story. Tears were flowing down from his eyes. Yes, he had spent his life with Deepali because his parents were dead in a car accident. But now he was happy that they were destined to be together and died together. Deepali who understood she cannot break RishBala's relationship had changed. Rohan went alone in the dark room and said " I love you Maa. I love you Paa. I know wherever you are you both are together. This is your everlasting epic love story. "
Okay so you reached the end. Tell me how it was.. Too boring? Tragic?
Well I'll be waiting for your response. And if you don't like this.. Please feel free to tell me.
Tanvi <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very tragic os loved it, but i never want tragic ending in show. Keep on wriring such fantastic work. I loved it and Deepali can never change
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS & Beautifully written. For one moment i was like OMG !! Is it really Depali ? Actually good things cant expect from her 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short & sweet OS <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks alot to all those who commented... <3

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