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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff
please pm me when you update next

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Posted: 13 years ago
shock indeed adi is so cheapman, he knows that how much she has suffered!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely.
liked it.
but sorry for kushi, why she had to suffer so much.
she trusted adi and he is also ditching her.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HK90

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I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, and I knew it that Aditya is not a good guy. What!!! 😲😲 he told to Nia that Khushi has suffer a lot so some more pain hasn't going broke her, how dare you Aditya!!!😡, You don't know the pain of a mother who loses her baby, you stupid moron
btw the update is really touching .
poor Arnav has to lie to protect his wife and his baby. Poor Khushi, she doesn't know the real face of Aditya😔. When Arnav was thinking about his moments with khushi i feel pian for him😭, this and Kushi's dialogue with Devi Maya are very very emotional moments, and plus you wrote them very very well. Great job 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
LOVE THIS UPDATE FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART.

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING BOTH THE FF AND FOR THE PMS.

CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S REALLY INTERESTING CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.


P.S. at lest on thi FF i'm on the second page, i'm too happy

Bebes Why you lying to yourself you know i shocked you guys and i know so too loool joke 😉 lool and yeah i hate Aditya he is the bad guy and i really dont like him, he made khushi cryina and along
with our arnav... i am so sorry if that made you tear love... like he will know he isnt a mother dumb cow 😆😆😆 i know right would do anything to protect his love ones... he lost many and now
he doesnt want that...he made mistakes and now he is making sure they will not repeat... and khushi doesnt know a thing i know i dont want to write the part when she finds out what aditya is planning
can you do that for me i will break down 😭😭 anyway thanks for the comment bbabes i really love all of them and i am updating in some hours but if i dont then tomorrow for sure... thanks i am happy
you liked it oh before i forget you kinda hyper arnt you loool joking and thank you once again!! 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Guys
i have update in time sorry about that
but enjoy even if its borring

Chapter 14: Back To RM!

Khushi sat up and smiled down to her stomach, and touched it with all her joy she had tears in her eyes
Khushi: baby you know how much I love you and I will do anything for you... anything even if that means living with a man who doesn't even love your mother... who just cares about himself... and who is your father that didn't believe that you were in my womb growing... she closed her eyes and a fresh tear rolled down to her cheek... but that doesn't matter baby when this month is over me and you are gone somewhere far and with Aditya. Ok baby you have to be strong for me ok. She smiled but Arnav walked in and it dropped.
Arnav: I got the papers get ready we are going!
Khushi: aren't you going to tell Aditya
Arnav looked up angrily: why does he need to know Khushi!!!
Khushi: excuse me... if you didn't know but he is my fianc...
Arnav: shut up Khushi! You are still my wife you can't get married to someone until we are divorced and I am not signing any papers.
Khushi: ARNAV!!... Fine whatever you say swami
Arnav smiled remembering the time she called him swami and he saw Khushi also smiled and thought she must be thinking about the same thing.

Khushi saw Arnav smile and she couldn't help but smile to herself she didn't know why she smiled but some feeling that made her happy... she then realized what she was doing and looked away and then said "fine I will get ready" Arnav walked out and sat down and waited for Khushi but saw Aditya walked towards the room and he got up he wanted to smash his face in and beat the heck out of him… he stopped him from going inside.

Aditya: what are you doing I want to see Khushi?
Arnav: well you can't see MY Khushi she is getting ready to come home
Aditya: oh she can go home… I will get the car
Arnav: no she is coming with me… to my house… as my wife… because she is
Aditya: excuse me… she is going to get married to me in some days
Arnav: not on my watch you aren't… and about the deal… I reject it
Aditya: what!!! You can't
Arnav: oh really but I just did… Arnav pushed him aside and walked into the room where Khushi was putting her shoes on.

Khushi: I am ready… are you? She said not looking at him
Arnav: come

Arnav walked up to her and touched her shoulder but she gave him a stern look and moved back from his touch
Khushi: I don't need your help… so don't touch me
Arnav rolled his eyes and sighed and took hold of her hand which she then pulled away
Khushi: Arnav stop pushing your luck
Arnav: fine walk…

Khushi took her step but felt weak and was about to drop when Arnav carefully grabbed her "I told you… can you just push away your ego…" he looked at her
Khushi: yeah just like you did
Arnav: very funny… now come

Arnav held her hand and the other around her back and Khushi hand one her stomach and the other in Arnav's hand and they walked out and saw Aditya who then Khushi stopped…

Khushi: Adi I am going with Arnav…
Aditya: what!! But
Arnav: you heard her
Khushi: for a month… I will be back
Arnav looked at Khushi and felt so angry at her but then thought only if she knew what was going on in his mind and then held her hand tight and walked with her out of the room and he took her safety to his car made her sit in the car and with the seat belt on lose as she did have a big bump and he took the seat in the driving seat and he drove carefully back to RM… thinking about the baby and his Khushi in his house again he was happy and in this month he will win his Khushi heart again but that was going to be hard… he broke Khushi once because he had forced her to marry him and then he didn't believe her about their baby there won't be another… he had her now but after the month what if she doesn't forgive him she will go back to Aditya and he will take their baby… NO he shouted in his head THAT ISNT GOING TO HAPPEN… I DON'T CARE EVEN IF KHUSHI WONT FORGIVE ME… NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TO OUR BABY!!!

They arrived and Khushi looked scared she didn't want to go into the house but she had to… she got out and Arnav rushed to her and held her hand which she liked but didn't show it and he took her into the house and knocked at the door and Anjali opened it with a smile and she was shocked…

Anjali: Khushi?
Khushi looked at her and just rolled her eyes and looked away and saw Payal and she was about to run to her and then realized she couldn't… and she just smiled at her and she came running to Khushi.

Payal: Khushi what are you doing here?
Khushi: I have to complete stuff Jiji
Payal: what?... I told you guys to stay away from my sister why don't you understand
Nani: Khushi? Omg beta are you okay…?
Khushi looked at her she looked so worried and she didn't have the same twinkly she use to have as Nani always had this charm that would make you smile but she didn't have that she looked pale and very sick and Khushi had this weird feeling inside and then she slowly walked up to her even she was in pain but she couldn't see anyone else in pain, Arnav looked at her confused along with the others.

Khushi: Nani?
Nani looked up and she was surprised and a bit touched that Khushi called her Nani…
Nani: beta… you…
Khushi touched her cheek and Nani had tears in her eyes and she started to cough
Khushi: Nani… what's wrong with you…? You don't look well…? Arnav what's wrong with her
Anjali walked up to Nani and touched her shoulder
Anjali: she isn't feeling well
Khushi: what!!! Then why is she here!!! Why isn't she resting what the heck are you guys doing letting her stand around have you guys gone mad… and Jiji?
Payal: Khushi… I?
Khushi: you guys… a..r..e she was feeling breathless but she was fine…
Arnav: di please takes Nani into her room and make her rest… Khushi come you go rest you aren't that strong
Khushi: oh and Nani is?
Nani: beta doesn't worry about me… I will be fine now that I know you are here…
Khushi realized what she was going and her face dropped and then looked away she knew she would melt if something like this happen… so she just took Arnav's hand and then he took her to their room so she could rest.

Nani: Anjali did you see that… Khushi called me Nani… she cares about me even I have treated her bad
Anjali: Nani that's how Khushi is she will forgive… before she could finish her sentence
Payal: no you both got that wrong… Khushi can't see people in pain when she knows how they actually are she couldn't see Nani in pain so she reacted… nothing new in that Khushi is like that since day one!!

Payal walked away and leaving Nani and Anjali sad

Anjali took Nani into her room to rest.

Khushi sat down and closed her eyes and was shouting at herself for craving in so quickly
KHUSHI YOU ARE AN IDIOT… THEY PUT YOU IN SO MUCH PAIN AND NOW THEY ARE IN PAIN AND YOU CAN'T TAKE IT… BUT KHUSHI YOU ARE LIKE THIS YOU CANT SEE ANYONE IN PAIN… YOU WOULD HAVE REACTING LIKE THIS WITH ANY ONE…

Arnav: Khushi…
Khushi hum
Arnav: are you okay
Khushi: yeah Arnav why wouldn't be… I am with the guy who didn't believe me… in his house which I promised myself I would never enter again… his family that always make me weak because I don't know why but I have a weak spot for them… and I can't stand it Arnav!!!
Arnav: Khushi I am sorry but I need to do this!
Khushi: yeah for your ego… yourself and the ASR you are…
Arnav: Khushi I have my reasons and you will soon find out… and my other you already know why
Khushi: do I really?
Arnav: yes you do Khushi I told you I love you
Khushi closed her eyes and looked away
Khushi: when someone says I love you they should mean it and they should have the trust along with it… next you say that make sure you mean it
Arnav: okay… I love you…
Khushi rolled her eyes.

I am sorry if it was rubbish… I can't do these kind of ffs but I am trying… because I serious what Khushi smiling but I really can't… but anyway hope you liked it… comment and like please

Aaliya


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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update😊
I was mising this FF for a very long time. Feels good to read it

Khushi's talk with her baby was so cute 😃
So sad Khushi is believing that creep Aditiya 😡 & currently she is unaware that Arnav is doing all that he can to save their baby
Good to know that Arnav has realized his mistake but I think he has to work a lot more to regain her trust to win her back
Glad that Payal is really very strong & siding her sister
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter


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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved khushi's talk to the baby
I cannot believe she is believing adithiya...too bad she does not know what Arnav is doing
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Posted: 13 years ago
super updt

luv it

thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm reserving today because I'm not really in a mood to comment because I have some patches on the back that are irritating me in a way that I can not think properly what to write, and I don't want to write a short comment, because you deserve a long one! I'm sorry but you'll have to wait until tomorrow so I get rid of this annoying thing and try to get back to normal what I'm missing for 3 days. And i will read both FF tomorrow.
till now take care.

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Finally unresing it 😊.
What a update Aalya i don't know what to say it is really really beautiful and heart touching❤️, superb work dear
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Khushi's talk with the baby is really amazing, i truly loved it.
She called him "Swami" 😃 and they ha a little kind of eye look she saw him smiling and she started smaling too.
Loved the way Anav told to Aditya that she was going with him because she is his wife😃, a loved more that he cancelled the deal, when it come's to his loved one he can do anything even take loss in business.
I think Aditya can't harm Khushi or her baby because ASR is going to protect them.
Khushi still feel love for Raizada family even if she doesn't want to admit.
The last part was emotional, he said that he love her but she doesn't what to believe him😭.
But i loved this update really from the bottom of my heart and i mean it!! 🤗 🤗 ❤️
Continue as soon as possible, thanks for the pm and also for this wonderful update.
Edited by HK90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
khushi might hate asr but if he told her what he heard she would believe him thats the difference between khushi and asr awesome update she could not see nani in pain awesome update thanks for the pm

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